Ryans App 2

[Heff 2460]

Out-Of-Character: Nice person, respects mods and rules, respects owner and admins, respects any player.

Minecraft Account Name: ryanheff74

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:no i could not gt tickets, but i wanted to.

How old are you?:14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Eastern U.S Time

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a person who will not break rules. I'm friendly. I make sure peoples feelings are not actually hurt...like if i hurt them roleplaying.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Maybe every weekend night or every other day..depends on sports and hwork.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: TO me roleplaying is staying in character and almost neve refuring to the outside whorl or even your real self.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are. They sound like hard core gaming.

What do you expect this server will be like?:Amazing mods and staff, great map, and advanced role-play.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Paradise Island was inappropriate and admins and mods were not nice to me and did not respect my possession (killed amy dogs multiple times) A faction server ( i forget) the mods and staff abused their powers.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes

How did you hear about us?: I was looking for RP server and saw your website.....I was so obsessed with getting on!!!

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Yes i was the 2,349 voter.

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: ryanheff74

In-Character: He respects elders and is respected from the younger elves, he is skilled at hunting, farming , and swordsman's ship

Character Name:Wolfhound

What is your Race?: Elf

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): He is an ambitious adventurer looking for the dragon that his parents told him about in his younger days. He didn't have much of a childhood though. When he was 12 he lived in the woods in his family's cabin when orcs slated his family and set his house on fire. He lived in the wilderness for years until he stumbled upon a beautiful elf. Her name was Drizzle, they were both orphans and they lived in the wilderness together. One day a wolf attacked Drizzle and she became injured. Now he and drizzle went their separate ways and promised to meet up at the elven city. Soon Wolfhound hopes that day is near. But he has a anger towards orcs and wants revenge. Thats when he stumbles on the Elven City.

Your characters ambitions: Find the dragon, slay the orcs who slayed his family, meet up with drizzle, and bring justice to his world.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do? Runs over to the bandits shoots one in-between the eyes with his bow then stabs the other. Adter he asks the elf what happened. Feeds the elf and is off again.

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer? I am looking for a quiver to hold many arrows and some pork just like my father used to cook.

A screenshot of your skin: I don't have a screenshot but here is the link

http://minecraftskinspro.com/default.asp?action=readreviews&link=19105

Other Information: I have a good grip on grammar.

[Slic3man 484]

Reasons:

- Metagaming and Powergaming Definition are wrong.

- Some spelling errors.

- The whole "Orcs killed my family" idea is not original at all.

- There are no dragons in LoTC except for the ender dragon, which is only hardly ever seen.

- The bandit open response question made it sound like you were powergaming.

- Biography is too short

You must wait 48 hours (2 days) in order to re-apply to LoTC, Good luck next time!

[Slic3man 484]

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