[Denied]Dwarf Mrcool111 (Third Submission)

[TheLonleyMulch 1]

Minecraft Account Name: MrCool111

How old are you?: 13

Time-Zone: North American Eastern (American Central)

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: Role-playing console games such as Skyrim

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: Scrolling through PMC's role-playing servers

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/85100-dwarf-mrcool111/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/85158-dwarf-mrcool111/#entry739117

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): Yes

Have you read the Dwarven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: a change in character to conduct a role. Usually for a medieval time character.

Example: A person might work at a KFC on weekdays but is a barkeeper at a renaissance fair on the weekends.

Meta-gaming:
Out of character information and knowledge. Example: Editing your
characters behavior based on real life relationships.

Power-emoting:
abusive and overpowered chat actions and emotes. Example: *Jake casts a
spell and kills everyone* or *Rachael decapitates Jake and eats his
head*

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Yulri Agevor

Current Age: 13 seasons

Sub-race (if any):

Clan (if any):

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

Yulri Rcog Agevor was born in Kal’Karik by the mother of Yeri Vesriseld
Agevor and the father of Irmos Rcog Agevor into a miner village far
north of Karik. The village was small, only held about 100 dwarves and
was often the target of raids from bandits. His mother worked as a
barkeeper at the local tavern and his father worked as the clan’s
blacksmith; forging armor, weapons, and tools for the miners and
militiamen. Yulri’s education was limited to war training for fending
off the bandits. He started in his second season and during his third
year in war school, Yulri fended off a bandit raid with the help of his
friend Nandor Yelmi Ryd. And when he was done with the village’s war
training, he had great confidence to become a militiaman, but under his
father’s influence, he was forced to work in the mines at the season of
3. His friend Nandor joined the local militia and later became the head
of the village militia. He lead an exhibition to take care of the bandit
raids and died in combat.

Yulri would then mine for a good deal of his lifetime. He would mine by day,
taking every shift he could work, and forge by night, becoming his
father’s apprentice in his blacksmith job. And once work became too
much, he would turn to the local tavern where he would drink his cuts
and bruises away with a fine Blaze’s Brandy. But the more he worked, the
more he found himself at the tavern. Lucky for him, that same tavern
would be the place where he met his wife, Eileen Ang’dyny Itir. She was
the most beautiful and respected dwarf in the village, all men respected
her, even those who don’t respect respected her! She had gorgeous amber
eyes with red braided hair that was decorated with the most ravishing
gems. It was love at first sight, for him at least. It took awhile to
convince her to marry him. He brought her Red Roses and Blonde Blossoms
everyday after his mining shifts, he even learned to play the lute for
her, singing the most romantic songs to her at the tavern. And when he
was in his fifth season, she finally said yes. But in their sixth season
together, a bandit raid took Eileen’s life. Yulri never bounced back
from her loss and he now spends most of his nights at the local tavern,
drinking his sorrows away. He quit his job as a miner and took the head
blacksmith job when his dad died of Ki’katta. He now lives a lonely life
of smithing for the clan and late and frequent tavern visits.

Ambitions for the Future: To leave the village and move to Karik and forge armor and weapons for its army.

Personality:
Before his wife’s death, Yulri was a kind and cheerful dwarf, whistling
tunes as he worked and taking the extra working hours for his father.
But when his wife was killed by bandits, he became a bitter, rude, and
lonely dwarf who angers a bit too easy and has no friends. He back
mouths the bartender, stole gems from the mines that reminded him of his
late wife’s eyes, and curses at the villagers. Overall, though, he is a
tough dwarf who takes no orders from anyone.

Skills:
His skills started out as fighting when defending the village from
raids and attacks but it soon would become mining when his father forced
him to work in the village mine. Mining would be his primary skill
throughout his life with the additional blacksmith apprenticeship. But
when his father died, his smithing skills improved when he quit his
miner job and became the village blacksmith. Smithing is the only thing
he does now-a-days.

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one
paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as
descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any
point.

____

1.
Whilst mining deep in the undergrounds of Kalos you see a large deposit
of diamond ore at the other side of the ravine you are on. There is a
very thin rock bridge that looks precariously unstable, but it is the
only way to access the deposit. What do you do?

Answer:
Despite the unstable rock bridge, I'd carefully shimmy across the rock
bridge and mine the large diamond deposit. I’d then shimmy back across
and leave the mines immediately. Upon arriving at my home; I would store
the gems away or make use of them. I would probably forge a nice
diamond sword or a strong, mighty diamond helm, I might even decorate my
braided beard with them.

2.
You are sitting in the local tavern with a large pint of ale in your
hand - sitting nearby you is a rather young dwarf whom is clearly going
through a bad time. He is crying to himself, and clutching a small
wooden hammer toy. In the other corner of the room two shady dwarves are
sitting whispering to each other and pointing occasionally at the
dwarf. They stand up, one with a small dagger in his hand and begin to
approach the young dwarf. What do you do?

Answer:
It depends, if the shady dwarves were planning to give the dagger to
the young dwarf, then I'd mind my own business. If the were planning to
kill the young dwarf, I'd stand up, fists raised, and curse at them. Due
to the uncertainty of the matter, I'd fight them anyway. I’d also yell
out curses like “Ye craftless two-faced rust bucket, get o’er here an’
fight like a real dwarf!” and “Ye ladies ar’ so deid.” If I succeed in
the intimidation of the two shady dwarfs and they leave, I’d then walk
over to the young dwarf and maybe (If I’m in a really good mood, and I
mean extremely good mood. Like holy crap, how is Yulri in a good? mood)
pat him on the back and tell him “Oy! Everything is gaun tae be
a’right!” I’d then give him minas and then pay the barkeeper for my
drink and leave before I got feelings for the young dwarf.

3.
Whilst wandering through the Dwarven Caverns you hear a voice call out
to you; “Oi, ye’! C’mere n’ get ye’rself an ale!”. You spin on your heel
and see a heavily bearded bar-owner looking at you - a huge grin on his
face, and a mug of ale in his hand. How do you react?

Answer: I’d first yell

“Oy! Get oot! Ye get nae right bein’ here! Ye’ll get yer’self killed!” and after a long silence I would thenw say:

“Noo
gie me that ale an’ get yer’self oot ‘o here. An dae it afore ah make
ya!” He would then proceed with the giving of the ale, I’d then gulp it
down and continue my wandering of the Dwarven Caverns like nothing
happened. In fact, i’d probably forget the whole thing at my dayly visit
to the tavern with a large amount of Blaze’s Brandy

 

[ΩMercenΩ 67]

Your Application has been:

You're so close! I bet you'll get in on you're next app.

Reasoning for denial:

Your Bio lacks any lore whatsoever. Refrain from living in unnamed villages, use actual cities, flaunt your lore knowledge.

In your open responses, don't say 'I would' or 'If ____ happened'. Simply write out what you would do in character. Give us a glimpse of your RP, don't have a conversation with us.

 

PM me with any questions.

[ΩMercenΩ 67]

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