[Denied]Lil_Kells [Orc] Application Take 2

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Out of Character Information:

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

 

Minecraft Account Name: Lil_Kells

 

How old are you: 16

 

Time-Zone: EST

 

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes

 

What previous experience have you had role-playing: None but would like to get in to it.

 

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: Internet :) 

 

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so.

 

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/91256-deniedlil-kells-orc-application/

 

Have you read the Orcish Lore, and shall make use of it and follow it in your biography? Yes

 

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!

 

Role-Playing: Creating a fictional character and impersonating him/her. 

 

Meta-Gaming: When information from outside that your character could not know is put in to play.

 

Power-Emoting: Doing something that other players can not respond to.

 For example, saying that you then stabbed and killed another player without letting them have any say or response to it.

 

In-Character Information: 

Complete the following biography on your character:

 

Full Name: Grog the Wise

 

Current Age: 27

 

Clan: He came from a Orog clan that had no true name.

 

Past/History (Include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

 

 

       Grog was born in the sandy dunes of the desert in Anthos where he lived with his dim-witted mother and father. As a child Grog felt as if he didn't fit in to the Orog Clan from which he came from. He came to realize that although he loved fighting and crushing others skulls in, he was smarter and more sophisticated than most Orcs. Grog loved to think of new ways to fight, new fighting tactics, and strategies for war which is the reason he earned the name Grog the Wise. 

 

      Early on in his life Grog decided to leave his mother and father to live on his own since he felt his parents were holding him back from his full potential. Alone in his house, Grog developed skills that most orog orcs wouldn't even dream of having such as reading and writing. Grog trained hours upon hours practicing his fighting skill but he was just an okay fighter, he knew he could never become a great warrior. This is why he became the clan tactician.

 

     Eventually a war arose between Grog's clan and another small orc clan of the desert. Using Grog's strategy the war was quickly ended with very few casualties for Grog's clan. The clan cheered "Grog the Wise" and all night long they feasted and dined on the finest of foods in the desert. It was during this time that they came, it happened all so suddenly. A clan of dwarves who dwelled in the caves of the desert came and murdered the entire clan. Luckily, Grog was able to slip away. Now Grog the Wise roams the Realm of Anthos hoping to find a new home in which he can use his unique orcish abilities.

 

 

Ambitions for the Future: To find a clan in which he can use the strategies and tactics that he developed over his life and eventually become a clan tactician once again.

 

Personality: Grog is a very grim and serious character who doesn't joke around. He enjoys creating strategies for war and fighting.

 

Skills: Fighting, Reading, Writing, Creating Strategies, and is strong enough to do basic tasks such as mining and woodcutting.

 

Appearance: I cannot figure out how to show my appearance but here is a link!!!! 

http://www.minecraft...in/1816674/orc/

 

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]

[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]

 

1. You are roaming the mighty capital of the War Nation Of Uruks, as you near the Arena you spot an Orc, wearing what seems to be human garbs as he looks at you he smiles and say out loud in common not in blah “Come friend let me teach you of civilization and break your mind from this orcish savagery!”, how do you react?

 

Answer: I charge at the traitorous orc and try to put my blade deep in to his chest. The orc quickly stepped aside and drew out a blade he had sheathed on his back. The orc and I went back  swinging, slashing, and blocking until finally a guard came over and stopped the fight. The guard made each orc tell their sides of the story. The whitewash Orc lied and and said that Grog randomly charged at him, but Grog was too smart and told the guard the story in a way that the guard had to believe him and in a blink of an eye the guard's axe was deep inside the head of the whitewash. Grog then spit on the unmoving body of traitorous orc and walked away getting back to his search for  a clan.

 

2. As you are watching an Arena fight between two Orcs, the Goj of Krug walks towards the Arena, and shouts “Mi brudderz da Feztivel ob Krug iz coummeh! We needz zacrifizez tu zummun da Zpirit ob Krug un diz uzg, go gadder da Warbandz nd raid da landz nd bring mi buck zacrifizez, twiggy nd pinky dat we kan zlauhater upun da alter ob Krug nuw go mi Brudderz!” How do you react to this?

 

Answer:  Knowing my inferior position to the Goj of Krug, I obey, and go to gather the sacrifices for the upcoming ceremony. As I travel out I see a bunch of orcs sitting down refusing to go gather sacrifices like all the other orcs. Knowing that it will not be possible to force them to go get the sacrifices, I decided to trick them. I quickly jump in to a nearby bush and talk in a very quiet, ghostly manner. I tell them how if they do not follow the Goj of Krug's commands they will face horrible consequences.The group of orcs, thinking that I was a spirit, quickly jump and run to go gather sacrifices. Seeing that the group is gone, I get out of the bush and go to search for a good sacrifice for the festival.

 

3. As you are travelling in the barren Orcish deserts you come across a quiet oasis. Beside it sits a small tent where a young orc is preparing a meal of roasted halfling. He calls you over, offering you to join in with his meal. What does your character do?

 

 Answer: I join the young orc to dine on the roasted halfling. As we sit down we start to talk and he tells me about how he ran away from his clan because he didn't like the hate to all other races that orc's held. I start to argue with him, I said "the dwarves are greedy, the elves just hide in their forests, and the humans just want to get in to everyone's business." The young orc argued "Wut abot da orcs? We are sabages!"  I couldn't take this orcs insults to his own race, my race, so I quickly drew out my sword and put it right in to the top of his head. I finished my dinner, along with his and left to continue my journey.

[cruzazul 2815]

 

You did not wait the full 24 hours from when your last application was denied. It is not 24 hours from when the app was posted but 24 hours from when it was reviewed. Please make sure you wait the full 24 hours from when this post was made before you apply again. If you have any questions don't be afraid to send me a message.

[cruzazul 2815]

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