[Denied]Darksouls Application

[darksouls 0]

]Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: mrwitchdoctor

How old are you?: 13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:(UTC+10:00) Brisbane/Australia

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes I do

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:yes I've played on multiple servers and video games involving roleplay.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes i understand and agree to the rules

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:I was searching for a good roleplay server and lord of the craft came up straight away

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:i have made 2 but they where either out dated or missed information

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? Yes i have posted it My name is mrwitchdoctor

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of role playing is: creating and narrating a character of your own creation and acting in away that fits with the atmosphere or lore of the area you are in

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:using knowledge of a game to influence your own actions within the game

in a usually unsporting way

-In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:it is forcing the result of someones actions on another character (power-emoting is heavily frowned on in most role play games and servers)

-In-Character Details

-Character Name: darksouls

-Character Race:elf (dark elf)

Biography: A young elf known as Araden darksouls growing up in an elven village when ever someone was in need of help he was there . On the night of his father’s death his mother went silent, she never talked to anyone again it was almost like she blamed the town people for his death but when young Araden heard this he only blamed himself out of all the people he helped why was he not there for his mother. When he reached age 16 he went out to in the world hoping he could do something for the world to comfort people in there time of sadness to aid people in there battles to ease there pain. When he was returning home he saw a small boy rushing down one of the Main roads unaware of his presence he stopped the child and asked why he was running the boy said his mother was ill and he was running to find a doctor to make a potion that could help her when they got to the doctor the child only now realized he had no coins to pay for the potion then he saw a single tear running down the young boy face this reminded Araden of when he lost his father and could do nothing so he handed the young boy 50 coins. After getting the potion Araden accompanied the young boy to his house as they went inside it was so quiet you could hear the water splashing beneath the wood they both moved into the small room on the right side of the house and there laid under the covers a women quivering clenching the sheets for warmth, Araden held the women up but just before giving her the potion she said "I do not know you but please take my boy to Malinore there is an elven women there my sister she can take care of him". Araden made the long journey to Malinore he asked an elf man if he knew this women he directed them to the road beside Araden knocked on the door hearing someones feet hastely going down stairs she opened the door as soon as she saw the boys face she new what happened she then dropped to the ground and placed her face in her palms i bent down to help her up she then gathered her strength and asked us to come inside she explained that her and her sister made a promise that if something was to happen to her sister she would take care of her child Araden ased if they needed anymore help the women said she was fine and could take care of the boy, Araden left and headed back to his town but could not help think he could have done more. When Araden got home he saw the children playing in the streets and parents laughing as they told stories oblivious to the sadness that ocured almost a day ago. After Araden's he found out that his mother past away while he was traveling he walked to the villages graveyard a small but still big enough to hold the sadness of whole village he placed his hands on the tomb stone and said "im sorry i was never there forgive me" he then got up went home to gather his belongings and left the village he will help protect the good people of the world no matter what the cost.

appearance:tall dark grey skin blue eyes, white hair and cloths are black maroon white and grey

-What are your characters ambitions?: he constantly seeks allies and hates being alone because it reminds him of his father he lost.

-Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

This is an image of my skin but is not a screen shot i was unable to copy the URL of my screen shot

-Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: No

Open-Response-Questions

-Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

-Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? i ask the dwarf for any item he sells, i then give him a larger amount of minas then it is worth, as he trys to hand the minas back i tell him "keep it, business is hard around here and you work very hard" i walk off and give the dwarf a kind smile.

-You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I go up to the orc and tell him "there's an orc recruitment stand down the road that's asking for strong powerful orcs to sign up for a battle" (knowing the orc is egotistic and war hungry he rushes down the road) as the orc runs down the road i ask the dwarf if he is ok he does not answer he only says "thank you elf but your help was not needed" he then walks off up the road i quickly walk up the road as well knowing the orc has discovered that he has been tricked.

-Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do? I quickly rush down to help the man asking "are you all right that was a bad fall" i then get a piece of cloth gather the coins in it and hand the minas to the old man i offer the man my hiking stick in replace of his broken walking stick i ask the man "do you want me to help you get to Malinore it is not to far away from here" I then escort the old man to an Inn inside Malinore where i pay for his stay.

[Amorphbutt 199]

[mmat 7460]

You have posted this in the wrong forum, you were supposed to post it here. - http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/forum/28-application-submissions/

[Cappy 1599]

Moved to the correct forum. Please post all future applications in the "Application Submissions" forum.

[Queen of Aegis 174]

- You need to improve greatly on your biography and grammer

- Biography doesn't contain any server lore

- 1st ORQ is too short and lacks dialog from the dwarf

- 3rd ORQ; Where did you get the hiking stick from all of the sudden? You never said you had one in your biography

- It's 'Malinor' and not 'Malinore'

You may reapply in 24 hours after this post

If you have any questions feel free to PM me

~BoomBox~

[Queen of Aegis 174]

Moved to Denied Forum