[Denied]lakeels application

[lakeel 1]

Out-Of-Character: lane

-Minecraft Account Name: lakeel

-How old are you?: 20

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: EST america

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: im american arnt I? I speak english

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: crazy,fun, creative, and all around handsome . I dont really know how else to say about myself

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 2 hours weekdays and infinate on weekends

-How long have you played minecraft?: several months

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: yes I do. Ever sence I joined w.o.w. I play world of warcraft and im a lvl 68 troll hunter. I pown everyone at RP

-What do you expect this server will be like?: well im hoping that its not gonna be overcrowded and not over-run with random buildings and looted houses. And I hope the chatbox wont be full to the max when I play either. But I really hope this server isnt like one of those where I haft to do so many confusing things just to be allowed to build a house

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I play mostly on smaller friend owned servers. I just wanna play one thats up 24/7

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: yes and yes

-Name the 4 races on this server. Human,dwarf,elf,orc,undead,ascended, halfling,ect

-How did you hear about us?: minecraft forums.com

-Did you vote?: yep

-What was your favourite Law? Dont destroy the landscaping

-What was your least favourite Law?: cant really think of any. All is well with your rule my lord

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: lakeel

In-Character: lakeel

-Character Name: lakeel

-What is your Race?: IM AN ELF!!

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: lakeel

-Biography: lakeel is an elf of many kinds. raised by humans hes travled many lands looking for a place to settle and build a home start a small buisness and become something important. Hes been alone in the wilderness for so long with little contact hes become a bit untrusting of others. But it becomes easy for him to trust others after hes known them for a little bit. The last time lakeel tried settling down in a small village located in the middle of a dence forest he worked as a builder and a fortifyier. He built many homes for his fellow human friends and even built the protective walls that surrounded the village. Till one day an orc war party came and pillaged everything. They torched every house lakel had built, they slaughtered all his fellow villagers, and they even burned down his mighty wall. lakeel tried his best to fend off the orcish raiders with his homemade bow and save his many crations from the seering flames but the war partys leader came charging straight at lakeel on a armored boar and clubed lakeel over the head knocking him to the ground. lakeel layed there near death surrounded by the roaring flames. In his state of half-consciousness and fire filling his sight his soul slipping from his body the essence of fire seeped into his escaping soul. lakeel soul was suddenly jerked back into its boddy as an injured villager tried to wake him. The villager quickly drug lakeel to the safety of an elvish grove. lakeel woke leaned up agenst a shrine with a dead villager laying flat on the ground with an orcish arrow sticking out of his back. lakeel soon regained his movement and managed to stand. He looked around to get his bearings. He feels a forign warm feeling through out his body. Images of fire flashed before him and visions of orcish villages up in flames. He looks into a puddle and sees a flaming orb where his pupils are suppost to be. There was a sudden flash and lakeel fall back to the ground. The visions were gone and the fire in his eyes had faded. He picked up his bow and stumbled into the wilderness not looking back.

-Character Age: im not sure.... sence elves live a lot longer id think in human years hes about 20 years

-Character Appearance: a rather handsom and princely looking high elf. he could easily pass off as a prince or a rich trader, or even a sucessful landlord. his silk cape weaved of enchanted blue butterfly silk. he has the hair of and envish god which covers up the scar the ork made on his head. standing at 8ft 2 inches lakeel is slightly taller them the average elf but the taller yu are the better you are with a bow

-Character Personality: lakeel is a but cautious when it comes to being around people due to his solitude in the wilderness but after a short while people can easily gain his trust. Due to the dramatization of the orc raid and bits of fire infusing into his soul he has a weird nack for fire despite his love of wooden buildings. When he sees fire it sucks in his attention and slowy moves him into a state of being a pyromaniac. When theres a building going up in flames lakeel goes into a state of madness and dances around in the flames. Only the pain of him burning or the sight of his creations burning will snap him out of his madness. When conflict comes his way (especially with orcs) he gets the urge to burn and pillage the enameys buildings. On a happyier note lakeel is known for his creativity and building skills . Plus he has a sence of humor and is single (thats right ladies. This hunky elf is single) dispite his shy and lonly nature lakeel has a thirst for leadership and to be surrounded by a loving kingdom who will see him as the greatest king ever. due to his long time with humans hes become accustomed to the human building style and will commonly build with there design

-Your ambitions: lakeel looks forward to building a grand home, possably build a forge, and eventually become either A. and important government person. Or B. become a great archer to defend king and country. but on the top of lakeels list is to gather a group of followers from all races and venture out into the wilderness and found a beautiful city where all are welcome...even orcs dispite the bad history with lakeel.

