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Your Minecraft Username:SovietBrax

Your Monk's Name:Decdicant_Kilir

Your Monk's Personality:He is very loving and easy to become friends with.A Loud Mouth by heart, he does talk alot. He tends to get mad at people who try and mess around with him but rarely Gets Over The Top

A Very Brief Bio (Just a basic bio, not nearly as long as the one you used when applying for the server):Kiril Is a Nice Dwarf, Who Creates Happiness...Most of the time.He Protects the Innocent Alot and Never Tends To Harm unless needed.If Someone Is threatening something he likes,He would protect it.Kilir is also Friends With Sahra.

Who were the Celestial Triumvirate?:Lord Keldrith of the sun, Lady Rellenia of the Moon, and Lord Tariel of the Stars.

A Lost traveler come to the Sanctuary and asks, "Monk, where am I and how might I find my way?" How do you respond?:Kilir:'allo

Traveler:Where Would I Be?

Kilir:At Tha' Cloud Temple...Or the Sanctuary.What Would Ye Be Looking Fer?

Traveler:I'am Heading to Solace.

Kilir would show him the blue path,and then tell him directions to Solace.

Kilir:If Ye Get Lost, Head Back 'ere With yer SoulStone.

A Screenshot of Your Monk's Skin (Robes must be one of the three colors and similar in base to Posted Image with or without a beard)((I WILL BE MAKING THE SKIN SOON))

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To me this app showed little-to-no effort nor explanation as to why your character is to become a monk, and honestly just a big lack of effort on your part. You may try again in /one/ day. Thank you.

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OOC: I seem to have gaIned access to an iPhone while camping. Kilir, my characters name is Dedicant_Sahra because she is a /Druid/ Dedicant, unless you are a Druid your name would be prefixed by Monk_. Your application primarily bothers me because of the capitalization of every few words. Also, you sentences are rather improper. Besides that, you seem to have put in a decent amount of information. I will not be on the forums often, but I will re-review any applications I see when I get home.

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Do you mind if I add that to the main post? I like it.

Sorry for not being active but I am trying not to post, But yes you can use it.

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Your Minecraft Username:

Areontrade

Your Monk's name:

Beltran

Have you read and agree to follow the rules?:

Yessir/Yesma'am

Your Monk's Personality:

Beltran has a very childish behavior due to him being only the age of twelve. He is very playful and laughs at almost everything, He is afraid of the Dark and lightning/thunder currently.

A Very Brief Bio (Just a basic bio, not nearly as long as the one you used when applying for the server):

*The crackle of the lightning sounded again, closer to the young boy hiding under the tree near the monk farm which in term, caused another whimper from the young boy who had been living off the tree's apples until they were now gone.

Suddenly, something else cracked, not from the sky but from the ground, the sound of wood snapping as someone stepped on it caused the boy to scamper around the other side of the tree, peeping out to see who was around.

As he glanced around the tree he spotted, a tan-brown robe, no closer than two feet infront of him, with a monk inside of the robe, and then came the hand. At his suprise, the hand came out to hold his, not to run him away like many before. He gripped the hand with all of his might and followed the monk's calming words. "Come with me child, you will be safe in the Sanctuary."

*Nods and walks to the sanctuary, holding the monk's hand tightly, listening to her speak about all sorts of the things around them only understanding little parts*

~Answered as if he was learning to be a monk.~

Who were the Celestial Triumvirate?:

*Taps his chin thinking*

Uhhhh *Mumbles to himself 'Stars, Moon, Sun'. . .Lord Tariel, Lady Rellenia. . . And. . . Uhhh. Ooh! Lord Keldrith! *Smiles at remembering them*

A Lost traveler come to the Sanctuary and asks, "Monk, where am I and how might I find my way?" How do you respond?:

*Laughs for a second as he turns and the man's face shows suprise as he notices the person is a child*

"Well Mister, Your at the Wilven Sanctuary and it depends where you wish to go."

*The rough looking human responds* "I wish to find my bretheren in the Dutchy of Nojurn."

*Taps the side of his head trying to remember where it is*

"Ooh! Nojurn. . . Thats this way!"

*Dashes to the Elven Path's entrance, almost losing the man, and points down the road* "Take the path on the right and turn before you get to the Tent Camp, You will reach the desert there."

*Smiles and dashes off again happy at his good deed*

A Screenshot of Your Monk's Skin (Robes must be one of the three colors and similar in base to with or without a beard):

Me:"Do I HAVE to make the robes a certain trim? My character will be still learning about all of this, so it would be hard to choose one of the three."

Escharian: "Hmm... I suppose you could remove the trim altogether until you pick one."

~Added Brown because no trim looks odd, Tell me if I need to fix it.~

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Anything else:

"Also, make a note saying Escharian has reserved this application, just in case I'm not back when you post it." ~Escharian

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-snip-

Accepted, don't let me down. I suggest you don't utilize this character until I meet with you tomorrow and I can write up some lore on you and I meeting or we can act out some. Hope to see you soon.

