[Denied][Elf] Analith Findel

[bob_raider11 2]

[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: bob_raider11
How old are you?: 14
Time-Zone: EST (GMT -4:00)
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: Little to none
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: My friend
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: N/A
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): Yes
Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: to act as a non/fictional character that is being portrayed
Meta-gaming: Using information gained from outside sources and applying them in game 
Power-emoting:  Using an emote that lets the other player react/role play 

 

ex. Player 1 attacks player 2

     (not player 1 attacks player 2 and kills him)

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Analith Findel
Current Age: 60(youngling)
Sub-race (if any): Wood Elf
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

 

Analith was one of the few younglings in his home town in the Forests of Malinor. He was raised by his mother and knows not of the existence of his father, who left on a supposedly great quest that would bring great fame. His mother Heldis Findel taught him all the great things he should know; honor, truth, humility, and manners. Since his father's disappearance, Analith has held true to these things. He is the only person his mother has now who is growing very old. Analith makes a living by hunting and selling his leather and other wares to the traders in Aegis in exchange for minas. 

 

One day his mother got terribly sick and Analith went on a search for a shaman that could be of help in the center of the city Aegis. Once he came back his few friends told him of the poor fate of his mother, the last of his family. He had been to late. Since that day Analith made a vow to help all those in need, whether they be the poor or of the highest ranks. He still keeps the few things his mother taught him, as they are the last memories of his mother.
Ambitions for the Future: To find a job, help all in need, and to serve the city of Aegis
Personality: Humble, caring, strong-hearted, and helpful
Skills: Good with a bow and sword, survival skills, stealth, and speech skills.
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):

Gray hair (dyed)

Black tunic

Brown pants

Golden quiver

Brown Sash

 

Any other details you wish to share about your character: N/A

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
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[b]1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of older elves are mocking a small elven child. How do you react?[/b]

Answer: Slowly approach and ask why they are mocking the small child. I tell  them that they should be a good example and show some respect no matter the age of someone. if they attack I will protect myself and only my self. If they continue mocking I will go to the city and report it to the Sentinels.

[b]2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?[/b]

Answer: I help him up and give him his gold back.(there is no need for thievery) I then help him travel to the nearest town and go on my way.

[b]3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).

Answer:

 

Analith - "Do you sell some leather and arrows here, good sir?

 

Merchant - "Why yes I do, I do sell just about everything!"

 

Analith - "How much for a quiver full (a stack) and the leather?"

 

Merchant - "Hmmm, for the arrows it'll be 20 minas and for the 2 pieces of leather it'll be 15 minas."

 

Analith - *You examine the state of the cart and the clothing of the man and they seem a bit worn* "Here you go, (you hand him 40 minas) have safe travels!" (you start walking away)

 

Merchant - "The total was 35 minas though! Take your change!"

 

Anallth - "Don't worry about it, it looks like you'll need it!"

[Queen of Aegis 174]

 

- power-emoting definition is wrong

- Biography is too short and lacks server lore

- There is no city called Aegis, Aegis was a world

- You don't explain in the biography how you got your skills, who taught you them?

- The ORQ's are not a matter of 'IF' but what actually happens, that is what you decide

- 1st ORQ is too short and lacks dialog

- 2nd ORQ is too short and lacks dialog

 

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If you have any questions feel free to PM me

 

~BoomBox~

 

P.S

 

 You are my 200th verdict!   

WOOT!

[Queen of Aegis 174]

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