[Denied][Orc App] Saviik Application

[Saviik 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: Salmast3r

How old are you?: Can't tell. 10-13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: USA East Coast time. I think GMT -4:00

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: color] I do have a good grip on the English language.[/

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: I have roleplayed on ROBLOX and in real life with friends.[/

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes sir/m'am

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: I was on minecraftskinspro.com and I saw the section of skins for Lord of the Craft server

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: I think they got deleted from the forum. This is my first time in 3 months.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:Roleplaying is the act of taking the role of an imaginary or real person from the future or the past. You act like them and actually become into them in the process

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:Meta-gaming is using the environment around that does not exist inside the limits of your game/strategy.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:In power-emoting you just roleplay by your own ways. You do not let people react. Let's use this as an example, "I kill you and you do not block or survive."

In-Character Details

Character Name:Saviik

Character Race:Human/Orc

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: I am Saviik Leblanc. I was raised in Arethor as a strong Squire. My home village was burnt down as a small child, around 10 years old. They killed my mother and took my brother. Now, I am 25 years old and I am searching what to do here in Arethor. I have come to the mainland to seek for a job as a mercenary or as a soldier enlisted into the army. I have green eyes, brown hair and tan skin. My father has trained me because he was an ex-soldier from the army. He taught me the art of the sword, and I try to master it day by day.

I am a married man, but have left my family to come and fight for our money and our life. So far, it has not come well. I have been working for people as a mercenary. This is my destiny, and I will come and serve for my family!

What are your characters ambitions?:To avenge my mother's death and my brother's capture.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: http://www.minecraftskinspro.com/default.asp?action=readreviews&link=165116

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: No.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?I walk down the street and spot this old dwarf. His wares are old and rusted, but I find something that spots my eye. A slim sword is laying there on his small counter. I slip out some gold coins and hand them to him. I grab my sword and walk away, happy with my new weapon.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I walk towards the quarrel. "Hey! No need to fight. Whichever one of you started this must end this. Nobody deserves to be treated like this." I stare at both of them, and they nod back. "Now go to where you came from!" I continue my journey, feeling satisfied to help other people.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenseless man. What does your character do?: I run towards him and pick him up. I then give him a small sword for him to help him up. It is pretty sturdy to help him towards his destination. I grab his bag and pick up the Minas. I return them to him. "Stay out of trouble." I hand them to him and watch him reach the city.

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[Skippy 2466]

Your meta-gaming definition is incorrect, and you must redo it. You can not be half human half orc, even if that was allowed, you show no traits of it at all. Your skin is not shaded, nor does it look pleasing at all. I request you get a better one, one that looks more realistic. You must include dialog into your ORQs. You must also act out all characters involved in the ORQ. Meaning, it is not just your character talking and doing things.

Reapply in 24 hours.

[Skippy 2466]

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