Blocks Application

[Block 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

Blockcraft1234

How old are you?:

14.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

USA Texas(i suppose Central USA Time)

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

Im smart, sorta nerdy/cool fun playing, i like roleplaying, i get along with people very well, make friends fast, kinda funny.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

15 hours(maybe more).

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Roleplaying in my opionon is taking the role of a person you make up, giving the guy you make up his own backstory, his own talents, etc.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

Runescape roleplaying and minecraft roleplaying.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Useing out of game info while roleplaying.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:

Hard to explain but i,ll try my best, Powergaming is like, well i,ll give an example, i used to play this game called runescape and i roleplayed one time i knocked this dude out and he attacked me but all he said in chat was -attacks Guarger- and didnt give me time to react in any way possible, also i had knocked him out, forceivully pushing the odds in his favour, another time was this dude walked into the bar and said -casts a massive fireball and burns blahblahblah to ashes and burns down bar-.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

Hopefully better than Calsky.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

Calsky, i left cause there was always non rp kills constantly and ban reports all over the forums.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

I Promise.

How did you hear about us?:

People on Calsky forums raging saying there going to LOTC.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

No.

In-Character:

Character Name:

Guarger.

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :

Human.

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Out in the woods, Far away from all the excitement in Asulon lived Guarger, For 4 years Guarger was raised by his parents till they died from a illness, a traveling monk was passing by to find Guarger crying on the ground outside his house, Guarger was taken to a monastery where he was raised as a warrior monk, Guarger had made a friend, Gregory, another planned-to-be warrior monk, when Guarger reached the age of 14 he was a experenced warrior, Gregory and Guarger trained constantly and finally showed there strength and tactics when a group of bandits decided to raid the monastery, during the raid Gregory was killed, over the next few years in anger he continuously trained hard and long, a few weeks later the bandits attacked again, remembering the death of his friend he butchered the bandits, the monks learned that Guarger was getting out of hand within the monasteries closed walls, when Guarger reached 18 he was told it was time for him to leave the monastery, Guarger gave his farewells and left, this had been the first time in years he'd been outside the monastery, ready to prove himself to the world he set off, the monk at the gate had told him a good place to start out would be Cloud Temple, with adventure in his heart Guarger set out for Cloud Temple.

What are your Character's ambitions?:

To become a great warrior, and participate in many battles.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

The sword.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

sword to sword combat.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

=http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/688/20120704005739.png/]

Other Information about your Character:

Nothing.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

I would walk up and tell the warriors to leave the halfling alone, and if they did'nt i would have to get my sword bloody.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

I would ask him for his wares and i would barter a discount.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

I would leave it alone and keep walking.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

I would ask for water and food.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

I would help the town guard take down the bandits.

Anything else you would like to say?:

Please consider.

[Cappy 1599]

Reasons:

• Your definitions of role-playing and metagaming could be expanded. In addition, your powergaming definition could use clarification.
  
• Grammar and punctuation helps a lot. "I", "I'll" and "I'm" should be capitalised, as well as using apostrophes ( ' ) instead of commas in "I'll" and "I'm"
  
• Your biography needs to be two paragraphs, not a small wall of text. It also needs to include a description of your character's appearance and personality.
  
• Your Open Response Questions need to be expanded. A short paragraph at least would be nice. Some ways to expand on them would be to explain in more detail what your character does, and also explain why they do it, and "what's going through their head" at the moment. You should also include both detailed actions and dialogue in your answers.
  
• Be mindful of villainous actions. In your first Open Response Question, you implied your character would commit murder. To commit murder in anything other than a provoked (ie. life or death) situation, you must have an accepted villain application. Make sure you read over the villain rules (here) so that you are aware of what you can and cannot do without applying for a villain application.
  

If you have any queries relating to this application, please do not hesitate to PM me on the forums!

I'm not that scary and usually don't bite.

You may reapply in 24 hours

[Cappy 1599]

Moved to Denied Forum