[Denied][D] Blindpiratez' Application.

[Klorg 16]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: BlindPiratez

How old are you?: 16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Canada

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes, I would consider my grammar to be good. Although I am also always finding new ways to improve it.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes. I have had many experiences with roleplaying. My favourite types of games are always MMORPGs (Massive Multiplayer Online Role Playing Game). I've played MANY of those, and would love to try out a Minecraft one.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: I heard about it from my friends thomascovey, and bruinsboy7.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: This is my first one.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! : I did post.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is the act of staying in a characters shoes. You ARE the character. Not yourself.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Meta-Gaming is when you bring information, etc. from the real world into the game. For example, Salvador walks into his rocky, humble cave. He realizes he needs some rest. He sits down on his wooden chair and turns on his computer. He then begins to play Black Ops 2.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: The act of power-emoting is when you don't give the other player a chance to react. Example: Player_A walks up to Player_B. Player_A pickpockets Player_B. A non-example: Player_A likes ice cream.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Salvador Edrack

Character Race: Elf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Salvador had once lived a decent life. He had 2 brothers (Gobin, and Warrock), and 1 sister (Cylia). Salvador being the youngest of them all, he was 18. They were all elves. What about their parents, you may ask? They were assassinated, by God knows who. One day, the 4 elves had come back from hunting with deer, chicken, and bunny meat. Only to find their parents dead on the front porch. And so it all began. The 4 elves forged an alliance, and swore to find and kill the ones who murdered their parents.

So, let's talk about Salvador himself. He's quite the funny guy if you ask anyone in town. But he's pretty mysterious as well. He never shows his face, and is always covered up. He has blonde hair, and wears green clothes. His weapon of choice? A bow. Salvador has been hunting for years, and has mastered the skill of using a bow. One of his favourite things is to hunt. Over the years, he has killed birds, bunnies, deers, bears, and many more. When it comes to survival, Salvador is all set. He's obviously very agile, only being 20 years old.

Ok, back to the past. It's been a while after his parents were killed. One day, it was Salvador's turn to hunt for dinner. Gobin, Warrock, and Cylia were on their guard to defend their home. A couple hours later after hunting, Salvador had gotten deers, bunnies, and some fish. He also got some carrots and potatoes from their farm. When he returned, he noticed the blood on his porch. He dropped his items, and followed the trail. Then he found Warrock. Lying on the ground, and against the wall. Dead. He got devastated! Who would do this? Why his family? He searched, and found Cylia. An arrow right through her heart. He then hears a light moan. Gobin! Salvador finds Gobin. Blood is all over him. Gobin then opens his eyes, and whispers. "Avenge us Salvador. His name is--" And he falls dead. Salvador knows what to do, and is thirsty for blood.

What are your characters ambitions?: Salvador's ambitions are to get back in power, and get revenge on those who once murdered his family.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: http://gyazo.com/0af30bd95319e2f292a883b7a007c8a1

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: No. I explained as much as I possibly could.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? I see him, and he sees me. Our eyes meet, and I walk towards him. A smile comes to his face. "What would you like today sir?" asks the dwarf. His clothes are ripped, and obviously too big for him. I don't need anything today, but he does. "Nothing." I reply. "Just for you to get better clothes!" I say, and plunk a pouch full of 10 coins on the table. "Thank you sir! How can I ever repay you?" he asks? "You don't." And I walk away.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? "What's going on here?" I ask the two. "None of yer business fool!" The orc snarls at me. I take a step back and wield my bow. "He's going to kill me if I don't give him my money!" shouts the dwarf. I take a closer look at him. His face is familiar. "Shut yer mouth! Now hand it over, or die!" threatens the orc. I take another look at the dwarf, and it hits me. It's the poor dwarf that I gave money to! "Help!" the dwarf yells. I load my bow with an arrow and aim at the orc. "That's it." The orc raises his sword and I shoot for his head. But it had been too late. The dwarf takes his final breath, and falls to the ground. A split-second after, the orc notices a flailing arrow coming towards his face, and drops dead. I go and pick up the pouch of money the dwarf dropped. Only 6 coins left, and I realize that the dwarf had bought a new jacket. I take one last look, and walk away.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: I really could use some extra money after giving some to that dwarf... But the man is helpless. I'll have to help him. "Are you okay there sir?" I ask the old man. "Can you please use me money to get me a new walking stick?" "Sure." I reply. I pick up the bag and walk to the store. The pouch has 16 coins in it. A walking stick costs 3. I quietly slip 4 coins into my pocket. I buy the stick and walk back to the old man. I give him the stick, and his money pouch. "May God bless you young one." says the old man. He gets on his feet, and checks his pouch. He looks back at me and curses.

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Dead family in the bio is extremely cliché, and you might want to change this. If the people who killed the family of your character are not in-game, how will he ever be able to get his revenge? Please add some server lore to the bio, which can be found on the forums and wiki.

Cannot steal in the last Open Response Question without a Villain Application.

This is just below acceptance level and because of these minor details. I'm sure if you fix these and reapply you'd have excellent chances of being accepted.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

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