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Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as
possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.



Minecraft Account Name: worldiswar28

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone: Eastern Standard Time

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: YES I DO

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I love
LOTR as well as my friends and I have my own semi-RPG server temp shut down
cause of virus

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: 5 attempts on
YouTube finally came to dis

Link any applications that you have previously made for the
server:


 



4th and final: THIS for I have literally made all the changes
ski_king3 told me to do from the 3rd app.



3rd:     http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/85269-deniedapplicationmountaindwarf-worldiswar28-fimlin-app3/#entry740163



2nd:    http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/85068-applicationhuman-worldiswar28-evic-app2/    



1st:     http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/85022-deniedapplicationhuman-worldiswar28-hayden/ 



Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If
not, then please do so (link above):

Have you read the Dwarven lore, and shall you ensure you make
use of it and follow it in your biography?: YES THIS TIME 4 REAL :P SORRY



Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take
any definitions from elsewhere!:



Role-playing: when you play a character you aren't such as
W.O.W and basically create a person or be how you would want to be but aren't.
and you act as if this was real life                       Meta-gaming: when you use info your char. Has
no way of knowing like coords to a base or seeing someone’s tag underground or
like if you die and still keep that 30min memory

Power-emoting: when you use emotes to overrun another char. Actions
example: I kick Alfred to the floor and pin him he can’t react but he can still
RP god emoting is if you have no trouble doing this like I easily cut of Alfred’s
head. ((By the way I really did read the link))

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:



Full Name: Fimlin Shortaxe

Current Age: 41 seasons old

Sub-race (if any): Mountain Dwarf

Clan (if any): StormHammer ((most likely))

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): As a
young Dwarf he always was found of his father for he had one of the finest
blacksmiths around in his town and was well-known throughout it, and had taught
him how to smith mighty weapons. However one day everything changed Fimlen
being now 19 his father enlisted as a Dwarven Warrior. Saying 'I have all I’ve
wished for, a wonderful family and indeed a mighty son, but now it's time to
give back in my turn.' On that same day Fimlin knew he may never see his
wonderful father again so he went to the anvil and made a battle-axe for him.
The day he took it he was so happy for his son and said ‘may it bring me luck in
battle and maybe we shall cross paths one last time.’



His father had fought in a great battle, and when news of the victory met
Fimlin’s ears he was happy for he thought his beloved father had lived for even
though Iblees cursed all races the Aengals and Daemons blessed them with
strength and hardiness. Fimlin was 41 seasons then and when he learned his father
had not lived he was grieved and mourned for days. One day he heard a knock on
the door he quickly pulled himself together making sure not to show grief. He
opened the door to find a young dwarf around age 19 seasons maybe and said to
him ‘my father was a good friend of yours in battle, he told me to send this to
you.’ The young dwarf holds up a wrapped up axe and Fimlin takes it and slowly
as he unravels it he finds that it was his axe he had forged for his father at
age nineteen. As he gazes at this at wonder the young Dwarf said ‘he named it
Fala’s Detri however I was not informed why or what it means.’ Fimlin pays the
boy a small amount and sits back in his chair and thinks quietly to himself ‘my
turn has come.’ ((That is when I join and enlist in the Dwarven Military))

Ambitions for the Future: to take
his turn and fight for honor, valor, and fame and live to grow old and marry a
fine women and have a family of his own and keep all of his family history
secure.

Personality: Like most dwarves he is bulky
but reasonably strong and prefers a short battle-axe and close combat rather
than long spears or on a large plain. He is trusty to his kin and would never
hurt another dwarf. Also he is strong-hearted, hardy, and strong of mind but
also he’s stubborn, sometimes defiant and would never back down and last of all
quick to anger (as are most dwarves).

Skills: he is not so fast or swift with
a sword and has terrible aim with a bow but he does prefer close-combat ceiled
areas with a short-medium ranged battle-axe. Also his father had taught him how
to smith at a young age and he remains “the finest blacksmith in town” after
his father

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):



((Attachment sorry imgur no work and it wont let meh attach

screenshot but this should be enough))

 


 

 Like many mountain
dwarves Fimlin has fiery red hair with a long braided beard to keep it away
from his work as well as brown eyes. Also he has light skin, is 41 seasons old,
and his shoulders are his strongest part of his body (on the outside).  However he is somewhat ugly and obviously;
short



{This is the Athery’s Ascended texture pack 32x32 1.5.1 with
wood/obsidian switch with Faithful 32x32 because the wood and obsidian annoyed
me greatly}



Any other details you wish to share
about your character: thank you all for your great
servermanship or whatever J look forward to my 1st
battle.



Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be
answered with a minimum of one
paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at
any point.

____



1. Whilst mining deep in the
undergrounds of Kalos you see a large deposit of diamond ore at
the other side of the ravine you are on. There is a very thin rock bridge that looks
precariously unstable, but it is the
only way to access the deposit. What do you do?



Answer: As
I see the diamonds, shiny, and seemed in plenty. It would make a decent amount
of minas for me and my family. Thinking this and realizing the unstable bridge I’ve
seen earlier was the only way across.



