[Denied]Hem's Application.

[hemligt123 0]

Hello! Sorry for not starting the application right away, just want you guys to know, this will be my first time ever, EVER! that i do RP, so my application might be a tad weird hehe..

Thanks to LolitaDoll for helpin me out a bit! Hope you got ur whitelist by now ;)

EDIT: Heres my post from the mc topic btw, tada! <-- press it

Out-Of-Character: Dennis, people call me Red. Oh wait, im not suposed to type here right? sorry!

-Minecraft Account Name: hemligt123

-How old are you?: 16, but compared to most of my age, 45.

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT+1, Sweden!

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes i believe i do, ive always liked games since i was a lil kid, everything from tiny rpg games to massive online games, so ive learned the language pretty well i think.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: As stated above, My name is Dennis. I ride MTB street and im a sick f*ck, and by that i really mean sick, i tend to use all my somewhat-healthy days to ride my bike hehe. And this will be the first time ever that i RP actually! Really lookin forward to it.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Well, thats a dumb question but uhm, everything from 1 minute to 12 hours a day, sometimes even more haha.. depends what mood/state im in..

-How long have you played Minecraft?: Since early alpha.

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?: It is when you put on a act, that you are someone or something that you created (most of the times) like a role character or such.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: Fun! I hope, im new to this thing!

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Ive only played on 1, my entire "minecraft life", Anoukhs SMP server, its down now tho, so dont worry about me advertising it.. meet a old friend on the mc forum, the first day i had mc! tought i would never meet her again ;)

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes ofc!

-Name the 4 races on this server: You mean all? Sure, Descendant Races, Noble Races, Ancient Races, Bloodlines.

-How did you hear about us?: The minecraft forum, your gettin pretty well known ;)

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: duh, look up there ! hehe, nah but its waspen123 on minecraft forums tho, will link my apply there to here.

In-Character:

-Character Name: Ol'Hem.

-What is your Race?: Ascended.

-Biography: Ol'Hem is a sibling of Aeriels step-brother, hold hidden since birth in a secret realm held in a secret world, to be protected from one of Iblees'es apprentices, wich for some reason wants to track down and kill him. He will now start a new life, being talked about as a human, to be hidden without having to keep secret of.

-Character Age:3652 years, we can grow verry old you know.

-Character Appearance: For some reason, since birth, he has looked alot like the grim reaper, no one knows why.. theres nothing about it in the books, maybe... he will turn one day, to the undead? *put horror music here*

-Character Personality: Polite and helpfull, glad to be out of secrecy, hes willing to help everyone with anything, for just a bit of bread to tackle the day.

-Your ambitions: To have fun and be to as much help as i can, i rarely do anything for myself, wich means this is waaay new for me.

-Can your character read or write?: We Ascended are quite clever you see, but we cant write you see.

-Can your character mine?: He is capable of completing any deed to be asked for! He is just a tad week for now.. he just came out of hiding you see.

-Are you a capable builder?: Yes, we Hibelias, the name of my longlived family, is verry capable builders.

-Can you wield a sword?: I believe i do, i have yet to tho, i never had to fight you see. But im lookin forward to learn you see!

-Enjoy Farming?: Yes i would love to try it out! Ive been away in a heavenly castle, wich had everything i could possibly want, hoes bongs and american pizzas in loads you see.

-Does your character have any special skills?: I can talk to animals by making a loud *POP* sound with my mouth you see, but nothing else than that. Or well while we'r at it, im a verry good learner and lissener!

-A screenshot of your skin: Im sorry, who is this screenshot you talk about? Do i know him?

-Other Information: Well there you go, took quite alot of effort into this hehe, hope it is good enough, and that im allowed to be whatever i came up with, thanks!

[Mercius 15]

Denied.

[hemligt123 0]

May i atleast know why? I took alot of effort in my application, got help from lolita on your server and everything, and now i cant even know why? thats rude..

[hemligt123 0]

Well if your going to ignore me then just **** off then, have a nice day.

[Mathias_Leone 0]

Well if your going to ignore me then just **** off then, have a nice day.

Calm down... if you read the Application rules, then you should know your reason is pretty much obvious. Read through it more than once. Though i am not quite accepted, im not going to start swearing at these people who took their time to read my application. Be more polite to these people, aight?

[hemligt123 0]

I did 2 times, and i did again just now, whats wrong with it ? is it that the ascended is to noble to have as a starter class or ? then atleast friggin say so..

[Skybreaker 2]

I did 2 times, and i did again just now, whats wrong with it ? is it that the ascended is to noble to have as a starter class or ? then atleast friggin say so..

"If you are denied without a reason. It means the reason was more than likely very obvious. Re-read your application and find what was wrong. And re-apply in two days!"

That was a quote from the Application form page, which you were supposed to read start to finish. Also, you need to chill, complainin by dropping the f bomb on them won't do ANYTHING to make yourself look better, you're way more likely to get denied now, because of your immaturity. Not everyone has time JUST for you, so ask him politely, and you might actually get an answer. I'm not TRYING to cause **** right now, but you're not exactly making yourself look good to ANYONE.

[Dreviore 0]

Maybe it has to do with your grammar, and your application looks like it was done by a 10 year old, noticing no punctuation other then periods, no comas, no capitalization on certain words. Don't even have me mention all the spelling errors.

And the fact that you wanted to be a noble race from the beginning kinda seems like you didn't read up on the lore, and such very much.

And then there's the fact that you were very immature to a moderator about denying you for obvious reasons.

[Skybreaker 2]

Furthuring my thoughts, if you read the application form properly, which you've already made so clear that you didn't, you'll realize that it said 'minimum 7 sentances', being the main reason why applications are denied, cementing my theory on how you didn't read any of the post that Chevalier took the time to write out for the community. They work hard, and you should at least ask him why and wait a little bit before saying "**** off then" right away.

[hemligt123 0]

Lol that "**** off" was more of a joke, and sorry i must have missed that part lol, gotta stop doin this **** at 3am.. and sorry, im 16, swedish, and extremely tired, so excuse me if i dont spell that good lol...

But ah well, good luck with the server ! I wont bother re applyin tho if you dont want me, if any of u meet lolitadoll on there tell her thanks and goodbye from me.. to much people on this server for me anyways, chat were so messy my head was going to explode hehe.

;)

EDIT: How do i remove my account from here? Ill probs never use this place again, and pretty sure the admins dont want members in the memberslist that wont come back. And i got enough sites mailing me already.