linknil1's application take 2

[linknil1 0]

Minecraft Account Name:linknil1

How old are you?:17

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: central usa

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a senior in highschool. I enjoy minecraft,magic the gathering and d&d.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: roughly 7-8 hours

How long have you played minecraft?: roughly 1 year

What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: i have not been roleplaying very long but i do play d&d and i feel that gives me some experence in the field of rp

What do you expect this server will be like?: an escape from mundane life

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them? i have played on the capn's coast and i did not leave it it is going through renovations

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: yes and i have agreed. plus you have very excellent lore about your races.

Name the 4 races on this server. orc human dwarf and elf

How did you hear about us?: i didnt i was just looking up servers

-Did you vote?: yes

What was your favourite Law?:your settling disputes by fine or battle

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? linknil1

Character Name:Liatis

What is your Race?:elf

Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: linknil1

Biography: Liatis stared off in a small clan of elves. His family was a small part of the community there. his father was a hunter and his mother a healer. But there was something different about Liatis he could hunt exceptionally well but whenever he caught any thing the towns people would look at him in disgust. He was cast out of most functions and felt as if he were not supposed to be in that clan. He explains this to his father who then in turn tells him a horrible story about Liatis that he doesn't remember from his child hood.

His father explains that one night a strange man came into the clans area of the woods and they let him in the only reason being is that the clan leader told him that he needed to speak with him. Now everyone is on guard and cautious. Finally the man comes out of the clan leaders tent and left the village. He then continued to tell me that the clan leader had something horrible that he needed to put in one of the clans children to protect us from an unknown evil,but this evil will manifest itself in the child. They chose me.

I knew that after this story that i had to get rid of this evil that was put in me through the special ink on my skin. So i left my clan and traveled north to find myself a new life...

Character Age: 127

Character Appearance: a younger elf covered in marks of his family 6'4" scrawny with white hair and charcoal grey eyes

Character Personality: shy and not trusting but will jump at the first chance to make a profit

Your ambitions: make a fine living and show to other clan how much i have become

Can your character read or write?:very little

Can your character mine?: yes

Are you a capable builder?: with time and plans

Can you wield a sword?: yes

Enjoy Farming?: will do it for a profit

Does your character have any special skills?: best at sneaking out of sticky situations

[Ivrae 30]

Common reasons people are denied:

-Bumping your application.

-You're an orphan.

-You didn't double space.

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-You didn't include a skin link. < ---

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

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