efeboztepe 4 Share Posted November 10, 2017 What’s your Minecraft account name?: lordbarboosa What timezone are you in?: GMT+2 How old are you?: 17 Are you aware the content and interactions on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes I did What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Meta-gaming Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No I understand them all very well How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: When I was looking for servers on the web Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): I did Definitions What is Roleplaying?: Roleplaying is portraying a character that you created and acting like how they would act. What is Metagaming?: Gaining an information out of game that's normally impossible for your character to know in game and using that information to your advantage. What is Power-emoting (Powergaming)?: Doing an emote that's impossible for your character to do for example (He is surrounded with 7 people with no weapons on his hand but he takes all of them down with his bare hands.) In-Character Information Character’s name: Heagan Keats Character’s sex: Male Character’s race: HumanCharacter’s age: 24 Biography : When Heagen Keats was a kid he was living in Devirad. His father was a travelling merchant and an old swordsmen. He has been learning how to use a sword since his birth. When he was thirteen years old his home was attacked by the undead. When this was happening Heagen ran away. He tried to survive in the harsh conditions outside for 6 months. That's when he met Verian in Sutica. He became a slave under Verian's father and worked there for 2 years. He suffered even a tougher life as a slave in the home. Verian's father beat him occasionally and even tortured him. He was not allowed to speak or even breath sometimes this changed his personality greatly and made him WHO he is today. They became close with Verian in these 2 years and after this Heagan saw that Verian was also getting abused by both of his parents beyond what should be considered 'normal'. One day when Verian was getting beaten by his father Heagan witnessed this and without thinking for a second he rushed forward and stabbed the father in his chest. The father was vomiting blood out of his mouth and trying to scream in agony but Heagan was holding his mouth tight. Verian then decided to also end his mother's life because he was afraid that she would hand them to the officers so they carefully went upstairs where they saw his mother sleeping. Heagan tightly gripped his knife but Verian stopped him and took the knife instead and stabbed his mother continuously. After this they fled far from their home until they couldn't see any lights in the distance. After some years they are now an inseperable duo and continue their crime related life to satisfy their hunger for blood. Personality Traits: He is comfortable and relaxed around the people he trusts but he doesn't talk much and he is cold blooded when he is around strangers because of his past. Ambitions: To serve Verian until his death and be by his side at every moment as well as improve his sword skills even more. Strengths/Talents: Is good at using swords and he is pretty agile. He has interest in books so he reads a lot which is how he obtained his extensive language knowledge talent. Weaknesses/Inabilities: He is complete colourblind and can easiley resort to violance. He also has hard time making decisions on his own when not with Verian. Appearance: He has scars around his body because of the beatings he got in the past, he has hazel eyes and long tied brown hair. Skin: Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cordial__ 230 Share Posted November 10, 2017 Under Review Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cordial__ 230 Share Posted November 10, 2017 Greetings Applicant! Your application has been put on [Pending] for the following reason(s): . I would like for you to define your character's strengths and weaknesses a bit more. Perhaps dig into your characters backstory and and pull out some more traits from it. Balance the positives with the negatives as well; Have each category loosely formed around the other. . Please flesh out your character's ambitions as well. The 'swordsman' line is very cliche. As mentioned previously, you could dig more into your character's backstory and traits as to how his ambition should look. . This isn't something about your application in general, but if you would like to continue your character down a path of villainy, I would recommend taking a good read of the villainy rules, found here. Just a suggestion :) Do not worry, this is not the end! This just means that your application does not quite meet our standards. Please make the stated changes within24 hours. Failure to do so will result in a denial of your application. To make the changes, do not make a new application. Instead, click edit at the bottom of the page! If you have any questions, or would like me to review your application again, feel free to privately message me, either in-game or on the forums. Remember, you have 24 hours to make the previously mentioned changes. Have a nice day. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cordial__ 230 Share Posted November 10, 2017 ~ Greetings Applicant! ~ Your application has been [Accepted]! On behalf of the Application Team, I'd like to welcome you to the server as an official member! Please wait patiently for an Application Team member to whitelist you. While you wait, you may browse the wiki, found here, or you may browse more Human Lore, found here. If you have the software Discord installed, it is recommended that you join the New Player Help Discord Chat, which is where you can be assigned a Player Helper to help get you acclimated to the server! The link can be found here. If you have any questions, feel free to privately message me by clicking on my profile and messaging me. Have a nice day! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cordial__ 230 Share Posted November 10, 2017 Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Player whitelist pending. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cordial__ 230 Share Posted November 10, 2017 Whitelist application has been accepted, player is now whitelisted in game. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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