[Denied]Aedens application (uberninja111)

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Out-Of-Character Details

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Minecraft Account Name:uberninja111

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:eastern standered zone.

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:yesHave you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:yes I have played on a few servers.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: From the old Impact server forums.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!: Yes I have

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:Roleplaying is when you act as a charactor and use his knowledge not your own.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:Metagaming is the usage of out of charactor information or knowledge while roleplaying.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:Power Emoting is when you use a emote (such as /me) to do a action, leaving the other player with no option to resist.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Aeden Wolfheart

Character Race: Wood Elf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:My story starts out like any other yet it twists and turns like the leaves of a tree. My name is Aeden Alhada. I grew up like any boy, yet my life is like no other. When I was born my parents say there was a peace in the forest. They thought that it was a sign that I would be peaceful, they were wrong. As I grew up I just wanted to get away from my home, I wanted to explore the vast world. Sadly I would get my wish. While I was outside our home I found a wolf, I fed it and took it home. After bathing it and giving it a name I was told to go to bed, while I slept the wolf turned. It ran downstairs to get some food, where my mother stepped on its tail. The wolf snarled at her then ripped the skin on her face and neck. My father ran in the room with a knife in his hands and I watched with fearful eyes as they fought. I watched as my father was bitten in the arm, and then wolf stabbed in the chest, then my father dropping the knife and staring at the place where his hand used to be. The wolf stared at the hole in its heart. Both the wolf and my father collapsed into the pile of blood.

I sat at my father’s side his head in my lap and stared into his clouded eyes. I dragged the body of my mother next to my father. I dug two days till the tomb was finished. I said my final goodbyes and pulled the rope to release the stone, as it covered the tomb I cried my last tear. I grabbed my pack my bow and my father’s knife and left my home, the wolf’s cooked flesh in my bag. I am now far away from my old home, from the stone tomb covered with flowers. My heart behind buried in my parents tomb.What are your characters ambitions?:To explore the world, and find comfort for his grieving heart.

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Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in role-play. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human; he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? As I enter the great city of Arethor I see a small shop on the corner. I walk over to ask the man what there is to see n the city. As I walk up I see that the shop owner is a small dwarf, his eyes are bagged from days without sleep and he looks of poverty. "Hello kind sir how are you today" I ask as I walk up to his counter. Startled the man jumps up, seeing that I mean no harm he sits back down "I'm sorry if I startled you lad, I am just not used to a friendly face in this city". I stare at his face and can imagine his hardships "Why are you being tormented, who would torment a poor dwarf". He stares at me and his eyes light up as he speaks "You are a kind soul my friend, where have you come from?” “My story is a long one" I say "But if you have the time I will tell you all". So I did, as he sat in his chair I told my story from beginning to the present day. After I was done he stared into my eyes then stood, "My boy" he says to me "Today you have told me a story that would put my petty struggles to shame, but I have nothing to give you so why befriend me?” I gave him a smile and said "I have helped you because I could see in your eyes you need it" and with that I removed one of my pouches of coins and gave them to the man. He looked me in the eyes and a tear rolled down his cheek "my friend" he says "take for you this sword, it is elfish like yourself, but was once wielded by my father". I stare at the sword, it was covered in stones of a greenish color. I thank the man but tell him I must move on. He says three words before I go "Goodbye my friend". "Good luck to you I call back to him"

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? As I walk down the Oren Road I see an orc and a dwarf. The orc is standing over the dwarf and wielding a knife. I sneak into the shadows and draw my bow from my shoulder. As I step out the shadows I call to the orc “why torment a poor dwarf that has no weapon to his name?” “who are you to question me elf?” He yelled to me. As he was speaking to me the dwarf ran out of his reach. “You fool” he called to me “that dwarf has stolen my food and coins; and he has killed my son while we slept”. I looked into the orc’s eyes and saw behind the anger a deep sorrow. I turned and shot my arrow into the back of the retreating dwarf.”Thank you elf, you are forever welcome in my home” the orc says after the dwarf is dead “I will now leave to bury my son” “I have a gift for your sons grave” I tell the orc “a jungle seed to grow a weeping bush. “Thank you” the orc says as I walk down the road once again.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenseless man. What does your character do? As I walk down the road to Malinor I see a old man stumbling along in front of me. His face old and wrinkled with age, his walking stick frail and splintered. As I am about to ask him if he needs any help his walking stick breaks. I watch as he falls slowly to the ground, as he falls to the ground a bag of minas drop from his pocket. I run quickly over to the man helping him to a nearby rock, I grab the coins off the ground and give them to him.”Are you okay sir?” I ask the old man, apparently deaf he provides no answer so I check his body for wounds, finding none I go off and find a good sturdy stick and carve him a walking stick. I hand it to him and he walks off into the sunset.

[Skippy 2466]

Denied.

Reasoning for Denial - Please improve the below!

• Role-Playing definition needs to be defined better and with more detail.
  
• Power-Gaming definition is a tad off. It's not necessarily not allowing the to resist said emote.
  
• Your biography needs to include lore from the server.
  

You may reapply in 24 hours after denial when changes have been made.

[Skippy 2466]

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