Iclemicle's Application

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Minecraft Account Name:

Iclemicle

How old are you?:

16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

United Kingdom

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am a generally good natured person, preferring to work with others than go 'lone wolf' on things. I also maintain a policy that if you are nice to me, I will return the favour.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

Varies depending on my school work. Probably between 2-10 hours a week.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Role playing means taking on the manner of a character which you choose, and acting how they would act in response to certain situations.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

I have done some minor role play on MMORPGs with my guild members.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

using outside knowlege not available to one's character to gain an advantage within a game. This can be considered cheating by some.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:

'levelling' your character to make them extremely strong/have the best equipment.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

Hopefully with players dedicated to making the most out of the experience which the server is attempting to provide.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

Chaotic Uniformity: I left because of the community's poor attitude towards "noob" players

FP Server: Closed down :(

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

Yes

How did you hear about us?:

Google :P

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

Yes

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/52773-iclemicles-application/page__p__404707__hl__iclemicle__fromsearch__1#entry404707

In-Character:

Character Name:

Hamdir

What Race are you?:

Man

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Northman

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

When he was just a young boy, Hamdir's grandparents constantly told him stories of "The Glory of the North" and about its glory before it fell. These stories shaped everything Hamdir did, from his self-exile in the bitter Northern Forests, to his utter reliance on himself, the only goal in Hamdir's mind was the restoration of his once great homeland, and maybe, should fate allow it, a prestigious title within this new land.

However, Hamdir is neither blinded by nievity, nor ambition, for he knows that the only hope of this dream becoming a reality, is with the assistance of House Sheffield. Only they have the manpower to keep the forces of evil at bay, and the political prowess to keep the people firmly under their control.

What is your Character's ambitions?:

Restoration of the North. Hopefully a high position within said kingdom.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

Sword

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

surviving in the wilds

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character:

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Warn the warriors to step aside. If they oblige, he will leave them in peace, if they do not, they will feel the sting of his blade!

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

"I have little need for your trinkets sir, maybe when I am rich and famous you may offer them to me as tribute, however, for now, there is work to be done.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Set up camp inside the hut for the night, but do not take anything. In the morning, leave a freshly killed pig in the hut as a thanks to the potential owner.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

Offer your services as a hunter, and forester in return for food, and board for the night. You will not forget their kindness when you are rich and famous.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Offer my assistance free of charge. Civilised lands should be rid of these wild-folk. Anyway, the loot from the bodies can act as my payment anyway, for I have little need for money at this time.

[Thu'um 530]

Your Application has been...

DENIED [X]

Put on PENDING [ ]

Reason(s) Why Your Application Was Denied:

[[X's mark the parts you need to rectify.]]

Out of Character:

Missing Areas [ ]

Bad Information [ ]

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [X]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

-Insufficient Information in Metagaming Definition [X]

-Insufficient Information in Powergaming Definition [X]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge of the World [ ]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

-Open Response Questions are Lacking [X]

-Fabricated Places/Large-Scale Events [X]

-Unreal Scenarios [ ]

Bouts of Powergaming [ ]

Bouts of Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Answers [ ]

Character is Cliche [ ]

Requires a Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Plagiarized [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

Overall, your application was indeed a bit lacking.

However, I deeply enjoyed reading your application. By the choice of words, it seems you are an intelligent individual who shows promise. I would like to see you fix all of the disclosed/marked errors above in your application and re-apply.

Good Luck!

PLEASE RE-APPLY AFTER A PERIOD OF 24 HOURS`

[Thu'um 530]

Moved to Denied Forum