[Denied]Aura's Forum Application

[AuraTheHedgehog 3]

Ok before I begin.. please tell me if im doing this wrong.
Now.. lets get started.

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: AuraTheHedeghog
How old are you?: 13
Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Arizona/USA/Pacific/Mountain time
Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes
Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Sort of.. I can act like my character and have played roleplay servers a bit before.
Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes
How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: I found it on the recommended servers on minecraft forums.. I think the recommended servers is the right area..
Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: N/A
Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! : I will post it there. If I need to

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is playing the role of your character. EX: If your nice but your playing a villian.. be evil and act like how they would even if you wouldnt
In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Meta-Gaming is using tactics based on events of your opponent. EX: Bob watches Bill play chess and Bill is using a good move. Then Bob plays Bill in chess and counters the move like he knew it was coming.
In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power Emoting is using the /me command such as this.. Bob kills Bill or Bob stabs Bill

In-Character Details

Character Name: Igne Barbu (Fire Hedgehog) but most call him Aura or Igne
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Igne/Aura was born in an elven jungle village. At a young age he was taught how to wield a bow and eventually he got good at it. His life went on for a good while when then his village was burning and attacked. His parents, Illere Barbu (mom) and Avern Barbu (dad) were trapped in the fire. He escaped with a few elves, and two dwarfs, Oak the forest dwarf, and Stone the cave dwarf. While traveling to find a new home, the dwarfs taught him alot about mining and lumberjacking. Eventually, the dwarfs and the elves split up and he found his way to the elves capitol city of Normandor. He lived his life there and his number one goal is too find his parents and friends, and protect anymore villages from burning, because he still believes that some people from the burned village are alive.
His personality consists of shyness and quietness while also a sense of heroism and bravery along with courage. He is smart as well as tactiful with a bow. He looks like a 15 year old boy. His age is but a single century old. 100 years.

What are your characters ambitions?: He wants to keep the elf race protected and find his friends and family.
Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: Its in attachments sorry.
Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: My character loves to be up high and always wants to have a bow. 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? I go to him and ask him what he is selling. If he's selling things I want, I'll buy them. If not, I give him money for him making a new living.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? Grip my bow (just incase) and tell the orc to stop threatening the poor dwarf.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: I help the man up and give him his minas back and tell him to be careful, because some people wouldnt be as nice.

[Skippy 2466]

Denied.

 

Please redo all your definitions, they are lacking / and are wrong.

Dwarves aren't named after stone and oak.

Your ORQ responses are very lacking, short, and don't have dialog.  Please improve them.

Reapply in 24 hours.

[Skippy 2466]

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