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MC Username: Kingkoo

Rp Username (be sure to include the correct prefix, look up on info thread): Ceme (Pronounced sim)

Character Skillset: Lunberjacking: 45 Swordsmanship: 30 Blacksmithing: 32 (Ceme will not be using any of these skill's as he is merely a kitten, not knowing how to do much.)

Appearance (age, SUBRACE, gender): Age: 13 Subrace: Tigrasi Gender: Male

Personality: Ceme is a small, weak, insignificant cub. Being very poor with his real parents before the volcano incident, he had a good peaceful time living in the slums. He is never one to start a fight with other cubs and mostly prefers his own company.

Ceme has little trust in the world and never approaches strangers. (A side affect of watching his parents burn to death). He is freindly and kind at heart but recently he hasn't found anyone to show that kindness to. Ceme has a fear of loud, sharp and sudden noises. They are a reminder of the explosions belonging to the volcano that killed his family. Anything like a slamming door or the clash of steel will send him scampering away into a nearby hiding place, some Kharajyr victimised him for this weakness. Allways stamping infront of him and making loud noises while he was in sight. Life as a lone kitten on the boats was a living hell for Ceme.

He has never been the fighting type allways prefering to play with animals then brawlling with other cubs. Ceme's father was just like him. As a kitten Ceme was never the sharpest knife in the draw allways a little slow to catch on with things. He can very often make the same mistake several times before the message digs in.

Please include a short bio of your character's life: Ceme's life began poor but he lived reasonable well and barely ever went hungry. He lived in a small house with his mother and father. Most of his spare time would be in the family farm playing with the sheep. Ceme never had a kitten friend to play with as he never went out brawlling with the other cubs. He prefered to stay at home and draw in the dirt pictures of his parents.

Another portion of Ceme's time was spent tree climbing. It was his favourite time of the day, his father would take him out into the forest and watch him climb the tallest of tree's. Some of them Ceme could scale in minuites, other would take hours. He was at home with his mother and father when the volcano erupted... Ceme's house caught ablase, he was able to scamper under the smoke and rubble but turning to look back... He watched his parents burn to death.

He was alone and hungry while on the boats... No one was there for him... No one even noticed he was there, this was his first tayste of the real world. And it was harsh. Landing back on the island Ceme found a small cave to call home. He had nothing to eat. Nothing to do. He would spent his hours drawing in the dirt, pictures of his parents... Now the rebuilding of the Kharajyr islands was taking place Ceme's small home was destroyed by excavators preparing to build houses on the land his cave once was. Now homeless Ceme spent hours whandering about trying to find a place to call home.

Then, not focusing on where he was going. He bumped into the leg of Taizar. (Fernwick The Wise) The great and mighty Tigrasi shouted at him with his booming voice asking him what he was doing. Then seeking the answer to where his parents where. Once Ceme had explianed what happened Taizar though this cub looks like his son that died... Slowly, Taizar decided to take him into the Oh'khan family.

Character's ambitions: To become a peaceful loggerman in the Kharajyr jungle

_---Situational Rp Questions---_

1.As you travel through the Karakatuan jungle, you spot a human trespassing on your nation's lands. He approaches you, obviously distressed, and asks for any food, water, or shelter that you can provide, then tells you that he has been lost in the area for days without any proper supplies. How do you react?: In an instant, Ceme hisses, a sign of 'come no closer'. The ape stands still for several moments, then slowly making his way forwards again. At this Ceme shrieks out in fright of the ape and darts of into the shrubs not looking back at the monster.

Hiding in a bush for several minuites, Ceme emerges to see if the ape is nearby. Then he sees it again, it was on the floor groaning in pain. The ape's bloodshot eyes stared at the jungle canopy, he was dying. Slowly and cautiously; Ceme approaches the ape to find it fell still. Was it dead? what seemed like an eternity went by in a few seconds. Standing, frozen in fear next to the ape. The jungle went silent. Ceme slowly gained his nerve and steadily raised a paw towards the monsters arm. *prod* Nothing happened. Ceme saw the ape's chest moving milemeteres to it's full extent. He was alive! He was also beggining to stink the jungle. The smell of a rotting corpse, Ceme tried to roll him over but failed under the ape's heavy wieght.

