Remember

[Supertimmy4ever 19]

this is a peom written by me Longbeard, in remembrance of Kal'Urguan. the city were i grew up and the city that i will always love.

Kal’Urguan.

The city in the Hidden mountain.

Deep, deep in the Hidden mountain there is a city, filled with the odor of ale and fire,

filled with dwarves, who always are beardy and strong.

This city beautifull as it is, great as it will always be.

Will always warm me heart, as fire does in the city itself.

With pillars carved out of the mountain itself, bigger then dragons,

and the castle as mighty as the power of the dwarven kingdom.

with mines that go to bedrock,

and ale what makes every dwarf want to come home.

fine art here in this great city,

but also a good fight now and then.

with evenings when we drink, sing and laugh,

and days when we work and fight.

this is the city that i love,

this is the city of Kal’Urguan.

[Grizzly Druid 67]

Nice work i liked it

[Arbrek the Ancient 140]

((Needs more rhyming IMHO))

[Flynn 31]

((Needs more rhyming IMHO))

((Your not even supposed to be on here.

Leave, or I will tell your daddy :cool: ))

[Arbrek the Ancient 140]

((Shut up... <.< >.>))

[no longer active 734]

I like the poem. ((Arbek, how are you on TS than?))

[Arbrek the Ancient 140]

((I'm able to get on TS and the forums on my Netbook, which my parents can't check... :rolleyes: ))

[Supertimmy4ever 19]

((Needs more rhyming IMHO))

((i think peom's dont need rhyming, i like it this way and it is logical))

[Arbrek the Ancient 140]

((It just sounds a little awkward. Kinda blocky, really.))

[Supertimmy4ever 19]

((i aint a rhymer i wrote this a month ago out of nothing and i taught it was good so i posted it))

[no longer active 734]

((Arbwk, can your Netbook not run MC?))

[Arbrek the Ancient 140]

((No, no it cannot.))

[Boomack21 124]

Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.