[✗] [Naztherak Amendment] Make Clayface make your face clay

[_AzureLexi 777]

Additions/changes are in Bold, removals are in Strikethrough.

(Sorry for formatting will fix later)

 

Old

Akom-tar - Lesser Boons

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Clayface (telrotukar)

Once used for infiltrating nations, this boon allows for the hair and/or eye color of the character to be chosen anew and may include unnatural colors for either. Hair texture may change, such as going from straight to curly or vice versa. 

 

Redlines:

- Only the hair and eyes may be altered. 

- The hair and eye color choice is detailed in the tattoo, and thus the Naztherak may choose.

- Cannot be used as a complete disguise, nor alter the facial structure.

- A user may prematurely refresh this boon with rakir, allowing for new features to be chosen.

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Akom-tar - Lesser Boons

Spoiler

Clayface (telrotukar)

Once used for infiltrating nations, this boon allows for the hair, eye, skin color, and/or ear shape of the character to be chosen anew and may include unnatural colors for either. Hair texture may change, such as going from straight to curly or vice versa. Likewise, the size of one's ear may change alongside its shape, such as transforming small, round ears into long, pointed ones.

 

Redlines:

- Only the hair, eyes, skin color, and ears may be altered. 

- Changes to the ears must be within descendant limits. You cannot have bestial ears, for instance.

- The hair, eyes, skin color, and ear choice is detailed in the tattoo, and thus the Naztherak may choose.

- Cannot be used as a complete disguise, nor alter the facial structure. While able to pass as another descendant race within reason, they fundamentally bear the same facial features.

- A user may prematurely refresh this boon with rakir, allowing for new features to be chosen.

 

Purpose

I wanted to be more ambitious with this amendment, but with some thinking, I realize it's best left for a full Akom-Tar rewrite or amendment down the line. So, I sought to make it on par with Alteration Alchemy, and adding a very minor buff to justify the Rakir cost, bane, and fundamentally dark nature of the magic by allowing one to change their ear shape to pass as any descendant race (within reason. a 7' uruk will have a hard time passing as a dwarf). My hope is for it to be as or more effective than Alteration Alchemy, but less effective than Tawkin and Alteration combined.

 

References

 

[ClassyDryad 2372]

I think it should be able to change your facial features as well. Deal with the devil to reset your social cred

[_AzureLexi 777]

18 minutes ago, ClassyDryad said:

I think it should be able to change your facial features as well. Deal with the devil to reset your social cred

I originally was gonna do that, but this is realistically just a holdover until a rewrite is made I wanted smth more conservative but meaningful lol

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