[Denied]Tgwc's Application

[TGWC 8]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:TGWC
How old are you?:14
Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT:00/England
Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes.
Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:Yes.
Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes I have read and agreed to them.
How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: My friend told me about it and he said it looked great and it does.
Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:
Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :
 

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Taking on a role of someone who they are not.
In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Knowing that you are using an out of character action when you shouldn't be.
In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Saying out loud what your are going to do to another player e.g: Player 1- "I am going to kill you player 2" *Player 1 kills player 2*
 

In-Character Details

Character Name: Timothy
Character Race: Human
Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

 

Timothy is a 25 year old human. He has short black hair and a black beard and blue eyes.Timothy comes from the town of Mjolnir in the southern lands of Elysum. He grew up working with his Father, whose name is Charles, at his town's farm. He had a strong bond with his Mother and his little Sister, but those bonds were lost when a dangerous group of Orc bandits attacked Mjolnir.

 

Timothy and Charles were tending to the cows in the stable when they heard distant screams of children and women. They left the cows and realized the village was being attacked. Timothy was only 12 years of age when this happened. Charles instructed him to find his Mother and Sister, but when Timothy arrived at his home he found it burning to the ground. Within the rubble was his Mothers body, there was nothing Timothy could do to save her. He heard his name being called and turned around to witness his Sister being dragged away by the Orcs. Until this very day Jess, Timothy's sister, was never heard from again. 

 

Since Mjolnir had lost most of the citizens due to the Orc attack, Charles evacuated everybody out of the town and took Timothy to his Aunties village East of Mjolnir. To this very day Timothy has held a strong grudge against all Orcs and swears to protect anybody being threatened by an Orc. To prove this to himself he studied in the arts of battle and became a village guard. Now at the age of 25 Timothy leaves his Aunties village in search of a new adventure. 
 
What are your characters ambitions?: To protect the innocent, and to fend off threatening Orcs.
Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:
Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: I hope this is a good enough picture.
 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

 
Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

 

Say: "Here, friend. Have the coin that I can spare good Dwarf." Then I would walk away and just make sure he is okay.
 
You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

 

Seeing the Orc threatening the Dwarf reminds me of my past experience and I rush in and knock down the Orc. 
 
Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenseless man. What does your character do?:

 

I help up the old man and return all his money back to him. I then go shop to shop asking for walking sticks capable of holding an old mans weight. Then purchase is out of my minas thus helping the old man.

[Skippy 2466]

-All your definitions need to be more closer to the actual definition. -We have not been in Elysum for more than a year, causing your biography to break lore. You can simply change it so that your character was born in Asulon and those events happened there. -Your ORQ's are lacking greatly in detail and dialog. Reapply in 24 hours. PM me if you need any assistance.

[Skippy 2466]

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