Kristars 3Rd Application

[Kristar 2]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:Castvoid

How old are you?:14 i'll be 15 at this june

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Finland

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Well i think i speak good english but my grammar is medium.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:Im an medival fan so i choosed minecraft and i love roleplaying in servers cause then i feel like im really in the game.Im a 14 year old boy,borned in Estonia and i can speak estonia,russia,english and a bit finnish.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:5-7 hours a day, 20 hours at weekends

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:Acting the part you have given/choosen. And to me it means acting a part.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:Well sometime me and my friends do roleplay and i have watched a lot of lord of the craft videos made by candel

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:Using the player knowledge to help the character knowledge.Metagaming is a board term usuall used to define any steategy,action or method ina a game wich transcende a prescribed ruleset.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:Is a style of interacting with games or game-like systems with aim of maximisig progress towards a specific goal,to the exclusion of other considerations such as storytelling and atmosphere.

What do you expect this server will be like?:Fun, lots of roleplay,friends,wars and experience

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:Some estonian servers but i quitted cause I got bored and started looking for roleplay servers.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes I have!

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:Yes I promise!

How did you hear about us?:Candle, I watched he's videos in YouTube.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?:No i haven't. But at 9 march i will ! Cause i'll get premium then!

In-Character:

Character Name:Castvoid

What Race are you?:Human!

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):Hes name is Castvoid! He lived in a small village in asulon,He was an market guard in that village but one day! The orcs came and raided their village! Castvoid and some other village guards were defending the head , while

they were falling back do the stronghold, castvoid took an arrow to the knee, So he felled down, injured! But right after castvoid fell to the ground the elves came! They were just walking around till they saw the orcs! So they slaughtered them and healed Castvoid!Castvoid decided to go with the elves, the eleves teached him better sword and bow fighting till castvoid turned 30

he decided to leav the elves and look for an adventure in asulon! (Hes 30 years old,brave,loyal,honest hes calm, he loves to speak with other races cause he learns other races to understand them, and wount rage so easily!) (*sigh* plzz just tell me, Dose this FIT? )

What is your Character's ambitions?:To seek glory and new adventures!

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):bow

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?Bow fighting

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):Umm i got a default skin atm :S but ill get premium at 9 march But please dont rejeckt this cause of that and i know i cant play with a default skin but ill try to make the character ready so i could play immediately in the server.

Other Information about your Character:He is a good man and brave!

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?He runs upon thous armed man , pulls out his sword ! pushing them away! Taking hes formation and warns them not to touch him again and if they will hed cut their throats!The armed man laughed at castvoid and kicked hes ass cause he didnt have any armor :/

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?Hed wount say anything! Hed keep walking to his destination

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:Id refuse! Cause gold isnt that good!And irons i dont need :)

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?Greetings! Ill offer gold do thous who give me the finest beef? :D

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information? Hed say! I offer my sword for this village safety! Till my task is done!

[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

DENIED [ ]

PENDING [ ]

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

[[X's mark the parts you need to rectify.]]

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [X]

Insufficient Information in OOC [X]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge upon World [ ]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

Powergaming [ ]

Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Status [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Needs Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [X]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [X]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

Firstly, I wish to applaud your attempt at joining the server. Although it was denied, I believe it can be rectified through small adjustments.

Secondly, your definition of 'Powergaming' is incorrect on par to our server. That kind of powergaming applies to MMO's, not Roleplaying. Check the link below to gain insight on the definition.

Then, I need you to fix some of the grammatical errors. Its a bit difficult to read in its current format, it being mispunctuated or misspelled. If you can find someone with the time, I am sure they will aid you in fixing it if need be.

Lastly, a screenshot of your skin is needed. Just link the skin's page to us on your next attempt.

I wish you good luck~

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account!

<3

You come to Aegis to Develop a Character, not have one Developed already

Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before.

Don't post another application in a period of two (2) days. It ruins our organisation methods.

Definition of Metagaming and Powergaming : http://sm-rp.forumotion.com/t32-powergaming-metagaming-ic-and-ooc

[Taiga 764]

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