~Sahra

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Accepted, don't let me down. I suggest you don't utilize this character until I meet with you tomorrow and I can write up some lore on you and I meeting or we can act out some. Hope to see you soon.

~Sahra

"*Nods and walks to the sanctuary, holding the monk's hand tightly, listening to her speak about all sorts of the things around them only understanding little parts*"

Will see you at the tree farm. :L

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Update: Added a quote from ttwesten that I loved.

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Your Minecraft Username:paladist

Your Monk's Name:Talar

Have you read and agree to follow the rules?:Yes I read them and I agree

Your Monk's Personality: Talar is timid but can easily get over it in emergency situations.

A Very Brief Bio:Talar recently changed his name. He used to be Drecar Razier a man whom people love and many people hate.

Drecar's most recent job was as Tilruir'linan of Healun'or a position of government and respect. But he made a few very bad mistakes and abandoned the silver city seeking refuge from his past, as a monk. Trying to redeem himself.

Before Haelun'or Drecar was part of a small rebel group who eventually got captured by orcs and put in prison to be executed in front of everyone as a special event... I managed to escape with two others and we parted ways never speaking again.

In Talar's early years of life his parents were neglectful and very mean/poor they taught him to steal and take whatever he desires. He made friends with a wolf cub, finally bringing him home to his parent after being friends with him for months. He went to bed that night and woke up to his cub dead, being cooked. He ran away and never spoke with his parents since.

Who were the Celestial Triumvirate?:

Lord Keldrith

Lady Rellenia

Lord Tariel

These three were representatives of the sun, moon and the stars (Keldrith-sun, Rellenia-moon and Tariel-stars)

A Lost traveler come to the Sanctuary and asks, "Monk, where am I and how might I find my way?" How do you respond?:

Talar: You are at Cloud Temple my fine sir!

Man: How might I get to Alras?

Talar thinks for a moment

Talar: "Come with me there is a boat!"

Man nods

We both walk to the docks and I direct him towards the boat

Talar: "This boat here will leave soon and it goes to Alras and back."

Man: "Thank you."

A Screenshot of Your Monk's Skin (Robes must be one of the three colors and similar in base to Posted Image with or without a beard):It won't let me upload it... ((Used 487.92K of your 500K global upload quota)) But a Kha monk saw me today with my skin you can ask him about it I'm not changing it. It already has gold tint.

Anything else you'd like to say:I also like long walks on the beach!

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Your Minecraft Username: Princetonlax21

Your Monk's Name: Quothe

Have you read and agree to follow the rules?: Yes, I most definitely agree to uphold the rules.

Your Monk's Personality: Quothe is a generally out-going person to those who respect him. He has a quick tongue to the ignorant, but does not believe in any type of racism. Quothe believes that all should be treated fairly. Quothe is exceptionally intelligent, even as a very young teen. He is quick-witted, sharp-tongued and clever, and a talented musician.

A Very Brief Bio (Just a basic bio, not nearly as long as the one you used when applying for the server): Quothe was born into a respected traveling troupe among Asulon. He education was spotty, but wide ranging, his teachers being troupers and travelers. He appears to be very young, but his intelligence is remarkable for a person of his age. Quothe is quick to make friends, but he also has many enemies because of his troupers anger. He is always willing to help if you respect him.

Who were the Celestial Triumvirate?: Lord Keldrith- God of Sun.

Lady Rellenia- Goddess of the Moon.

Lord Tarie- God of the Stars.

Lost traveler come to the Sanctuary and asks, "Monk, where am I and how might I find my way?" How do you respond?:

*Quothe looks up from the Lute he was playing and studies the Traveler intently and speaks after a long pause "You, sir, are in the Wilven Sancutary. A place of peace and reflection."

*The traveler looks at Quothe strangely and asks "Aren't you a little young to be a monk, boy?

*Quothe takes another long pause and tries to keep his temper in check. He speaks with a rye smile "Some would say, but age isn't everything, my friend."

*The traveler seems to sense the wiseness in the young mans voice and asks sternly "Where should I go to begin my journey?"

*Quothe ponders the question carefully "Where you choose your path in life is your choice, my friend, but I believe a man like yourself should follow an honest path of integrity. *Quothe notices the mans High elven appearence and suggests "Maybe you should try the Silver City, it is right outside Malinor."

*Quothe points to the yellow side and says "There is a ship to Malinor over there."

*The traveler bows in thanks and continues to the boat.[

(( Any constructive criticism would be great if I need to expand. Thank you for reading. I currently do not have a monk skin because it would be an embarrassment if I tried, but if I am accepted I will ask to see if it is acceptable.))

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To paladist, I would have you expand upon your personality, but seeing as I had time with you in character, Accepted.

To princetonlax21, you will be accepted once I see and approve of your skin. Edit: Accepted

Edit: Void seeing as Quothe is dead, and I have not seen Talar for some time. Neither of these apps are active.

