PLEASE ignorn last application evantheman13 application

[evantheman13 0]

Minecraft Account Name:evantheman13

How old are you?:15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: losusian USA

Do you have a good grip of english:yes but i dislike going the extra mile for grammar but if needed will use it

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:Im very nerdy and smart love mine craft and food

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:21 hours minimum

How long have you played minecraft?:1 year

What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:i have played on a couple roleplay servers and sadly i made a DND rip off with my friends and played that for a while

What do you expect this server will be like?:A vast world full of exploring and epic lore

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:Lancecraft the reason i left was the leader of my town was a jerk

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:i love the lore and like the goverment systems

Name the 4 races on this server Orc ftw Elf Human Dwarf

How did you hear about us?:Fourm

Did you vote?:all but one site it didnt work i think number 2

What was your favourite Law?:no greifing

What was your least favourite Law?:i dont really have one

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?evantheman13

In-Character:Character Name:Galithar

What is your Race?:ORC

Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:evantheman13

Biography:You're probly exspecting an epic story full of battles and adventure Wizards and mages but i was just an orc from a far western village Father was a blacksmith mother a worthless ***** i hated that whench she was a drug adict and scum but she taught me one thing Dont let people push you around but beacuse of her and that advice my whole life changed i was at a local pub when a human thought he should mess with me so i ended up beating him half to death because he made fun of my fathers sword i spent 5 years in that god forsaken prison because of him but after that i join my fathers trade and quit drinking i learned the way of the smith and when my father died i was a better smith then him but my dad had a bit of a gambaling problem and borowed money from some bad people and death deont settle debt to them and they took all i owned the shop my ore my sword i then traveled east and found my self here Character Age:26

Character Appearance:7 foot green strong

Character Personality:hot headed smart hard working fun strong

Your ambitions:i have the dream of becoming a military General

Can your character read or write?:yes he learned at a school in his village

Can your character mine? yes he and his father went on multiple trips together

Are you a capable builder?yes he and his farther build and expand his blacksmith shop

Can you wield a sword?:yes he trained at the shop

Enjoy Farming?[out of game i do but my character has no reson to i cant find a way to rp it]

Does your character have any special skills?:forging, redstone, pursausion,

A screenshot of your skin

Other Information:[in character]I WANT PLAY NOW

my screen shot is not work will try and post later

Plese ignorn my other app i was reading other apps and saw mine was incompitent my spelling is bad and my grammar worst [if my app conflicts with any lore i didnt read let me know i can change it]

[Slayer15855 3]

Denied.

You need an extensive and indepth character. That means you need an awesome biography (you need to develop your biography a bit more) and also an indepth analysis of your characters ambitions, personality etc... Also you need to explain your character traits in terms of your character, why can he mine? why can he fight or not etc... You character is the entire point of this game, you need to put a huge amount of effort and detail into it. It is basically a second person. Make it fun and interesting but not ridiculous, and always within the lore and restriction. Then once you finish reworking repost it after the specified time (48 hours or so), if you are looking for inspiration look at some other apps or the examples pinned. Also if you could format it a little bit (adding space between questions) that would be good.