[✗] [Pending] Whitelist Application For Jetwing10

[Jetwing10 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Jetwing10

What timezone are you in?: EST

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the content and interactions on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? (You won’t be denied for being under 13):

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: You can break a few block but no mass destruction griefing when doing heists. 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): Nope

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: YouTube video 

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or use our wiki definitions as a reference, but make sure that you write the write them in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is Roleplaying?: Playing as someone, not yourself. It's basically acting a character you created.

What is Metagaming?: Gaming knowledge from ooc. Basically using the knowledge you know irl.

What is Power-emoting (Powergaming)?: Demanding something for example "Steve broke Tim's arm." and like you guys said in the rules, it's demanding that Tim broke his arm and not choosing like "Steve tried to break Tim's arm". Where Tim could choose.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Carl

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Human (Heartlanders)

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 19

Biography  (This is one of the most important sections of the application. Please take your time and make it a decent paragraph long. Read up on your character's race and be sure to add at least one accurate reference from the server lore): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) They come from The Grand Kingdom; They never really left the kingdom because they were afraid what he might find behind the walls.; 1601.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) They whistle a lot; Knows how to steal very well and always hated most rich jerks.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) A good thief

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Stealing, mercenary work.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Being a good person and staying loyal.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) My Skin

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)  I read a comment and it said it didn't work on mac. I'll also put a skin website down so you can see better here.

 

[MrMineLoveDude 299]

 

Unfortunately you’ve failed to meet the needed requirements for your application.

 

Your Application has been denied for the following reason(s):

• Please make sure to answer every question! Even though you only missed one, it's helpful to hear input from you. The question you missed is: 'Are you aware the content and interactions on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? (You won't be denied for being under 13).'

 

 

• At the moment, your definitions for roleplaying and metagaming are a bit simple. Perhaps you can try adding an example to help show that you have a thorough understanding of the terms. By clicking on the words above, you'll be redirected to their wiki pages that'll help further explain their meanings. You can also read about all three on our definitions page on the forums. Remember to include these responses in your own words and not to plagiarize!

 

• Your biography is relatively short, it is required to be a lengthy paragraph also including one piece of server lore. Even though you did include a date, it's irrelevant and doesn't specifically tie to anything you mentioned previously and you've included the Grand Kingdom which is associated with the dwarves though Carl is a human. 

 

• Currently, the answers provided for Carl's ambitions, strengths and weaknesses are vague and simple. I'd like to ask if you could add more detail to them and truly explain these aspects of Carl. An easy way to prompt more information is to ask yourself 'why' or adding more to make him more interesting and unique!

 

• And lastly, I ask that you please explain the appearance of Carl instead of simply saying 'My Skin'. Many things can come to mind to help you further describe your persona such as height, body type, facial hair and scars.

 

Do not fear, this simply means the corrections were not made to the application or were not fully met. As always, if you have any further questions or need assistance, make sure to send a message through the forums. Please take your time to correct and improve on the your application before re-applying to LoTC, as we will only review up to 5 applications in the calendar month. Good Luck!

[MrMineLoveDude 299]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.