[Denied]Application

[Tacoman23 2]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:

Tacodeliveryboy

How old are you?:

17

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Central of United States

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:

Yes I’m fluent

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:

No

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:

Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:

From a friend

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

 

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:

Taking place of a character in a fictional world and playing as them. Living their life in a way.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:

It is a poor way to play the game, and doesn’t follow the essence of roleplaying.(like talking to people on skype)Say if you were walking along a road and you got attacked asking someone on skype or mumble to come help you would be against the roleplaying aspect you should only do that in in-game roleplay chat.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:

This is taking advantage of typing delays when initiating conversation. For example, killing them while they are typing a response. Also it is attacking someone randomly without the villain application.

 

In-Character Details

Character Name:

Drong

Character Race:

Dwarf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Drong was born in the Asulon Moutains. His mother Sigrid died on child birth. Drong was her first and only child. His father Thorek was a blacksmith from Karik, where his family hailed. His father fled the city with his love into the mountains to escape the ancient evil lurking in Asulon. After Drong was born and his mother buried his father turned to drinking. As Drong grew up his father abused him, which in the long run toughened him up for the real world. By the time he was 13 his father had scared him, but also taught him life lessons. On Drong’s 15 birthday his father taught him the ways of the blacksmithing. Over the years he honed his skills and when he turned 28 he was a master blacksmith. When he was 40, and still a young man a rogue band of elves raided their house. The battle was long and costly and left his father’s arm shattered. And from that day he could no longer smith.

In later years Drong grew tired of their solitary life in the mountains. He asked his father permission to go back to the city and start his smithing legacy. His dad in his old age was weary of his son returning to the old ways, and denied him time and time again. When Drong turned 65 he and his father got in another heated argument over the subject. And after once again being denied all of Drong’s bottled rage burst, and he grabbed a hammer from the forge and smashed his father’s skull in. The act of killing gave him a sense of wonderment and accomplishment. He felt no guilt from the act and proceeded to go back to the city. In his travels he came upon an orphanage laden with supplies. Running low himself he decided the best course of action was to kill every child and nurse in the place and make off with their supplies. Again feeling no guilt he was unaffected by the act.

   Upon arriving in the city  he decided to renounce his ways to not raise suspicion. At this point in his life he was a taller than average dwarf strongly built, from years of worked the forges. His scares still cursed his body. He was 82 at this point. For his young age his beard was already quite long. He always wears his best armor while working to promote business. He solid face that is hard to read.   

What are your characters ambitions?:

To drink………a lot!

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

 

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:

Drong is semi known in his corner of the city and is respected by some. He wishes to find a new purpose in life and move to a up and coming kingdom.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

 

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

I see a poor dwarf merchant trying ,unsuccessfully, to sell his wares. Feeling pity for a fellow dwarf trying to do the same that I wish to do I walk over and say “how long have you been in the city my friend?”. He responded “only a few weeks , and I’ve made very little barely enough to pay my rent”. Feeling sorry for him I handed him a coin purse and said “this may help you get on your feet in this new world you ventured into” (hands him coin purse and proceeds to walk away.) In my exit I hear the sound of drawstrings opening and a quite sob. From behind me I hear a quite but yet audible “thank you” from the shopkeeper. The purse contained 300 Minas.

 

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

I see an Orc confronting a fellow dwarf. Knowing the grave situation for my brother I lurk in the darkness of the tress waiting for the right time to strike. When the violence breaks I wait until the Orc turns his back and I see my moment. Risking my life to save a fellow dwarf I burst from the tress screaming “FOR THE DWARFS!!!” and bash the Orc head from behind. After the orc recovered we still had a hard fight ahead of us. We double teamed him so he had to split his attention. The lessons I had learned from my abusive father made me stronger and I could sustain hits better and through consistient blows and teamwork we were able to knock the orc out and escape.   

 

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

While I was walking down the road I saw an old man fall and his coin purse fell into the road. Seeing an opportunity I kick the old man say “the roads are not a place for old men they can be dangerous”. As I pick up the coin purse he mumbles a slur toward me. Feeling his position does not warrant a power stance I turn once again and bash him in the head knocking him out cold. I bend down and whisper in his ear hoping he can still hear me “maybe next time you will remember your manners”. I then continued on my journey.http://imgur.com/0enXbjn

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

Your application has been...

 

Denied.

 

Reason(s):

 

Your power-emoting definiton is incorrect. Check the forums and/or Wikipedia or something like that and find the definition. But remember, don't plagiarize, write it in your own words.

 

The beginning of your biography is very vague. You say that your mother died at child birth, yet your mother has burried your father? And then your father is back later in your biography. I think that this is a mere typo, but I had to think for a bit as it was quite confusing.

 

Another thing with your biography, you say that you bashed your father's head in. This isn't allowed and requires a Villain Application.

 

Add some more dialogue to your second Open Response Question.

 

In your third Open Response Question you steal the old man's Minas, which also requires a Villain Application.

 

 

Please re-apply in 24 hours.

 

If you have any questions, please, don't hesitate to PM me.

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

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