[Denied][Elf] Draxagon

[H 820]

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[cruzazul 2815]

 

Unfortunately your application has been denied. Here are some things that need to be improved if you are wanting to re-apply in the future.

 

Your definitions are partially correct, but short. Try to add examples to them so I am 100% sure that you know them.

 

Your biography is very short and lacks server lore. Make sure you make is less vague and read up on the lore so you have an idea of what Lord of the Craft is like before you start roleplaying. If you need help finding the lore page check here.

 

You could describe your character in more detail. With what you have said I do not really get a good picture of how he looks, thinks, and acts. Add onto that and explain even the minor details. They can help a lot when describing your character in general. Painting the reader a picture when listing the tenancies and personality as well as look of your character can be an enormous help when trying to understand what your character is.

 

Your ORQs are too short and need to be expanded on. Try to add dialogue to them as well.

 

 

Please wait 24 hours from this denial before reapplying. If you have any questions don't be afraid to send me a message.

[cruzazul 2815]

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