Kaldo's Kharajyr Application

[Malaise 1570]

[ShadowoKing 86]

Denied

Here is the following of reasons why you were denied:

• Your application is half completed, you skipped some of the questions.
• This is not major but you are mixing the premix if you think Ser' is. That is incorrect, when you add the proper premix, I recommend making Ser'verae to Serverae.
• Stealing is against rules why was he not caught, thats not much of a proper reason to steal and the community is good with food, but not fish.
• Do not mix character ambitions with OOC ambitions.
• The answer for 'What is the personality...' is at the wrong question it is suppose to be with 'Character appearance' as well recommend adding age to your answer.

[Malaise 1570]

I see the applications half answered now. I apologize for that, I assure you it shouldn't be as I completed it. I will re-post it soon enough, complete with the revisions you require. (The application was submitted when I had attempted to TAB indent, and had entered the submission into the forums by accident.

The proper application has been posted in the forums, along with the revisions I originally made to the story, after re-reading the lore, and before posting this monster of an application.

[Princeton 396]

Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.