Kyuubimaru's application

[kyuubi 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Kyuubimaru

-How old are you?: 14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: +8 GMT

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I think i kinda do have a good grip on English, but i use alot of internet language such as u, i c etc.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Most of the day I would be at school studying and stuff. When I get home I would do my homework, play some minecraft or CoD the go to bed.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I would say around 12 hrs weekly 29 if i don't play CoD or go anywhere for the weekends.

-How long have you played minecraft?: 7 or 8 months

-What do you know about roleplaying?: Playing from the eyes of the character you have chosen and using all his senses to learn, adventure and have fun.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: A good server with lots of adventure and exploring to be done. It looks like a server full of fun and excitement.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I've been to alot of servers. Around 100 or more. I didn't actually leave them, I only went in and looked around and check out what does the server have to offer. So far I've found 2 servers that are to my liking, excluding this one.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes i have

-Name the 4 races on this server: Elves, Dwarf, Human and Orc

-How did you hear about us?: Through some of the forums I've read through

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Kyuubimaru is user and Kyuubi is the display name

In-Character:

-Character Name: Kyuubi (Nine Tail)

-What is your Race?: Orc

-Biography: Kyuubi is a mystical orc that interacts with other orcs and possibly other races if they are friendly. He spends most of his time mining and building the world that he once dreams of and hopes that it would be fulfilled. If not approached with care, he will BITE!

-Character Age: 20. Still young and adventurous

-Character Appearance: Green orc shaman with long white hair. Wear a mask over his face to mask his appearance

-Character Personality: Quiet,cunning and vicious. If approached by stranger he will prepare for combat.

-Your ambitions: To dig and create a world that he once imagined and to create a world for the best.

-Can your character read or write?: Not very well.

-Can your character mine?: Yes, very well in fact.

-Are you a capable builder?: Yes very capable in making different structures.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes, he wields a sword and fights with all his might.

-Enjoy Farming?: no, he doesn't enjoy farming. He will farm if food is in need.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Yes, his thinking skills and profession in mining are the greatest skills that he holds.

-A screenshot of your skin: http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/warcraft-iii-orc-shaman/

-Other Information: This is an awesome server! It looks fun and exciting i hope i am accepted :)

[Jadles 85]

Your answers are too short in places.

Your Character Biography is far too short.

Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

[Respiren 524]

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Guide to Posting a Good Application:

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