Unaidedsteak's application

[unaidedsteak 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: unaidedsteak

-How old are you?: i am 14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT London.

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: i believe so. but everyone makes mistakes now and then

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: as i am 14 i have to go to school 5 days a week. i start school at 9:00 and finish at 3:00 pm i come home. eat something. then play on my pc till i get bored or have to go to bed. some days i will go out with my friends when the weather is good. ( good ol' sunny England)

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: most likely unless im on holiday. about 10 hours a week

-How long have you played Minecraft?: i am not entirely sure. all i know is iv played since the alpha stages

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?: well. i am relatively new to roleplaying. to me roleplaying is having a life inside a game. to me its about playing a fantasy person or someone/thing iv always wanted to be/do. and also to be part of something amazing

-What do you expect this server will be like?: i have heard good things from about this server. hopefully it will be fun and entertain me for a long time

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: i have played on tones of servers. most recently Herocraft, i left it because the map was too crowded and everywhere i mined i would break into someone Else's mine. very annoying

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: i have.

-Name the 4 races on this server: humans, orcs, elves, dwarves

-How did you hear about us?: i was taking a look around minestatus. and also i have been watching a series about your server

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: unaidedsteak

In-Character:

-Character Name: Dolthal

-What is your Race?: Dwarf

-Biography: i am the mighty Dolthal. created from the ashes from the great fire. my people feared me as i was uncontrollable and ruthless until i met an elven mistress name Airene she taught me to control myself. and now i am a feared warrior and a kind dwarf

-Character Age: 175.

-Character Appearance: dirty but looked after. black hair and beard

-Character Personality: kind, helpful.

-Your ambitions: to have a war. but also to settledown in my own town and be wealthy

-Can your character read or write?: yes

-Can your character mine?: of course im a dwarf

-Are you a capable builder?: i can build simple structures. and some more complex ones too

-Can you wield a sword?: yes i am a capable warrior

-Enjoy Farming?: i do not enjoy farming, but i have to feed myself

-Does your character have any special skills?: very intelligent and good on the battlefield

-A screenshot of your skin: http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/502/20111026182601.png/

-Other Information: hope to see you soon!

[Jadles 85]

Your answers are too short.

Your character biography is too short.

Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

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-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

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-Your application was too short.

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