[Denied]shadowwy

[shadowwy 0]

Minecraft Account Name: shadowwy

How old are you? 16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Finland

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes, I do.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes, I have been playing in many RolePlay servers.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: I do.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: I found in Minecraft forums.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: N/A

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:I think I need to do this.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: RolePlaying is like being another person,

example, you can be fat nerd behind computer, but while RolePlaying you can be brave hero.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: In RolePlaying. it means that you tell people you have something that you have not really permission/possibilities to get.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: It's that you show while RP'ing how powerfull you can be, like someone is walking down the street, and you just go and kill him.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Hyren LightBlade

Character Race: Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Ran from home and became Paladin.

Age: 20

Appearance: Iron armor whole time on and helmet with golden trims, his normal length high and he likes Leather boots. He have white tabard red cross on it.

Personality: He have lived by the rules of Paladins so he doesn't know better than be honest and loyal.

Usually his cold but polite as his own ways.

His warm hearted and very friendly to people who he feels as good friends, and His very VERY loyal to friends, espesially for his mentor.

History: He were born in rich merchant family, his parents wanted Hyren to be an scribe of an old wicked man, so Hyren ran away from home.

As his travels he met and old paladin, who became his "mentor".

When he was around 10, he killed his first enemy in combat, and cause of that, he got the extra name "LightBlade".

Then when he filled 20, His training was done and he was free to leave.

Now he travels and tries to find people who needs help, and goes from city to city trying to make impression on commanders and captains in the army.

of course his looking new friends and places to live when he next time visits.

What are your characters ambitions?: He wants to be a Commander in the army.

also to get nice house from a big city.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: He sometimes drinks with Dwarves while visiting there, and he likes to be with the druids and just relax.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? I buy something from him and pay way more than enough.

Then I will recommend him to everyone and hopefully he will get alot of customers.

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I will ask politely the Orc to leave, if he refuses I might need to use violent on him.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: I stop his fall and I give him his bag of Minas, then I will escort him as fast as I can to nearest town/City for medical help. Then I will find him better and stronger walking stick.

[mmat 7460]

Under review.

[mmat 7460]

- Both your meta-gaming and power-emoting definitions are incorrect.

- Your biography needs to be more detailed and needs server lore in it.

- Your open response questions will need to be a lot more detailed.

- The formatting on your application looks somewhat ugly, it would be beneficial to recolour the answers and questions.

Correct these errors and reapply in 24 hours.

[mmat 7460]

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