[Denied]drake042's ap

[drake042 1]

Out-Of-Character:tyler

-Minecraft Account Name:drake042

-How old are you?:13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:eastern time

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:i like to play xbox360 i am a gamer and i am a team player i love minecraft and enjoy playing with other people

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:40

-How long have you played Minecraft?:6 months

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?: it is when you play in character

-What do you expect this server will be like?:alot of people and wars and have a good gaming comunity

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:adoncraft i left them because thye were mean to me

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:yes

-Name the 4 races on this server:human,elf,dwarf,orc

-How did you hear about us?:youtube and a friend

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:drake042

In-Character:

-Character Name: tark

-What is your Race?:dwarf

-Biography: I am a young dwarf i live in a small village and i have a brother i have always dreamed of adventuring off to the wilderness that lurks outside my walls and i finaly have.my name is tark and i am a good miner i have a really small family my village had been raided two years back and my family and i are the only ones who escaped i had a sister but she died at birth and my father died saving us i always think about him i just cant stop i have a feeling he is out there still but there is no hope.

-Character Age:400

-Character Appearance:light brown,gotee,long braided beard,short hair,

-Character Personality: happy,crazy,

-Your ambitions:to drink to the death,to defeat orc's,lots of coins

-Can your character read or write?:yes

-Can your character mine?:yes

-Are you a capable builder?:yes

-Can you wield a sword?:yes

-Enjoy Farming?:yes

-Does your character have any special skills?:

-A screenshot of your skin:http://imageshack.us/content_round.php?page=done&l=img510/8505/20111018200237.png&via=mupload&newlp=1

-Other Information:

[TheAlmightyOst 47]

Denied for the following:

-Biography too short.

-Bad punctuation.

-Bad spelling.

-Answers too short.

-You failed to answer what is roleplaying?

-Your application lacks effort.

[drake042 1]

Denied for the following:

-Biography too short.

-Bad punctuation.

-Bad spelling.

-Answers too short.

-You failed to answer what is roleplaying?

-Your application lacks effort.

your a ****** like really

[TheAlmightyOst 47]

your a ****** like really

Hmm

[Alana (Previously Latsi) 136]

Drake, you have no right to talk to the members of the team like that.

[Undeadflayme 0]

u cant talk to him like that. LOTC is looking for good roleplayers so they have to be tough, but u should never turn down any advise he gives u. ive sent in 3 apps and havn't got accepted yet but eacj time my app gets better so u should do the same.

[Nero 347]

Don't overreact and get mad at Moderators. If anything, you want to get on a moderator's good side. Just fix your application accordingly to what people884 said and you should be able to play on LoTC in no time! But first I think you should apologize to the moderator team.