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  1. 1. Should I continue these types of poems?

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Back Into the Light

I remember

Of what I said

during that weary,dreary,stormy night.

The Undead

you see.

They are here

and there

and well,

almost everywhere.

One for as far as I see.

Skirmish here

to Skirmish there.

Their magic never goes.

From their Golden hoes,

to their Undead robes,

Of what

the World foretold.

I see an opportunity

to all,

all who intend to join.

For it is

a chance,

Back

into the light.

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[More to come]

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Great wording. However the line transitions don't seem to flow well for me. Or I'm reading it wrong. But nice work, you're good :grin:

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