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[Phineas Maximus 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:PhineasMaximus

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:est

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:Yes

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:My friends showed me it.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:To follow the story and act as if you are someone else.To follow the rules and play right the entire time.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:It is the kind of game your play whether it is a strategy,action,or any kind of gaming your playing.It basically means a game univese outside the game itself.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:It is so you dont go crazy with power in the game and make the game bad for others.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Phineas Maximus

Character Race:Wood Elf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

My character is a Wood elf that got thrown out by his King Father Thadeuss.He was caught with a woman he was not to be with because, his father was aranging the marrige.He is a caucasion male with blue eyes blue knights armor and has brown hair.He loves to shoot arrows and build new houses for the village.He also help some blacksmiths back at his dads house.He is 23 years old and has great upper body strenghth.

He loves meeting new friends and new mates.He had some pets but they died.So hes looking for some new pets to be with him on his journey.He likes to cultivate the land and feed people with no food.Im am trying to join the rangers of the force or any kind of group that protect others.My other goal is to meet someone and settle down with 4 kids.

What are your characters ambitions?:My goals are to join a task force and then settle down with a family of my own.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:He is very kind and will be a good person to have on your server.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?I would look to see what he has for sale then i would make an even price that me and him would like.If he has nothing i need just keep on walking.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?I would step in and try to solve the conflict and if violence is the anwser then i have no choice but then to eliminate the one causing the problems.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

My character would do the right thing and help the man up and pick up all of his minas that fell out.And maybe hope for a reward.

Lord of the craft..rtf

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Explain specifically what previous roleplaying experience you’ve had.

Need to post on the Minecraft Forums before you can be accepted.

Clarify on all three definitions, they're sort of close but not entirely correct. You can find more information on the forums and wiki, but make sure to use your own words.

Cannot apply as the child of royalty. Wood Elves have brown skin, not pale as you suggest. 23 is young for an Elf, barely out of childhood. Please expand on the bio slightly.

Need to provide a skin screenshot, use THIS GUIDE as a reference.

Expand on all Open Response Questions and add dialogue.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[everblue2er101 906]

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