[Alt] Mystery App. Fixed For Lucas

[Mystery 118]

Out-Of-Character

Main Minecraft Account Name:

Drake_Blackwood

Alternate Minecraft Account Name:

disaak

In your own words, define what the act of Roleplaying is:

Roleplaying to me is when you take on the role of a set Character. When you take on this character you can't just pull every thing out of thin air. Everything must be planned in terms of what the character want's and how they act.

In your own Words, define what the act of Metagaming is:

Metagaming is when you find out Ic knowledge ooc. A example of Metagaming. Tom: Hey guess what? I herd jim just got a diamond sword over Ts. Jack: OMG I'm going to kill him now. :3

In your own Words, define what the act of Powergaming is:

Powergaming is when you take no one else into consideration. You have a set goal and no matter what are going to get to it even if it ruins rp. Its not something you want to do unless you want to get banned.

In-Character:

Character Name:

Mae

What Race are you?:

Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Just a regular Human roaming the lands.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Mae grew up in an average family that lived in Salvus. Her father worked in the mines and her mother worked the farms. One day after her mother came home from work she looked worried. Mae quickly ran up to her and asked her what was wrong. Mae's mother looked at her with sorrow in her face and said "Your father...Was killed in the mines". Mae quickly started crying then ran outside to the river that led out of Salvus. She sat there and started to ponder what life would be like without her father.

Mae quickly began how terrible it was without her father. She didn't have the luxuries that she had before. One night at dinner she started to burst out in tears then screamed "Why did this have to happen!". Mae then stormed out of the house and sat down on the hill that seemed to never end. "This is all my fault" she said. Mae thought that she was the reason her father died. "Was it because of what I said?" she pondered. Her mother then walked up behind her and told her to be strong and that none of it was her fault.

Mae then started to live out the rest of her life having all of those hardships. She wouldn't be able to tell others about family stories without tearing up. (This is when it jumps to me playing her out)

What is your Character's ambitions?:

My characters ambition is to grow up and have a successful family. She wants to make sure that none of them are hurt in any way. Also it's her goal to make sure that they can grow up and have a family of their own.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character:

Open-Response-Questions

Answer at least three out of five listed

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Mae would look at the hafling from a distance and think about his/her saftey. "I don't want to get hurt, but I don't want him/her to either" she whispered. Mae would continue to ponder the thought until it was to late and they have already robbed him. She would then feel really guilty and go up to the hafling and crouch down.

"I'm...Sorry"

"What for?"

"I could have.. helped you"

"Oi, Then why didn't 'e!"

Mae would then stand up and give him some of her mina's to make up for his loss. Then she would slowly walking away thinking about she could have been hurt or even worse the hafling could have.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

Mae would look at him and say "Would you happen to have any food?"

"Oh, Food 'e need! Food I got!"

Mae would then select the food that she wished to purchase.

"That be 12 minas"

"Okay... Here you go" Then Mae would walk away with her purchased food.

Once Mae was back to her home she would sit down at the table and start eating the food. Whilst she was eating the food she would think about her future family. She would smile and continue eating the food day-dreaming about the wonderful family that is to come.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Mae would look into the shack and see if anyone was around. After finding that no one was there she would peak into the chest and see the iron and golden sword. The iron would remind her of her father. Mae then would quickly start to tear up and run as far away from the shack as possible. Once she was far away from the shack she would sit down and think about her father and how great he was. She would then walk back to town contacting the closest peacekeeper telling them how she found it and what was waiting there for the owner. If she liked the peacekeeper she would hesitate and then quickly stand up on her toes and kiss him in thanks.

[James Undercroft 129]

Denied.

Your powergaming definition is still a bit off and needs an example. Please don't just used the overused "John kills Bob.", try to think of a unique way of how Powergaming relates to lord of the craft.

Surely in your adventures you have seen someone powergame before?

I am really sorry but I forgot to mention a few points in my last revision, because of this, this application does not count as part of your maximum allowed applications. Just count this as an extended first review :)

You need to have a last name (or otherwise justify why your character does not have a last name).

You need to write more for your biography. At the moment you have not included the entire question (*hint hint* age, appearance and personality). I think you also need to expand upon a few key points such as what skills your character has and how did they get them etc.

PM me with any queries.

[James Undercroft 129]

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