[Denied]My third app for my dwarf gherren

[thaddeus11 75]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:Thaddeus12

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:est, The U.S

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes I do have a good grip on the English grammar and language.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:Yes, I played on a server called hollow world, but it's roleplaying was to weak for me, and as I have herd this is The server to be on when role-playing

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes, I have and agree to follow them.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:My friend, IGN is Arkenos_GoldHand.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/71376-my-2nd-applacation-for-my-cave-dwarf-gherren/page__p__574975__fromsearch__1#entry574975 and http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/71275-my-application-for-my-dwarf-gherren/page__p__573748__fromsearch__1#entry573748

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!: yes I have.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:Role-Playing is when you and a friend act something sutch as a deadly war or a friendly battle!

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:Meta-Gaming is when you go out of charter and start doing or saying things your charter does not currently know.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:power-emoting or otherwise known as god-emoting is when you tell someone to do something they don't want or wont do.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Gherren.

Character Race:Cave Dwarf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:Gherren was born in a village.When he was born he had already Had bits of hair on his head and chin.Without a doubt his parents named him Gherren because that was the name they had choose if it was a boy.His father was a town miner and Gherrne took interest in mining as if he was destined to do it all his life.At the age of 7 Gherren was given a Stone pick, His father told him that this stone pick was from his father and his fathers father,Gherren from that moment on carried that pick every where.When gherren was 12 his father decided to take him to work and show him how to properly make mine-shafts.Gherren had started to make his own mine shaft in side the public mine but only with his father at his side.When Gherren turned 17 he got his first job as a miner and then latter at the age of 24 was promoted to head-miner where he decided to make sure every last dwarf in that mine was making proper mine-shafts as his dad had told him to.

When gherren turned 100 he decided to move out of his village and go to a greater place, Gherren then found his place and made his own little village with a population of 7.When Gherren made sure all the foundations for the village was finished he told his 2 best miners to start digging stairs down to a lever where they could easily find diamonds.Gherren afterwards decided move to the big city where he would then look for a miners position at the age of 127 years old.

What are your characters ambitions?:Gherren is looking to make all mines he come across perfect.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:no i have put every thing i wish to tell about my charter.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?*Gherren walks up to the Poor dwarf.Hello good sir do you have any Picks for sale.I would like to buy that one.* Hands bag of minas to poor dwarf.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?My charter would go and ask the The Dwarf and Orc why they are fighting and then if it is a good reson for the orc to be angry at the dwarf he would walk away, but if not he would go and get help for the dwarf.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:My Charter walks up to the old man slowly helps him up and after making sure he is OK pick up the minas slowly puting them back in the bag giving them back to the old man and help him to his destination.

I would also like to ass I can NOT post my skin so if you could message me how to i would love to do that.

[Skippy 2466]

Under Review.

[Aryon 679]

Denied.

You don't exactly seem to be listening to what people said before. Again; Insert lore into your biography. Make sure that you expand your open-response questions, and your meta-gaming and power-emoting definitions.

Please re-apply in 24 hours.

[Aryon 679]

Moved to Denied Forum