[Denied]Cody_man14's application

[Nalkona 1]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:Cody_man14

-How old are you?:15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Mountain time zone/Usa

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:as far as i have seen i have a fairly good "grip" on the English language.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:a dnd and pathfinder lover who has enjoyed mincraft for quite some time and is learning to recognize good servers when i see them

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:1 or more hours every other day

-How long have you played minecraft?:just less than a year

-What do you know about roleplaying?:i know about player vs character knowledge and hold this rule in high esteem also i have had 10 or more years of experience with dungeons and dragons paper and pen and 2 or 3 of pathfinder and 1 or 2 months of pathfinder society

-What do you expect this server will be like?:i expect it to be a realistic death and life adventure of many races allowing for an great time and a good story

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:i have played on avalon,epiclight,and sexyminecraft mostly however i left the first to cause they shut down and the last one cause i was tired of being kill farmed

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:yes i concur with the rules and agree to abide by them at all times

-Name the 4 races on this server:human, dwarf, elf and orc

-How did you hear about us?:it came recommended upon the resigning from the last server i was on by Senactra

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:Nalkona

In-Character:

-Character Name: Nalkona Feltrod

-What is your Race?:Elf

-Biography: an spirit who has gained a body through the simple wish of a princess come through a small seep in the veil has come to warn and help shut off this seep so as to not let the spirits get used for other earthly purposes.

-Character Age:45

-Character Appearance: a sleek body rather small with a prominant chin with a sharp jaw bone. keen ear that come to a sharp fine point.he has silky blond hair with clumsy long legs and rather large feet

-Character Personality: he is kind toward his fellow kind however when it comes to others it takes a great deal of proving to show their trustworthy though if he has to he will accommodate to the immediate their needs. He has amazing social skills aquired to warn the people of the seep

-Your ambitions:to warn all of the seep

-Can your character read or write?: yes

-Can your character mine?: yes

-Are you a capable builder?:no

-Can you wield a sword?:no

-Enjoy Farming?:rather and loves a good evening in the woods

-Does your character have any special skills?:amazing at convincing people and a great leader

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information: i do not require any special treatment please treat me as you will the others. my sister already voted so it wont let me.Also i already roleplayed most of this out with the elven princess in game.

[NairOG 1]

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

-Contains elements of meta-gaming.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been.

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http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/7515-example-application-bubbli/

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