I can't just leave him here... Can I? Extending his claws Ceme prepared to strike the ape around the face in an attempt to wake him up. The claws sliced through the top layers of it's fleshy pink skin leaving red gouge marks in there trail. The ape screamed in agony, gaining consciousness. At the first pitch of the ape's scream Ceme darted away up the nearest tree to survey what the Pink fleshy thing was doing. The pain on it's face had "sobered it up". Wondering in fear what scratched it, the ape went scrambling into the tree's as fast as his agonised legs could carry him.

2.As you romp through the lands of the "apes", you come across a tavern. Inside this tavern, a Dwarf notices you and starts gawking at you, then begins to speak.

"Oi! I gots a bowl of cream for you, Kitty! Ha! I'd bet you would make a nice throw rug, wouldn't ya, ya mangy furball?!

"He continues act generally as racist as possible. What do you do?: Ceme slowly back away into the corner of the tavern and stays there for a few seconds before the dwarf approaches with heavy pounding feet. Terrified and trapped Ceme scampers to the exit squealing in fright of the big heavy footed dwarf charging after him.

Outside, the road was empty and peaceful. Disturbed by the angry dwarf charging through the double doors of the tavern. Ceme was darting his way towards the bushes when the boot of the dwarf lands hard on his tail. Screeching in agony, Ceme flails backwards randomly and aimlessly with his little, miniscule claws. A paw catches the dwarf in it's exposed ankle, the sharp sting made the dwarf release his foot to clutch at it. Allowing Ceme to escape into the bushes.

3.One of your fellow Kharajyr and a close friend of yours comes to your dwelling in the middle of the night and begins to pound on your door. After you let him in, he confesses to killing another Kharajyr over a slice of cake. What do you do in response? I pulled him into my home and hide him in my little cave until he is ready to make travel away from these lands where the Moonblades are most likely searching for him. I give him what supplies I can and send him on his way without anyone knowing I was involved.

Upon his leaving I tell him that he was stupid for commiting a crime and if he ever came to me again I would hand him over to the Moonblades without question.

Do you swear to follow the Tlatlanni and uphold his law, and do you swear to hold Metztli and all of her actions as sacred? I do.

Please include a screenshot or 3D render of your character's skin See the attachment below.

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I know this isnt my place to post, but you may want to expand your ORQ

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Denied

Reasons:

- Your bio:

It is very interesting, yes, but when I see that you are a 6 year old kitten, how can you plant saplings? Kittens mature at the age of 15, yes, but that doesnt make much sense since a kitten that age barely knows how to speak.

-Your Questions:

Question 3 to be exact. It appears that you have a house as a kitten? I did read you live in a cave, but a house? That could have been elaborated.

Overall:

I feel as though I will stick with denied. another reason why it should be denied is because we have to many kittens on the island. I, KAT, and other members of the race, would like there to be less kittens. So, if you would please make a Kharajyr over the age of 15, or heck, maybe 13 or 14. As long as it is not in a little helpless stage where cuteness wins everything, it will be fine.

I hope you understand why you were denied. If you want to talk look for SiKrasose Krasus or Karma in TS if you want any other help or PM me if you want to know anything else. Me and other members of KAT will be glad to help you if you need it.

Farewell and have a nice day.

Also, please wait 24 hours till posting the next app. It would be much appreciated since you would just waste a try. Thank you.

Edit:

If you are not part of KAT, then you shouldnt be posting on applications. A new rule will be put in place because of this. You may think you are helping but you dont have the right to post unless you are part of KAT. Thank you.

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ACCEPTED

I'm in a bit of a haste, If another KAT member feels my judgement is wrong, you may change it. Though I believe it is deserved.

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Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.

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