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Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name:

cptCASINO

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:

No

How old are you?:

15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

USA/Central

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes i do.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am a serious gamer and player. I work well with others, and play well with others.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

4-5 hours a day.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.:

Roleplaying is where you create a player and act as though you are that person and they are living and breathing.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.

In simple terms Metagaming it is the use of out-of-game information or resources to affect one's in-game decisions.

It is focusing on the goal and any means to get there faster and easier, rather than having fun on the way to that goal.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect it to be a fun and productive server.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

2. I left the first one for admin maturity reasons. The second was shut down for reasons unknown to me.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes I have.

How did you hear about us?:

Planet Minecraft.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?

No. I haven't had a chance to play it yet.

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

cptCASINO or Eisen Ender-Bane

In-Character:

Character Name:

Hygrim Eisenhorn

What is your Race?:

Dwarf

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Hygrim was born in a large Dwarven city to the south. His father was a captain in the city's armed forces and trained Hygrim in the art of Axe Warfare. When Hygrim was 28, his father was killed in battle by an Orc King. He and his brother swore vengeance against the orcs and led a charge of 200 dwarves to attack the Orc Stronghold. He was not strong enough. He and his brother were the only survivors, and they were captured and tortured for several months. Then the Orc King decided he had enough fun and ordered for them to be executed at dawn. That night, Hygrim and his brother escaped and fled into the woods. They heard the war cries of the orcs and their Hell-Hounds. They decided to split up and meet back at the city of their birth. But when Hygrim returned to the city, he did not recognize the burning ashes that were once his home. He waited days, weeks, months for his brother to return. He never came. Having no reason to live any longer, he decided to travel to the nearest town and drink as much ale as possible to sooth the raging inferno that was welling up inside him. When he was on his 20 or 21st drink he overheard two elves a few tables away say".....Orcs have take some prisoners to their city in Aegis" "....... oh, some elves, dwarves, even a few traitor orcs as well." With a new found hope and purpose, he bought himself a boat and traveled to Aegis. He will make all orcs pay with their own blood.

Your characters ambitions:

To gain revenge for his lost brother and his destroyed city. As children they wanted to grow old and own a shop or tavern perhaps.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?

"Let the bloody elf fight his own battles! What good are Elves anyhow?"

Your character walks up to a shop in a quiet market. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?

"Hello sir. Might I bother you for some bread and pork? 2 loaves and 4 lb. please. Thank you my good man."

A screenshot of your skin:

This is a pic of my skin. I am on a Mac and cannot take or look at screenshots.

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Sorry for the inconvenience!

Other Information:

I really hope you accept this one I am really looking forward to starting my adventure! Thank you!

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Denied

This is why you were denied:

Your definition for powergaming is incorrect.

Luckily for you there are plenty of ways to learn the correct definition. First of all you can look on the lord of the craft wiki and then search for "Powergaming", you can join our Team Speak channel (You can get Team Speak from http://teamspeak.com/?page=downloads ), or you can do a google search.

You biography lacks information, portrays Orcs in a bad way, does not include much lore from the server and doesn't fit in with the current lore of Asulon.

First of all you need to include the entire question, this is "age, appearance and personality".

Orcs are not bloodthirsty monsters who kill without reason and torture for fun. Orcs do not have a "King" and the raids which you talked about did not happen. I would like you to read up on the orcs, and also the rest of the lore of the server. You can do so by going here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/forum/7-world-history/ here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Main_Page and here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/?page_id=10

Your RP questions are too short and need expansion.

Do not just write a single sentence, this is an RP server. You must RP it. Do not just write "He would kill the bandits and then ask for a reward." Be descriptive and origional, but make it realistic!

Your skin picture is in the wrong format.

We cannot judge your skin properly while it is in the little .png image, for one it is two small and secondly we do not have the time to download it and put it in a skin viewer. To correctly embed a screenshot into your application follow this tutorial:

1. Go in-game and press the “F5” button TWICE. (Not once as this will show the back of your character)

2. Take a screen shot by pressing the "PrntScr" button on a windows computer or press F2 on the keyboard, then go to start => Run and type in this: %appdata%/.minecraft/screenshots

3. Find the screenshot and open it in an image manipulation program such as Paint or Gimp.4. Crop the image so that only the area close to your skin (including the skin) remains.

5. Save the file and go to tinypic.com

6. Upload the file

7. Click ONCE on the text box underneath: "IMG Code for Forums & Message Boards"

8. Right click and copy the entire text

9. Paste in your new application

Do not post another application within a day or that application will be skipped.

Please do send a PM my way if you are having any trouble understanding the application process or my feedback, I would be glad to help you. :)

Good luck for your next application!

Here is some further reading material that can help you get accepted:

To understand the questions being asked better look here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/

The guide of a Game Master to accepted server applications:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/13144-petyrs-guide-to-accepted-server-applications/

Tips to definitely include on your application:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/

A must-read guide to the world of aegis:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/9868-an-extensive-guide-to-the-world-of-aegis

How to avoid role-playing as a terrible character:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/

All the lore of the world of Aegis:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Main_Page

Information about the skills system:

http://lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Skill_Information

F.A.Q of Application submissions:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/

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