[Denied]My Application

[Trevormurray 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: trevormurray

How old are you?: 16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Gmt, United states

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes i have a very good grip on English due to the fact that people with bad grammar is very annoying.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes i love to roleplay it is very fun and i look forward to roleplaying on this server.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes i have read, understood, and agreed to the rules.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: I was looking up new servers on youtube and i chanced upon this one.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:This is my first

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: The Act of role-playing is not just a few words, it is getting into your character and deciding everything based upon who your character is and what he or she does. Essentially it is becoming one with your character.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Meta gaming is using outside knowledge to influence your in game decisions.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power-emoting is being able to express yourself through expressions instead of words, adding a way to express what you or your in game character is feeling.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Glandallin Hammerfist

Character Race: Dwarf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Glandallin Hammerfist is descended from the clan of mighty Hammerfists. His Clan was betrayed at it's most dire moment when orcs were pounding on their gates a dwarf opened the gates and descended upon those who weren't dead already. The greatest sorrow in the world is being gone when your clan needs you most, as his clan fell he was out hunting with his father. Glandallin came home to find corpses strewn across the hold, vowing oaths of revenge he set out to eventually remake the clan and get his vengeance upon orcs.

Glandallin Is a true dwarf short but strong as the mountains unbending to no one. His will is as iron and so is his set of morals. He is but 4 seasons old ready to embark upon his mission of reforging the clan. He is average height with a nice brown and reddish beard. Being a young dwarf he is very curious of everything and quite intelligent. He feels at home when on the battle field or at home working the forge. There is nothing more trusty to him then his axe and he is very hard to gain trust from. He hates all forms of trickery and will see fit to punish those who prey on others.

What are your characters ambitions?: His ambitions are to raise enough money to rebuild the Clan of Hammerfists who have been long forgotten.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: The screenshot will be in the attached file.

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: I would like to say that there is nothing he wants more then to be able to build his clan in the Realm of Asulon.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? Hail good dwarf, why are though in this city of humans instead of with thine own race? Be you a strong arm in the battlefield and a trusty man? Perhaps a miner or of any craft useful to an adventurer? If that be true i'd like you to join me for i am in need of good men. If you be willing i shall meet with you in the local tavern. We will drink of the victories to come!

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? *walks over to them* Is that orc bothering you good dwarf? *after hearing yes he steps in between them* Go back to your filthy hole you blubbering tub of lard! *the orc grabs hold of his weapon* This is your last chance step away from my kinsman or taste the steel of my axe! *orc tries to attack and is killed* If you be in need of an adventure i'd be much obliged to welcome you to mine clan! I am of the Hammerfists notorious for our works at the forge.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: *rush to the side of the fallen man and help him up* Good man take a seat here while i help gather your belongings. *pick up his minas and hand it back to him* You look in need of a good stick let me fetch you a better one. *fetches better stick* There you go, would you like to camp here for the night with me i have some extra food if you would like? *sets up camp*

[Wizard 125]

Under Review.

[Wizard 125]

Denied.

Power-emoting definition is wrong.

Please use accepted dwarf lore in your biography. You can't just make up a powerful clan. 2 paragraphs needed.

For first OR, please include more dialogue from the dwarf. Make it very detailed and animated.

No screenshot.

[Wizard 125]

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