The ravine is a long way down and part of it is directly
above molten magma spewing from the crack. There is no nearby water or time to
look in fear of others finding it. I now know that this bridge will either mean
plenty or a terrible fate. I’m scared to cross but no other dwarf will be as
reckless as me if I do so. Thinking of my family I slowly and cautiously
approach the bridge. As I look across I creep very cautiously knowing a pebble
falling would scare the hair off my chest. I have to go on so I shake it all
off and slowly creep until I meet the worst.



I look down and see that this is the part of the bridge
above the magma fissure. I realize the next half of the bridge, is gravel. I
knew this is what I was doomed to do but no mortal dwarf can simply defy fate
so if this is mine so be it. Now I’m within a spear’s range of the diamonds but
a small stone falls and it hits the bridge. I quickly look behind the bridge is
collapsing! I run but it’s too late my feet met no ground feeling as if I’m in
a dream I grab a small hold in the last eighth of the bridge barely holding on.
More rocks crack I hear sizzling magma beneath me and a small stone hits my
right shoulder, my dominant arm. I lose my grip and now only rely on my left
arm to pull my weight and ever so slowly I’ll slip off into the boiling hot
magma. Then the luckiest thing happened a decent size chunk of rock fell off
the bridge making a perfect hold. Seeing this last-minute luck I seize the
chance and slowly I muster all the strength in my left shoulder and pull myself
to safety. In a daze feeling like I’m in a dream I walk down to the diamond
deposit and just collapse against a nearby cave wall tiredly and in a hazy
thought thinking ‘victory at last.’



2. You are sitting in the local tavern with a large pint of
ale in your hand -
sitting nearby you is a rather young dwarf whom is clearly going through a bad time. He is
crying to himself, and
clutching a small wooden hammer toy. In the other corner of the room two shady dwarves are sitting
whispering to each other and pointing occasionally at the dwarf. They stand up, one with a small dagger in his
hand and begin
to approach the young dwarf. What do you do?



Answer: I
see a the young dwarf sad and obviously is having a bad time. As I see the two
shady mean-looking dwarves walking up to the young dwarf and my eye catches a
glint of steel dagger. Seeing this I am horrified for most dwarves are loyal to
their kin and wouldn’t dare think of hurting them. Thinking back to my near
deadly feat at the Kalos mines yesterday I go back into that hazy dream kind of
thought and as one of the dwarves was about to uncover his dagger I get up and
hastily walk over to the young dwarf. He looks up at me, his brown eyes filled
with tears, and fear but I mean no harm. He quietly and hesitantly asks ‘What
do ye want?’ and I say back; ‘well I’ve only come to offer to buy ya a mug of
ale dat’s all.’ He rather had a strange expression on his face wondering why I
would do this so I do a slight motion to the two shady figures who were now
walking back to their seats for they would not bother fighting both. I looked
back at him and he knew, he saw the silver glint of the dwarves’ dagger and
turned back to me and said; ‘well alright den.’



3. Whilst wandering through the Dwarven Caverns you hear a voice call out to you; “Oi, ye’! C’mere n’ get ye’rself
an ale!” You
spin on your heel and see a heavily bearded bar-owner looking at you - a
huge grin on his face, and a
mug of ale in his hand. How do you react?



Answer: I
look around marveling and enjoying my visit to the caves and then I hear a man
say; ‘Oi,
ye’! C’mere n’ get ye’rself an ale!’ I turn around seeing a heavily bearded bar-owner
looking at you - a huge grin on
his face, and a mug of ale in his
hand. Aye dwarves make the finest of ale for its dwarf
tradition to drink ale so I say back; ‘Aye what dwarf of the caves or mountains
would reject ale from such a dwarf as you!’ ‘Aye ladie c’mere, 12 minas for my
finest ale that I brew here.’ I very interested in this heavily bearded dwarf’s
“finest ale” pull out 12 minas from my pocket and hand him the money. He gives
me the mug of ale and goes back inside to get his own cup and toasts ‘to the
mountains’ and I respond back ‘to the mountains’ and clash together our mugs
splashing out a little ale as we toast. Then the contest begins we chug down
our ale as it is a Dwarven custom and long known culture and tradition.



The contest ends in a tie however the bar-owner had a louder
“burp”. The bar-owner breaks the short-lived silence and says ‘my name is
Dunlain Stoneaxe by the way, what’s yours aye?’ I said back ‘meh name is Fimlin
Shortaxe.’ After that we both have another round and laugh loudly and had many
conversations between our families to our craftsmanship. we have quite a merry
time and at last he asks a question that had changed what I would do in my near
future. Dunlain asked ‘So what ya ben up ta lately?’ I think back to the news
of my father and tell him the whole story of my father and Fala’s Detri and my
near death at the Kalos mines. At last when I finished Dunlain seemed
interested and asked; ‘why don’t ya take afta ya father’s legend an enlist in
da military?’ I was very shocked but then I respond; ‘and what if I shall not
return?’ Dunlain stood up and said; if ya go enlist I’ll go with ya and fight
as well’ I was shocked even more at this and then at last I said ‘agreed.’ ((This
is exactly what happened before I’m accepted))



 

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