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The application format is as follows:

Your Minecraft Username:StrifeOr

Your Monk's Name:Brennan

Have you read and agree to follow the rules?:Yes.

Your Monk's Personality: Pious, kind, gentle, one who never turns to violence. He has an affinity for farming, and would never leave a hurt traveller stranded.

A Very Brief Bio (Just a basic bio, not nearly as long as the one you used when applying for the server):

Brennan is an Elf who was born into the monks. He was taught the way of the monk, the teachings of the Triumvirate, and through this, he found his calling for the rest of his life. He takes great pride in being a monk and praises the Triumvirate for bringing him here,despite his condition which messed up the alignment of the eyes, usually gathering some insults over them.

Who were the Celestial Triumvirate?:

Lord Tariel of the Stars, Lord Keldrith of the Sun, and LAdy Rellenia of the Moon.

A Lost traveler come to the Sanctuary and asks, "Monk, where am I and how might I find my way?" How do you respond?:

*Brennan smiles at the lost Halfling benevolently*

"Go to the docks near the yellow path, there is a free boat to the Vale there. May your journey across the sea be safe, and may the Triumvirate watch over you."

*Brennan leads the Halfling to the docks, waving him off as the boat leaves for the Vale and sighs afterwards*

"Another one off into the world, it's a good thing."

Screenshot of Your Monk's Skin (Robes must be one of the three colors and similar in base to Posted Image with or without a beard):

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Anything else you'd like to say:

Tacos.

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To Strife Talos, Tacos? We expect great things from you. But you should change the trim on the robes if you want to be dedicated to Rellenia or Tariel, whom have very few dedicants right now. Edit: Void

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Your Minecraft Username:

Temple_Monks

Your Monk's Name:

Monk Neri

Have you read and agree to follow the rules?:

Yes, I have.

Your Monk's Personality:

Cheerful, persevering, yet also tenacious and somewhat sassy at times, although she knows when to have fun and when to draw the line. She is somewhat of a magpie when it comes to some things, although she controls it quite well.

A Very Brief Bio:

Neri was a member of the few Monks who live on Adyton. She was reared from birth by the other two monks of her group after they found her. She learnt very quickly the ways of the Monks and their beliefs, as well as other skills. She is a good fighter, using unarmed techniques and her lithe body to win aggressive encounters when it calls for it. She is a strong believer in only self-defense, but will act out when it's called for. From a young age she was remarked upon for having a affinity to fire, often found near fireplaces and other burning things, much to her guardian's distress. At the age of 19, she left her Guardians and moved to the mainland aboard the ship to the Cloud Temple docks, leaving her old life behind.

Who were the Celestial Triumvirate?:

Lord Tariel of the Stars, Lady Rellenia of the Moon and Lord Keldrith of the Sun.

A Lost traveler come to the Sanctuary and asks, "Monk, where am I and how might I find my way?" How do you respond?:

You are in the Cloud Temple - a place where all may come to rest and co-operate and share in eternal armistice under the watchful gaze of our Order, the Wilven Monks.

Where would you like to go? There are signs around the Temple giving you directions to general landmarks, but if you need detailed directions, i'm sure I could rustle up a map or two to help you on your way...

A Screenshot of Your Monk's Skin:

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Anything else you'd like to say:

-bows- Thank you for your time!

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Your Minecraft Username:

Temple_Monks

Your Monk's Name:

Monk Neri

Have you read and agree to follow the rules?:

Yes, I have.

Your Monk's Personality:

Cheerful, persevering, yet also tenacious and somewhat sassy at times, although she knows when to have fun and when to draw the line. She is somewhat of a magpie when it comes to some things, although she controls it quite well.

A Very Brief Bio:

Neri was a member of the few Monks who live on Adyton. She was reared from birth by the other two monks of her group after they found her. She learnt very quickly the ways of the Monks and their beliefs, as well as other skills. She is a good fighter, using unarmed techniques and her lithe body to win aggressive encounters when it calls for it. She is a strong believer in only self-defense, but will act out when it's called for. From a young age she was remarked upon for having a affinity to fire, often found near fireplaces and other burning things, much to her guardian's distress. At the age of 19, she left her Guardians and moved to the mainland aboard the ship to the Cloud Temple docks, leaving her old life behind.

Who were the Celestial Triumvirate?:

Lord Tariel of the Stars, Lady Rellenia of the Moon and Lord Keldrith of the Sun.

A Lost traveler come to the Sanctuary and asks, "Monk, where am I and how might I find my way?" How do you respond?:

You are in the Cloud Temple - a place where all may come to rest and co-operate and share in eternal armistice under the watchful gaze of our Order, the Wilven Monks.

Where would you like to go? There are signs around the Temple giving you directions to general landmarks, but if you need detailed directions, i'm sure I could rustle up a map or two to help you on your way...

A Screenshot of Your Monk's Skin:

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Anything else you'd like to say:

-bows- Thank you for your time!

Accepted based on roleplay with her. *is slightly confused how you are on with only one post.

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