Smartguy108's Application

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Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

SmartGuy108

How old are you?:

14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Central/United States

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

I have a very good grip on the English language, and use good grammar.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I try to be a good person and role model when around people I am meeting for the first time. However, I will stick up for my friends when the situation calls for it. I’m also very humorous and confident.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

I could be on 2-3 times a week.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

I know that roleplaying requires serious imagination. It’s a really fun way to get out of reality!

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

I enjoy playing Maplestory and Skyrim. I also attend Renaissance Fairs occasionally.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

A person who acknowledges a character without really knowing them.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:

When a person does the most unlikely things, giving someone else no chance to react.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect this server to give me the chance to have a true sense of adventure and emersion in Minecraft.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I’ve played on many servers such as the ZGS server, which I currently play on. I left them because I couldn’t experience a real adventure.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

The rules make sense and I will respect them.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

I promise to follow all the stated rules and laws in all areas of the server.

How did you hear about us?:

I heard of you while searching YouTube for a good Minecraft server.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?:

I have not yet voted.

In-Character:

Character Name:

Caelas Dwinanea

What Race are you?:

Human-Elf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Caelas’ ancestors were Elven, but traveled to the desert village of Crimsonsand. After many generations, Siv Dwinanea, descendant of the Elves, married Violetta Goldwyn, a human. Caelas was born while the his parents were moving to a town with better defenses. Violetta died two days after Caelas’ birth.

Caelas was raised alone by his father in the new town. One night, as 17-year-old Caelas was coming home from the market, he noticed that his father was staying out longer than usual. He didn’t come home for days. After a few weeks of anxiety, Caelas decided to take a trek to find his father. He is now 21 and is still searching for his father, Siv. Caelas has dark skin and wears light armor. He is very humorous and brave. At times, he can be stubborn, as he strives to achieve his goals.

What is your Character's ambitions?:

Cealas has the burning ambition to find his father, Siv.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

Caelas’ favorite tool is a well crafted sword.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

Caelas is a skilled hunter.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

C:\Users\Hawkins Family\Downloads\#Minecraft Skin Editorskin_12031504031190921_1708627.png

Other Information about your Character:

Caelas is a seasoned tracker and hunter who loves adventuring with friends.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Caelas would assess the situation and determine the odds of succeeding in a brawl. If the odds are slim, he will attempt to solve the conflict peacefully. If he could easily overpower the two, he would engage in conflict.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

Caelas would browse the gentleman’s wares for anything useful and within a reasonable price range.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

No one would be needing the supplies or the shelter, so he would take the items and the hut’s materials.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

I would accept their help and ask for foodand possibly a place to stay until I get ready to continue my travels.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Caelas would go with the party, eliminate the threat, and collect his reward.

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Why did I deny you?

Try to roleplay in your ORQs, it lets us know more about your roleplaying skills, and helps us to imagine your character better and how he will fit into the world of Asulon.

Because your definitions of meta/powergaming were so short, they could be considered as incorrect, and were most definitely not detailed enough.

You have to have a skin to get into the server, and it has to suit your character. You did not appropriately link your skin in this application.

Please go more indepth on your biography, and just improve on your answers on all questions.

Some Places That May Help You

Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/

Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005

Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/

A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/

A FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/

Server Rules: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/?page_id=8

Latest Format: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/43580-official-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/

Definitions (Seriously Useful): http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/45364-roleplayingmetagamingpowergaming-definitions/

Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

If you have any questions, add me on Skype, or PM me on the forums.

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