My First Application

[irisdd 0]

Minecraft Account Name: irisdd

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Mountain Time zone of US

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a spart, love computers, and work with them alot. I like to game, and over spring break, i played at least 15 hours. (It was a slow break)

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: At least a hour a day. A bit more on the weekends.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: You can someone you desire to be like.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: You must have goog grammer, i've been on about 10 RPG servers.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta-gaming is when you look above another characters head to look at their name, then act like you know the person, when you have never actually met them in a roleplay before.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Power-gaming is when you do things that are either impossible or improbable, or god moding.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I hope that the admins and mods are helpful. I also hope that there are no griefers like my brother who gets angry at me too much...

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I was a admin on a RP server called 'The best server owned by a 10 year old kid', and that was very, very sad.(he was still working on the money system for 3 months.)

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Absolutely positivly yes.

How did you hear about us?: My brother. I look over his shoulder a lot.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: No.

In-Character: irisdd

Character Name: Irisdd

What Race are you?: Elven

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): none

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):Irisdd: the little Elven girl was once had a very nice home in the trees, where she was born in the year of grief, the orcs were challenging her father, Aerlaf, to fight. Her father was merely a village elf, wondering why they would want him. Her mother, Angky filled with sorrow as her father and daughter were taken away to the orcs.

When Irisdd was older, with the other captive elves including her father and brother Vonka labored for the orcs. She soon thought up a plan to escape with them but only was able to take Vonka. When they came home, their mother was overjoyed, but there were no trees. they were all gone, the orcs burnt them down. Now Irisdd has put herself to a mission to make the orcs pay.

What is your Character's ambitions?: To rise up against the orcs, save her father and restore the trees while traveling and making friends along the way.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): A sword, with help from the dwarves made of daimond.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Irisdd jumps from tree to tree, being very nimble on her feet and feels like she's flying. She also can win bets alot.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character: She will stand up for those who cannot stand up for themselves, and try and protect the smaller and weaker ones.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Answer: Irisdd walks up and says,” Now what do you think you're doing?!" A man replies," We're busy can't you see? This little runt-" "I don't care now stop!" "Don't you dare get in the way-" one says while start attacking. Irisdd jumps on a tree with her bow and hides. one of the men say "Hah! she's too scared, little pesky elf." Irisdd aims, and FIRES! One of the men get knocked out. Irisdd darts behind another branch and hits the other man. She takes the halfling and gets it home and reports the two after taking a screenshot of them.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Answer: Irisdd would consider that a person would already own this and leaves it alone.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Answer: Irisdd walks towards the front gate. She hears the guard say that bandits have stolen a child from the town and are hiding in a cave. He asks if anyone will help. Irisdd looks at herself. She had some iron, she could make some iron amour. She jumps on a roof, and to the front of the crowd. “Hi.” She says to the guard. “Bye.” She says as she leaps over the gate and starts sprinting.

When she reaches the cave, the guard was a couple of feet behind her. She strode in and readied her bow. “Too bad I’m not good in darkness.” She thought to herself. A bandit shouts, “BOW DOWN AND YOU’LL LIVE!”, but Irisdd shoots in the direction of the voice. She heard a thud on the ground, assuming that a bandit was knocked out, she started to put up torches. The guard catches the bandits, and puts them in jail. “Thank you, Irisdd.” He says as he gives her the reward. “Thank YOU.” She replies as she walks out of town followed by the cheers of the townsfolk.

Thank you for reading this. I found that this is a REALLY good server, and need to know if any changes need to be made.

[Brokencrowe 111]

Denied.

Your definition of roleplaying is very vague, please add more to it, and demonstrate clear understanding of that term.

Your definition of metagaming is an example and not a proper definition.

Your example of powergaming is underdeveloped and unclear, please flesh it out.

Your biography is brief, does not contain any lore-related material and does not give me a clear image of who your character is, why she is that way, and where she came from. Please add more to this, and make the character come to life!

You skipped one of the open response questions.

Your open response questions need expansion, at least one detailed paragraph is what we're looking for in each. Also please try to give a clear depiction of who your character is, and how she'd act in a full roleplay manner. This is your opportunity to show her off to us, the application team, and give us a first taste of your roleplay skills.

You will be allowed to reapply in twenty four hours, if you have any questions regarding your application feel free to drop a PM in my inbox.

Good luck!

-Brokencrowe

[Brokencrowe 111]

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