Ponitz's Application [Edited]

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Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: ponitz

-How old are you?: 15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMt -5

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, i don't see why i wouldn't

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm a tenth grader in high school, take honors classes, and thoroughly enjoy Minecraft. I throw shot-put for my track and field team, I snowboard, and if it doesn't sound conceited, I consider myself fairly smart.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I'd say about 10-15 hours a week

-How long have you played minecraft?: Since alpha, before the "Boo" update

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I role play on another game (I play SAMP), and i'm fairly good role player.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: Well my friends play it, and i'm expecting a more-or-less medieval theme, with some LoTR influences

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I played on Sublimity Gaming, and was an Admin, you may know TehLulu, she played on it also. I left because of multiple world resets and other reasons with the owners.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes, i understood the IC and OOC rules, and the lore is detailed to the point where i like it.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Orc, Elves, Human, Dwarves

-How did you hear about us?: Once again, my friends play on the server, they say it's fun.

-Did you vote?: Yes

-What was your favourite Law?: The rules concerning thieving and how you can be throw in jail for such crimes

-What was your least favourite Law?: I'm not a big fan of the Orc's government structure.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Ponitz

In-Character:

-Character Name: Raynil

-What is your Race?: Elves

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Ponitz

-Biography: Raynil is an elf from Laurelin, he is simple, yet sophisticated, formal, highly educated, and extremely good with a bow. He was born into wealthy family from Laurelin and was basically raised in a school. During his free time he would tend to his garden and hone his archery skills with his uncle. One day, Raynil was with his Uncle in the forest when out of no where, the undead rose and took Raynil's Uncle away, leaving Raynil to fend for himself. Luckily, the undead hadn't taken his bow, Raynil survived the first night with ease thanks to his lucky bow. The next day he found his way back to Laurelin, and started the search for his uncle. Once he was at the age of 142 he decided to set out on his own, make a name for himself, and search for his still missing uncle.

-Character Age: 142

-Character Appearance: Blonde hair, medium muscular build and about 6'8"

-Character Personality: Educated, very formal, and extremely kind towards everyone

-Your ambitions: I plan to join a community, make myself known in the elf race, and hopefully join the government

-Can your character read or write?: Yes extremely well

-Can your character mine?: No

-Are you a capable builder? Yes

-Can you wield a sword?: Somewhat

-Enjoy Farming?: Yes

-Does your character have any special skills?: He is extremely skilled with a bow.

-A screenshot of your skin: http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/7788/elfu.png

-Other Information: Raynil is well educated and good with a bow.

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DENIED

You give no definition of Roleplaying, and you answers are way too short, most specifically your rp answer and bio, but you can also say more than just yes or no on the skills area. Your bio should be more developed showing depth and why your character is the way he is. Please check out the examples and guides for help or pm one of us on the application team. and repost in 48 hrs