Craetars App

[SamuraiMaximo 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:samuraimaximo

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Oregon, USA

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes, yes I do.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:Well, I like roleplaying(I play dnd with my friends). I’m a little laid back, but I can really get into it(roleplaying). I’m not the typical spend all day eating cheetos gamer, I like other things, like science and math, but I spend some of my time playing minecraft. I am a good builder, with detailed buildings, and I enjoy being a part of a community.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:7-8 hours?

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:Role Playing is playing the role of someone or something other than yourself, so becoming a different person.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:I play dnd with my friends every Wednesday, and I have played on 2 roleplay minecraft servers before.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:Metagaming is the act of using out of character info, or going out of character to accomplish a task. So if you hear someone accidentally type out they are going to rob you in the night in ooc chat, if you use that info, your Meta-Gaming.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Power-Gaming is the act of making your character all powerful, or the best at whatever. If you make your character some kind of “chosen one” that would be Power-Gaming.

What do you expect this server will be like?:I expect it to be a little like WoW, with working together, quests and races, and just plain old minecraft, with building and mining and a good community!

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on lots of servers, including Assassins Creep(assassins creed themed server), Exalted Lands, Ettara, and others. I left most of them because they were poorly run and the staff were jerks.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes, but I have a couple of questions, when you say you can’t kill the undead without lines of roleplay, do you mean zombies and skeletons? Will they be spawning around the world?

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:Yes I promise.

How did you hear about us?:Surfing Minecraft forums.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: Haven't made one before.

Have you posted this application on our minecraft forum thread yet? If not, just finish it up on here and then copy + paste is over there. (http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-%E2%96%91%E2%96%92%E2%96%93-the-lord-of-the-craft-%E2%96%93%E2%96%92%E2%96%91-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r/):No but I'll post it.

In-Character:

Character Name:Craetar

What Race are you?:Dwarf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):Idk?

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):Craetar had an interesting life, as a young child he lived with his father, in the land of the dwarves, where he learned the trade of engineering and fighting. Then, when his father disappeared, he went to live with his mother, in the capital city of the humans. He felt completely out of place, he was picked on all the time. His mother was worried about how well he was doing in school, so she unenrolled him and took him home. He learned on his own, following his true passion, architecture and adventuring. He would build scale models of famous landmarks with twigs from a forest nearby, and sneak off to join a caravan headed to some abandoned ruins. Then, when he was 14, his life fell apart with the death of his mother. She fell ill, and died shortly after. With nowhere to go, he joined an adventuring party, learning about the world and skills like map making, fighting, and surviving off the land. 5 years later, he decided to go back to the dwarves, his real home. He found himself welcomed, invited to come back in. He spent his time learning the art of machines, smithery and mining. Now he has decided that he wants to go back to adventuring.

What is your Character's ambitions?:Architecture, mining and fighting.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):A sword and his head.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?Architecture and fighting.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):here is a link http://imgur.com/dPVjj

Other Information about your Character:

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?He waits for the warriors to leave, and he follows them into a dark alley. He quietly sneaks up to them, then draws his knife. Not waiting for them to respond, he pounces on them, lashing out. They easily sidestep him, and he lashes out at their waists. He is easily beaten, and they spend another 10 minutes kicking him. As they exit, Craetar smiles holding the bag of money in his hand.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?He nods in his direction, and says "I’m good, just browsing".

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:He looks around, goes outside the hut, and back in and check if there are any signs of inhabitants. Finding nothing, he takes the loot.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?I walk up, greeting them back, and ask them the nearest route to a city. I then tell them my story, and ask if they could spare any food. I hid my bag outside of the camp, so they don’t think I’m rich, and took off all my weapons and armor.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:He picks up a sword, and goes to meet them.

Thanks for looking into my app! This server looks awesome, so I hope I'm accepted!

Thanks,

SamuraiMaximo

[Groobs03 297]

-Your power-gaming definition is not the one we are looking for. The definition can be found in the forums, on TS, or on the video in my signature.

-Add some lore to your bio, you can find it in the wiki. ex: The names of the Dwarven/Human capitals

-In your open responses your first question is very much against the rules on the server. If you read the rules you will see what rule it breaks.

-The rest of your open responses need extended a bit.

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Yes, but I have a couple of questions, when you say you can’t kill the undead without lines of roleplay, do you mean zombies and skeletons? Will they be spawning around the world?

Yes Zombies and Skeletons spawn around the world but there is no need for rp to kill them. The undead bit is about a race that used to exist.

If you are still unsure of why you were denied, send me a pm and I

Will gladly explain.

If I am not on, go to the teamspeak channel "Application Team Help Channel"

For above problem.

I suggest you take an hour to fix up the things I have said above, then go ahead and give it another go.

Have a nice day/night :)

[Groobs03 297]

Moved to Denied Forum