-Can your character read or write?: yes they can

-Can your character mine?: yep its just like chopping wood....but harder (ever heard of an iron tree? lol)

-Are you a capable builder? Yep. Cant argue with you there

-Can you wield a sword?: I can but a bow works just as well. I perfer to stay at range and kill while melee tanks keep the enemys at bay

-Enjoy Farming?: yep. Especially when its profitable

-Does your character have any special skills?: im real good at working with wooden building materials. Im great with roof design and building fortress like walls.

-A screenshot of your skin: its on here http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/16554-lakeels-second-application/page__p__71528__hl__lakeel__fromsearch__1#entry71528

-Other Information: im handsome

[TeaLulu 1783]

Denied.

For any of the following issues:

1) Your biography is: incoherent, not formatted properly, not long enough, not detailed, only focuses on 1 event rather than your life as a whole, exhibits qualities of powergaming, needs to talk about your past and probable future, or needs to be expanded, or did not fit lore.

2) You did not answer the "What do you know about roleplaying?" question in a satisfactory manner. (Hint: Tell us WHAT roleplaying is, in your own words.)

3) Your skin picture is not a screenshot of your skin in use, not provided, the link is broken, or not appropriate for this server.

4) You failed to fill out the application in it's entirety.

5) You did not use the proper application format.

6) You posted more than 1 application in a 3 day period of time.

7) You bumped your post.

8) Your application is plagiarized or too similar to another application I have seen.

Please keep in mind the following:

1) This server is a ROLEPLAY server, we expect any applicants to know WHAT exactly that means and any relevant terms.

2) This server is NOT for everyone. We can afford to be choosey with who we allow to play on it. It is NOT our obligation to accept you; Rather, it is our obligation to maintain a fun and safe environment for all of our current users and any future users.

3) Our server, our rules. If we say you need a Villain Application to play your character, then you NEED a Villain Application.

4) Re-posting your application within 3 days is grounds for it to be denied.

5) You MUST adhere to the Lore; You can and SHOULD read your race's relevant Roleplay forum to get a better idea of what it is like to roleplay that race.

6) You can and SHOULD read the Tutorials and Guides forum.

[lakeel 1]

Denied.

For any of the following issues:

1) Your biography is: incoherent, not formatted properly, not long enough, not detailed, only focuses on 1 event rather than your life as a whole, exhibits qualities of powergaming, needs to talk about your past and probable future, or needs to be expanded, or did not fit lore.

2) You did not answer the "What do you know about roleplaying?" question in a satisfactory manner. (Hint: Tell us WHAT roleplaying is, in your own words.)

3) Your skin picture is not a screenshot of your skin in use, not provided, the link is broken, or not appropriate for this server.

4) You failed to fill out the application in it's entirety.

5) You did not use the proper application format.

6) You posted more than 1 application in a 3 day period of time.

7) You bumped your post.

8) Your application is plagiarized or too similar to another application I have seen.

Please keep in mind the following:

1) This server is a ROLEPLAY server, we expect any applicants to know WHAT exactly that means and any relevant terms.

2) This server is NOT for everyone. We can afford to be choosey with who we allow to play on it. It is NOT our obligation to accept you; Rather, it is our obligation to maintain a fun and safe environment for all of our current users and any future users.

3) Our server, our rules. If we say you need a Villain Application to play your character, then you NEED a Villain Application.

4) Re-posting your application within 3 days is grounds for it to be denied.

5) You MUST adhere to the Lore; You can and SHOULD read your race's relevant Roleplay forum to get a better idea of what it is like to roleplay that race.

6) You can and SHOULD read the Tutorials and Guides forum.

-.- could you please just tell me what i did wrong. i put alot of work into this and id really hate to do a completely new one

[Sealyan Serinde 1]

-.- could you please just tell me what i did wrong. i put alot of work into this and id really hate to do a completely new one

Just a guess, but maybe its your grammar throughout your app. Also, your bio is kinda weird and doesn't really fit in with the lore of aegis in any way.

You also didn't exactly explain what RP is to you and how well you will cooperate with the regulations of Rp'ing in the server. You should probably elaborate on the question "What do you know about Rp'ing, etc."

Also, you should add specificity to you responses regarding your charater's past, future, and ambitions.

Read the guides provided on the forums, the GM's really want you to show effort and want to see that you will benefit the community atmosphere with your addition.

[lakeel 1]

Just a guess, but maybe its your grammar throughout your app. Also, your bio is kinda weird and doesn't really fit in with the lore of aegis in any way.

You also didn't exactly explain what RP is to you and how well you will cooperate with the regulations of Rp'ing in the server. You should probably elaborate on the question "What do you know about Rp'ing, etc."

Also, you should add specificity to you responses regarding your charater's past, future, and ambitions.

Read the guides provided on the forums, the GM's really want you to show effort and want to see that you will benefit the community atmosphere with your addition.

ok thx. ill just go edit my old application that hasnt been judged yet sence i cant post a new one