[✗] [Pending]Whitelist Application

[Aregorm 0]

Minecraft name: "Aregorm"

Age: 14

Timezone: UTC +1

Have you read rules and agreed them? Yes.

Are you aware the content and interactions on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13: Yes

What's the rule you agree with the most?: "When gathering resources, you must clean up any floating leaves or stone"

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don't make sense?: No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was looking for a medieval/fantasy server on the Internet

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/167172-✗-pendingwhitelist-application/

Have you logged into the server yes?: Yes

 

 

What is roleplaying?: It is playing a role of a character who isn't you.

What is powergaming?: It is forcing another player to some action. Example of powergaming "/me slices you in half, obviously you can not instantly slice someone in half. If they have a weapon they could parry it, if they have HEAVY armor they wouldn't be sliced in half, probably just cut or so".

What is metagaming?: It is using knowledge out of game in game / using knowledge outside of your character's knowledge

 

Character's name: Aregorm

Character's sex: Male

Character's race: Human, Highlanders(if I have to precise Kaedrin)

Character's age: 30

 

Biography: Aregorm was born in 1597 in a small house near Vjorhelm. He lived peacefully with his parents. When he was 15, Orcs attacked his house. Because they needed slaves they captured him and his parents. While they were in captivity his father taught him how to fight with sword. They tried to escape about 200 times. When Aregorm was 22, they tried again. This time they were lucky and freed themselves. When Orcs saw Aregorm's (and his family) missing, they started looking for them. They found his parents. They were really angry so they killed Aregorm's parents. Aregorm run away. Then he started his 5 years journey. When he arrived to first city he found, he started working in some farmer's field. He worked there for 2 months. For his work he received a lot of food and a map. With a map he went back home.
When he came back home he hunted for food and worked on his field. Every day he trained fighting with the sword and bow.

 

Personality Traits: He is very introverted. He likes his home and hates Orcs.

Ambitions: He wants to avenge his parents death.

Strengths/Talent: He is great at fighting with the sword and bow.

Weakness/Inabilities: He is weak at Alchemy and magic.

Appearance: He is 6ft. He has very dark brown eyes. He has brown hair. He wears leather clothes.

 

BECAUSE OF LIMIT I CANNOT UPLOAD A FILE WITH A SCREENSHOT SO IF YOU NEED SCREENSHOT LOOK ON MY PREVIOUS APPLICATION.

 

ANWSERS FOR ADMINS QUESTIONS

Having one's parents randomly murdered by orcs is unfathomably cliche and overused. If you wish for your characters parents to die needlessly, please provide atleast a slightly more original source for your character's parents' demise.: I have been spending a lot of time to create this story. I didn't copy any part of it. And I wasn't inspired by any other application.

Your character was a wanderer for 5 years? did he wander in the wilderness for 5 years and than find a city? how did he survive?: No his whole trip to home took 5 years. So this time includes time he spent in this city.

Please add some server lore to your character's biography, such as where he came from, or what city he interacted with.: Done.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Pending...

 

-Having one's parents randomly murdered by orcs is unfathomably cliche and overused. If you wish for your characters parents to die needlessly, please provide atleast a slightly more original source for your character's parents' demise.

 

-Your character was a wanderer for 5 years? did he wander in the wilderness for 5 years and than find a city? how did he survive?

 

-Please add some server lore to your character's biography, such as where he came from, or what city he interacted with.

 

-You have 24 hours to fix the listed problems, failure to do within 24 hours will result in being denied.

 

-Please send me a PM once you've made the needed changes, or if you have any questions.

 

Denied.

 

-This is the 2nd time I've asked you to change the 'parents murdered by orcs' trope in your character's biography, which still is the same.

 

- Again, the in the city for 2 months still leaves the question. Did he simply live in the wilderness for the 4 years and 10 months?

 

-You may re-apply in 3 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.