xXLockXx's Application Form

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Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: xXLockXx

-How old are you?: 13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Australia

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I have an awesome grasp on English

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am 13, and am currently in Year 8. I have started to play Dungeons and Dragons, and have a great grasp on roleplaying through ROBLOX games :P.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I should be playing 1-2 hours on the server weekdays, maybe 3-4 on the weekends. Homework may disrupt this, though

-How long have you played minecraft?: I have played since Alpha 1.2. So a while.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I know a lot of roleplaying rules and regulations. I have been roleplaying for 2 years now. All sorts of roleplaying! From angels to demons, from Undead Masters to Holy Paladins, from farmers to nobles. I have done em all.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect it to be a great server, especially after watching the new trailer (which is epic)

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on servers made by my mates daily, and sometimes play a PvP server hosted by Molten. I left that due to annoying people, and false statements laid against me.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Read and understood the rules. I agree to all of them. The Lore is a great story as well. I like my fantasy.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Orc, Elf, Human and Dwarf

-How did you hear about us?: The yogscast ;)

-Did you vote?: On all 3 links.

-What was your favourite Law?: I see what you are doing here. My favourite law is how you must remain in-character. Cant have an Orc acting like an elf now can we?

-What was your least favourite Law?: Thats a hard one... The mining and wood-cutting areas are annoying, but it must be done I suppose.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? xXLockXx

In-Character:

-Character Name: Lothar

-What is your Race?: Human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum  forum account: xXLockXx

-Biography: A maturing Adult who has fled from his home town after it was ravaged by forces of Evil. His whole family was wiped out, except for himself. As he ran from the burning village, he stopped and turned around. As he watched with horror, his father and mother were beheaded by a sort of skeletal monster. A creature clothed in black saw Lothar on the hill, and sent his soldiers after him. Lothar grabbed the dagger out of his belt, and killed most of the creatures. They fled, and the Black-robed creature disappeared in a puff of smoke. Lothar walked away from the village, finding his way towards Aegis. As he journeyed, he learnt many things about Aegis, including his attacker. The leader of the raid, the one enclosed in black, was a member of the Undead. When he learnt of this, he swore to avenge his family and friends by attempting to join the Ascended and help against the Undead and its legions of creatures.

-Character Age: 16

-Character Appearance: Green shirt with brown pants. Long sleeves for the shirt, which are white. Clothes are worn from his travel.

-Character Personality: Happy, Cheerful, and funny. But when somebody threatens his safety or the safety of others, he can be ruthless towards his foe.

-Your ambitions: To some day become a Knight, or go further into the ranks of the Ascended to help aid others with their problems.

-Can your character read or write?: He can read, but struggles with writing

-Can your character mine?: He can diggy some holes if he must (see what I did there?)

-Are you a capable builder? He can build efficiently, but for awesome features, he would need plans or blueprints.

-Can you wield a sword?: A great swordsman.

-Enjoy Farming?: If he must, he will.

-Does your character have any special skills?: When faced with the forces of evil, he gets angry and is more efficient at sword fighting, due to his past.

-A screenshot of your skin:

[Taiga 764]

Your Application Has Been:

DENIED

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge upon World [X]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [X]

Power/Metagaming [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

Other Comments: Everything was okay, except for your application. Aegis IS the world, and you can't just find yourself inside, like an Alien (Whoa... Aliens in Aegis?!). Re-read the lore and add some details about cities, places, and nations, and I'm sure you'll get accepted!

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account!

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