[Denied]~Applitcation~

[kaleb1701 5]

-Minecraft Account Name:

-Kaleb1701

-How old are you?:

-15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

-+8 hours Perth, Western Australia

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

-Yes, fluently

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

-I am a friendly and outgoing person who loves to be around and with other people. I enjoy helping others out and having a joke.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

-20 hours give or take

-How long have you played Minecraft?:

-i have played minecraft for about 8 months, but have come along way in building due to being a fast learner!

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?:

-role playing is speaking to others in first person acting out scenario's to make the game more interesting.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

-I expect this server will be very very fun interesting and enjoyable. i have struggled to find a decent server to play on, this looks like a hit.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

-i have played on MANY other servers including my own with friends, i have never left them unless they stop. i only temporeraly stop playing them.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

-i have read and understand the rules of the server.

-Name the 4 races on this server:

-Orc, Elven, human and Dwarves

-How did you hear about us?:

-i was searching google with my friend for a good server and stumbled upon this.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

-Kaleb1701

In-Character:

-Character Name:

-Zerin

-What is your Race?:

-Elven

-Biography:

-A friendly outgoing elf ready to have some fun and hang out with others, he wants to make some close friends and settle down in the elven villiage. Once settled in will get a job and a house.As a young elven boy growing up with his father and brother Tobaz(5upernov4)in a small village life he had a reasonably quite upbringing learning about bows and hunting. As he lived in a small village everyone knew everyone and this meant he didn't have any major troubles as he grew up, though he would get his thrills by pickpocketing people every now and again and because it was a small town he got away with it most of the time and the times he did get caught he would just give the money back and all would be well. As he grew up he started to learn a little about swords but had no real talent with them but over time could swing and defend well. When he was about 16 his father died in battle with the Undead and his world came crashing down leaving him and his brother to look after each other. This was the first time something serious had hit him in his life and he didn't know how to deal with it he managed to turn his bad thoughts into creativity and started studying to become a arcitect, and started earning enough money to look after him self and his brother, sadly his brother was upset by what happened and became slightly rebelious he started stealing earning what he can to have an input on their lifes. Soon though his brother got arrested and was forced to do labour cutting trees and mining, although this gave him a new skill and he could make a small living with his dodgey mining and woodcutting. Zerin(I) started setteling down got a really good job andwas happy. Tobaz(his brother) wanted a new start and Zerin didnt want to leave him, so they both headed out to find somewere to start fresh. They visited different elven cities to sell the logs he had cut, growing a pasion for traveling and from then on he knew he wanted to journey around Aegis.

-Character Age:

-19

-Character Appearance:

-young browny-green clothes, medium-long straight hair, arm bracers, pointy ears, light blue eyes and slightly skinny.

-Character Personality:

-Friendly, Outgoing, mischevious, and fun

-Your ambitions:

-to make friends, and have a great time in the world of Aegis

-Can your character read or write?:

-Yes he can read in french, english and writes english.

-Can your character mine?:

-Yes but it is definatly not his profession.

-Are you a capable builder?:

-He is a great architect and may look into it for his future

-Can you wield a sword?:

-when he was growing up his father taught himself and his brother to wield a sword and is now a great fighter.

-Enjoy Farming?:

-He does enjoy farming and finds it clears his mind of bad thoughts, leaving him at peace

-Does your character have any special skills?:

-He is great with a bow, and believes himself as a bit of a ninja. and again a great builder.

-A screenshot of your skin:

-I cannot upload the picture due to issue with the file being too large because i extended my answers and rewrote alot, you can find file in my other post if you wish.

Thanks, Please consider me..

Regards kaleb1701

[Whitebeard 126]

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-read-first-chevaliers-guide-to-posting-a-good-application/

[kaleb1701 5]

Dude

1: My grammer is fine.

2:My biography is fine.

3:I didnt get told to include the lore of Aegis.

4:That didnt have anything to do with the biography of my character.

5:I copied this layout from the recommended post.

6:I was doing this for up to an hour.

7:My skin isnt RP? i downloaded it from your list of recommeded skins?

8:I did explain i couldnt, and if you wanted it so bad you could find it in my old post that ALSO got denied...

9:You didnt ask for a skin link in what the layout should should like.

10:I have read other applications and some shorter have been accepted?

Do you get joy in denying people, and if you going to deny i would appreaciate some reasons why mine got denied not other peoples... obviously you couldnt careless.. Also no offense to this person, but my application is better in most aspects to this one? and it got accepted? http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/223-frankoo123s-whitelist-application/

[kaleb1701 5]

Dude

1: My grammer is fine.

2:My biography is fine.

3:I didnt get told to include the lore of Aegis.

4:That didnt have anything to do with the biography of my character.

5:I copied this layout from the recommended post.

6:I was doing this for up to an hour.

7:My skin isnt RP? i downloaded it from your list of recommeded skins?

8:I did explain i couldnt, and if you wanted it so bad you could find it in my old post that ALSO got denied...

9:You didnt ask for a skin link in what the layout should should like.

10:I have read other applications and some shorter have been accepted?

Do you get joy in denying people, and if you going to deny i would appreaciate some reasons why mine got denied and not why other people havnt... obviously you couldnt care less.. Also no offense to this person, but my application is better in most aspects to this one? and it got accepted? http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/223-frankoo123s-whitelist-application/

i mean i really want to go on this server, but if its too much effort why bother.. If you want good members, then learn your priorities? i would be a dedicated member and play my part well.. sorry but this server and its leaders have let me down... disapointed :/

[B3rZ3rkA 0]

yes i agree with kaleb1701 because it is a good server and i like role playing but it is to hard to get in.

[Skippy 2466]

Guys, don't tell the GM's and FM's how to do their jobs.

[kaleb1701 5]

Can I please have someones opinion on why I got denied? The link in my other reply obviously shows an up and down acceptance procedure?

[Skippy 2466]

Your biography could link to the lore a bit more. Also you can bold and separate the questions to make it look neater. If you have any more questions just PM me I'll be glad to help! -Skippy

[kaleb1701 5]

Ok, thanks :)

[B3rZ3rkA 0]

How do you PM ?