Doctor_Allen's Application

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Out-Of-CharacterDetails

Minecraft Account Name: [\color] Doctor_Allen

How old are you?:[\color] 16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: USA (America), EST

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes, three other small servers, all of which died out.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: Friends

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:None

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum?If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! : Yes I Have

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: It is basically creating a fictional story and acting it out in realtime with others

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Meta-gaming is using OCC knowledge to your characters advantage.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Powergaming is making character's actions be dominant over anothers or giving them unfair advantages

An example of Metagaming:

Bruce: "((Hey I am at Cloud Temple))"

Chuck: *Goes to cloud temple knowing occ but not ic that Bob will be there and roundhouse-kicks him*

An example of Powergaming:

Messenger: "This is madness!"

Beowulf: "This is Asulon!!!" *Kicks Messenger into a pit before he has time to retort*

Now here is a grand work (not really :P) of fiction:

In-Character Details

Character Name: Doctor Allen

Side Note: (Goes by Doc regularly)

Character Race: Human

Character biography -Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Allen is a nineteen yearold male. He has black hair, brown eyes. He is tall and slender in his appearence. Allen stands at 2 blocks tall (about six feet) and with 120 pounds. With such a light weight and thin figure, it is a wonder how he is still alive. This light weight makes him swift/dexterous but also very frail. So frail that when he takes a single powerful blow, it can knock him out of a fight for awhile. Though he lacks in strength, he can make up for it with his intellect and knowledge on the strange red material (redstone). He can get violent went when angered but that seems to never happen. More and more often, you see him start more fights indirectly but still manages to avoid ever getting into physical conflicts through one way or another.

His history begins strangely at age nine. As the sun begins to set, Allen wakes up on warm beach sand on the coast. He has no recollection of what happened the day before. When thinking back, he has no memory about his life at all! He retains things such as language and his education but nothing such as names. He begins to look for information about himself other than his first name, the only thing he could remember about his life. Finding a backpack next to where he collapsed on the beach, he runs over to open it. Enclosed is a burnt book with unreadable content, various pages appearing to be plans thrown together, and some food and water. With nothing else to do but continue to search information, he continues on and eventually finds a path leading away from the beach into a forest.

The path lead to a town well placed on a bluff high above the ocean waves. This is going to be where he spends most of his life. When going into town, it seemed no one could recognise him. It was clear this was not his home. It was not to hospitable either considering there was three attempts to pick his empty pockets. He eventually made his way to a building that was somewhat near the edge of the bluff. It was a local library. It was also unattended. Perhaps it was closed? Being the most abandoned place in town, it was also the safest. Allen decided to make his home here.

Having finally settled in, Allen survived the same way the town thugs did: cat burglary. He took what he could from the town and sold it for necessities. Eventually Allen needed something to keep him busy. when he looked around him to see a vast collection of books. This is how he earned his nickname Doctor. He read all the books he could and eventually grew his knowledge to that of a royal scholar. He applied this knowledge into many creations which he kept in a cave on the cliff side. This was his workshop.

The town that became his home eventually was the thing that drove him away. The authority of this area decided to crack down on the scum of the village. They ordered the immeadate capture and execution of the lawbreakers, no matter how severe the crime was. The library which was his home was raided. He had to make a quick escape. He made is way down to his secret cave and grabbed everything he could and put it in his backpack. The guards who quickly entered drove him back. His last resort, diving into the water. Allen was presumed dead. Enclosed in the backpack was everything he could grab: the burnt book, some of his plans and the plans he had originally, and some food and water.

Awaking on a coast the next day, trying to forget about what happened to his home, he proceded to a road nearby it led to the Cloud Temple of Asulon.

What are your characters ambitions?: To find the secret of the original plans and the burnt book and wherever this new place takes him could open up more.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: Not much

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph,and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay.These questions should be answered in first person.Be detailed,not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by.The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

He would be unable to afford anything. After thinking of what happened to the poor of the village he was in and what the local authority did to them, he would refrain from stealing from someone so frail.

You’re wandering the OrenRoad late at night,when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf.Thereisno help nearby,and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

Looking to help the poor man, Doc moves in to see what he can do.

RP:

Orc: Wrell awre you groing to gib meh eet?

Dwarf: *Trembles*

Doc: *In a mocking tone* Wrell wart is groing on hare?!

Orc: *Turns in rage to see who dares offend him*

Doc: *Kicks a small dagger to the dwarf while the orc is still turning*

Orc: Roo dare mrock meh?!

Doc: In words that you can understand: Yes.

Orc: *Prepares his fist*

Doc: *Looks and winks at the dwarf as he says:* Take your shot, I dare you.

Dwarf: *Picks up the dagger and jabbs the orc while his back is turned* Yelp!

Orc: *Yells in pain and falls to the ground*

Doc: *Grabs the orc's minas and throws some to the dwarf* *Begins to walk away*

Orc: *Delivers a powerful blow to Doc before he fully gets out of range*

Doc: *Cringes, recovers and keeps walking* I think we are done here. *Leaves before the orc has a chance to catch up*

Dwarf: *Runs in fear*

Walking down the road to Malinor you stumble upon an old man walking stick looks weak frail and just as you are about to ask something the stick breaks the man falls to the ground. As he falls down a bag of Minas falls to the ground,and splits open As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenseless man.What does your character do?:

Allen would get down to the man and check out the situation.

RP:

Man: *Reaches for the bag*

Doc: *Steps on his hand* sorry but, just in case... Well, you know...

Man: No please! My family!

Doc: *Gathers up the minas*

Man: Wait no!

Doc: *Hands the man his money and his own walking stick* You should be more careful next time.

Man:*Sighs in relief* You could've been less brutal...

Doc: Don't mention it. *Walks away flipping one of the old man's coins* (He did not take all of the coins, Just one of small value.)

Thanks for reading. Hope to see you guys on the server soon!

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Remove the reference to blocks in the bio, as this is an OOC mechanic that shouldn't appear in an IC work. You cannot apply as a criminal, as this requires a Villain Application.

Expand on the first Open Response Question.

Cannot steal in the second or third ORQs without a Villain Application.

The ORQs should read more like stories and not movie scripts, including action and dialogue.

Broken formatting. Copy and paste the format exactly as it is without changing anything.

A really good first attempt, but it needs some adjusting.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[Cappy 1599]

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