Skysoldier2S Submission

[skysoldier 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

Skysoldier2

How old are you?:

12 years old

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Eastern Standard/USA

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

I good with English is I am bad at spelling.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

Im a person who likes to interact with people. I like to be creative and think out loud.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

24+ hours

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Roleplaying to me is when you create someone who follows a story in your way.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

I play Roleplaying games all the time like skyrim and Runescape

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Meta-Gaming is when you use a outside information to give your character information they dont know about like you know a character before meeting them

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:

Power-Emoting is when you make someone do something they dont to do like they haft to kill somebody

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect that it will be like any other RPG(Quests, bounty's,etc)

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I've played on one that got outdated and it was abandoned.Another one had too many specific Rule's for everything.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

I read/Understand/Agree to all rules.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

I promise to follow all rules and laws.

How did you hear about us?:I went onto the minecraft forms and found the server.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:No

In-Character:

Character Name:

Chuck

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :

Elf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Wood Elf

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Chuck is the oldest of three childeren at age 15, he lives with a family who is in a caravan of 3 different family's. Since his family is always on the move he never make any other friends except the other caravan members children and their all boy so he cant find true love. Chuck's father and himself are the ones who go hunting and sometimes his second oldest brother comes to. Chuck uses his Bow to hunt while his father uses the family iron sword and the brother uses his wooden toy sword. When the caravan hit the Dark Forrest Chuck became very suspicious so he got his bow an he watched the Forrest carefully for anything. As Chuck was watching the Forrest he noticed something move very fast in the shadows, it looked like person, Then he sees more and more, soon after that he told his father which he told the other members of the caravan. While

Chuck was waiting in the cart he noticed everything move to the right, Then he realized that the cart was being flipped over and he hear swords slashing and clashing, He got out and joined the fight as he was shooting arrows he saw all the other family(Wives and Children) running away when he turned his head back the fathers were being captured with rags on their heads. Chucks first instinct is too run away from being outnumbered, So he runs into the woods with at least 4 guys chasing him when he loses him he looks around to see where he is he is lost so from the surroundings and the item he took from the cart he does his best to make armor but instead of making it a real set of armor he made a Skeleton King out fit that would scare anyone. As Chuck walks in the Forrest hungry he knows that his family is still alive so he knows what he hast to do, he hast to reunite his family.

What are your Character's ambitions?:

To reunite his family

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

His hunting bow

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

Archery

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

http://i.imgur.com/LwwWG.png

Other Information about your Character:

He's fast and emotional

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?Hey you two how would it feel if that happened to you. They turn around and pull up their swords and start to run. I run while they chase me, The halfling runs while the two warriors are looking at me, since im fast I outrun them completely.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

My caracter would ask if he needed help for some free food. The person says no and Chuck says thank you for your time.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

I would take the items and ask the people in the nearest town if the belonged to anyone. No one claimed it I would put the sword back sense I have My trusty hunting bow and keep the iron to improve my Skeleton king Costume.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

I would scrape up the most minas(3) I have and try to buy something like chicken. As you walk to the exit you see some supply's that might help you fix the chunk of gold missing from some bandit's sword. Yuo look to see if anybody is looking you take 2 of the 6 gold ingots laying their. Then he saw an arrow hit the wooden pillar from the trader so I run away into the woods so that the trees can block the arrows.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

I would immediately go up to the leader as ask to help. The Guard Captain would say go away freak and take off your mask and maybe Ill let you do it. You walk away angrily thinking I can do it. You walk the road and you see the bandits so you go on top of the hill looking at the as one sees you he notify's the other bandits. Three charge up and 2 die from my bow while the other cuts the gold off on the left side of my mask, you hit him down the hill knocking himself out by hitting his head at the bottom of the hill.The other three run away quickly, While the guards come the see Chuck and what he did, Chuck walks away happily.

[Thu'um 530]

Denied.

Please reapply after 24 hours.

Overall, I felt that your application was lacking effort and depth, here is the reasoning for your denial:

Your Metagaming Definition could have been elaborated upon, it was not entirely specific.

Your Powergaming Definition is Incorrect.

Your Roleplaying Definition is Incorrect.

Your character's forename, "Chuck" is not a suitable Elven name. It doesn't quite fit role-play.

It is suggested that your character have a surname.

Your Biography does not have any implementation of lore.

This statement in your biography is not RP;

but instead of making it a real set of armor he made a Skeleton King out fit that would scare anyone.

Your skin is not in the correct format.

Your Open Response Questions lack depth and do not provide me a true display of your ability to role-play.

There are various grammatical errors in your application.

[Thu'um 530]

Moved to Denied Forum