[Denied]Skybreaker's Application

[Skybreaker 2]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Skybreaker

-How old are you?: 15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Pacific Time Zone [-8 GMT], Canada.

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I'd like to think so.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Hi, I'm Sky, and I've been known for having a decent vocabulary and proper grammar for my age (commonly steriotyped for having the '1337' speech, I suppose). I've also modded on a few servers (Legitimately, not just because I knew the owner or something). I'm a hard worker and I like to think myself a good 'Minecrafter'.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Usually about 10-15 hours.

-How long have you played Minecraft?: Since Survival Test 0.25 (October, 2009)

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?: Roleplaying would be defined as being 'in character', and in this case, of the appropriate race.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: Incredibly busy, a good staff (due to the population), and not a peep of the outside world.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Aurora - Because when I was a mod there, the staff started makin some changes I did not agree with one bit (Taking away Vanilla, taking away whitelists) and thus rendered the server bad to me. World of Minecraft - When I was a mod here too, the staff started getting really slack and higher positions then me started relyin on my help to be on to the point where it was almost all I did. Minestick - Got shut down. Project: Art of War - Shut down as well.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes (I feel like I'm missing something here..)

-Name the 4 races on this server: Elven Council, Human Kingdom, Dwarven Kingdom and the Orc War Nation.

-How did you hear about us?: minecraftforums.net

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Skybreaker

In-Character:

-Character Name: Grim.

-What is your Race?: Elven Council.

-Biography:

Born an ancient elven village in the far lands, I'm Grimmeth, but you can call me 'Grim'. Some say I got my name due to the

infamous 'Grim Reaper', because of all the enemies I've slain. At birth, we were a small village of elves, peaceful to all

but the Orcs, who had lived too far away for them to attack us. Or so we thought.

When I was a mere 24, my family's village had been attacked, and my parents parished, and I thought myself dead as well, and then he came. The main elven kingdom's war chief Dire, come to my aid from the clutches of the orcs. Together we fleed back to his elven kingdom, only to learn that we had been overrun and slaughtered brutally. But for 200 years, we lived in the ruins of what was once a thriving kingdom, hunting for our food and studying from the temples the ancient druidic ways we once knew. Comming to the reallization of the passing of our ages, we set out from the abandoned kingdom, in pursuit of finding another colony, somewhere we could avenge the old kingdom of the farlands. We walked for 13 years, foretting where our allies were, and found what appeared to be another Elven city, much to our surprise. I'm still getting used to being around others then Dire, having spent almost all of our lives in isolation. And now here we stand, at the Elven's gates, asking them for their acception after too long being lost.

-Character Age: 237.

-Character Appearance: Quite clean, nice clothes and icy blue eyes.

-Character Personality: Quiet but friendly.

-Your ambitions: Become a significant part in the druid area, but also a tactician for when it's appropriate.

-Can your character read or write?: Read, but can't write very well.

-Can your character mine?: All day long.

-Are you a capable builder?: Yes, but I'd rather let others do it, as I don't have full confidence in my own.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes, but a bow is preffered.

-Enjoy Farming?: Not really, but if you want me to, I will.

-Does your character have any special skills?: The ability to sense if someone's following him, and assassination.

-A screenshot of your skin: http://imageshack.us/f/577/skinl.jpg/

-Other Information: I'm looking forward to fighting alongside you lads.

[Mercius 15]

Denied.

This application isn't far off and you write well, I'd like to see a few improvements:

You describe roleplay as being in character, but what is it to be in character? Please elaborate on your definition and explain it as best you can.

Knowledge of lore is not entirely accurate and I feel you could do a bit better, for instance you mention the Elven Kingdom a lot but you could just name it. Elven Council isn't a race either, they lead the Elves.

Take more time on your application and check it over and over when you re-apply, perfect it as best you can. Good luck!

[Skybreaker 2]

Thank you for finally reading my application, and providing sufficient feedback. I've heard that I can repost in 2 days, and some say in 3 days. Could you give me the official amount of time?

[Dreviore 0]

Thank you for finally reading my application, and providing sufficient feedback. I've heard that I can repost in 2 days, and some say in 3 days. Could you give me the official amount of time?

It's a 48 hour time span.

[Mercius 15]

Yes as stated you may re-apply in 48 hours, two days. You seem to write well so I'm sure you'll do great! And you're welcome.

I'm sorry you had to wait, we are a little overwhelmed at the moment! :P