Aeactus's Application Submission 2

[rcmineblazer 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: rcmineblazer

How old are you?: 13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Mountain Standard Time/ U.S.A

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes i do

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I am a student at a middle school I play baseball. My grades our great!, I like history and learning about

it and I love to play video games!

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I can be on 5 hours a day or 35 hours a week

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:Well roleplay i like to think of as acting as another person to be someone you would want to be

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I have played plenty of RPG games my whole life

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Its in game stratgey or actiom.move

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Is a style of gaming wich interacting with games

What do you expect this server will be like?:A fun adventure and a experience

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Nayncraft I left becasue i heard of LOTC

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes i have

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: I do promise

How did you hear about us?: Youtube/Petridagamernerd

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: Yes http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/52925-aeactus-app/

In-Character:

Character Name: Aeactus

What Race are you?: dwarf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): None

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):Aeactus started out in a far east mining village. As a child Aeactus Always showed skill a axe by watching his father a local hunter train

for war. As they all new was comming the Orcs have been watching our village. One day his father left for war and never saw him again. But now till

this day his waits for his father to come see him again.He now lives in the dwaren city as a miner Still Griping a axe on his back ready for anything.

Only 103 Yet Still a master miner and a reserved soldier To get his revenge of his father's death.

What is your Character's ambitions?: To be a war hero

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): Master with a axe

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? A skilled miner and known with a axe

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format): My skin is attached to the post

Other Information about your Character: No not at all

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[Brokencrowe 111]

Denied.

Your application lacks effort on all levels. This is a very high quality roleplay server we expect at least a little bit of work on the applicants part to get into and maintain the servers roleplaying atmosphere. You have done nothing to show me that you are a good roleplayer or story teller. You have an incomplete application, and if you think this application that was more than likely thrown together in five minutes is even remotely passable, you have another thing coming.

Firstly you did not wait twenty four hours to reapply.

Your definition of roleplay is basic and doesn't at all show your understanding of the term.

Player RPG games all your life does nothing to prepare you for this roleplaying server, buddy. Surely you could learn, but that would take a bit of effort on your part. Roleplaying is about getting into character, not leveling up and questing like in RPGs.

Your biography fails to meet the minimum of two paragraphs. It doesn't prove that you've read the lore and rules of the realm at all, and fails to tell the story of your character.

Your characters ambition is rather cliche' and lacks any reasoning.

How exactly is he an axe master?

Your post lacks an image of your skin.

You didn't do the open response questions at all.

To be entirely fair, based on this application alone... Unless you make an utter turn around, and fix EVERYTHING about your application, then I don't see how you can possibly ever be a part of this community. For each of the questions aim for a nice big paragraph or two, when answering. If you show the same quality of work on your next application, as you have on this one, then I don't know what to tell you.

If you have any question regarding your application feel free to drop a message in my inbox, you will be allowed to reapply in twenty four hours.

Good luck!

- Brokencrowe

[Brokencrowe 111]

Moved to Denied Forum