[Denied] A Eleven Hero (New Applicant Try4 )

[ninjaarcherdude 0]

b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name:ninjaarcherdude
How old are you?: 12
Time-Zone: Eastern Time Zone
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I have been on many servers and constantly rp in real life
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I was looking for a rp server that would full fill my needs
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: http://www.lordofthe...-new-applicant/    

http://www.lordofthe...pplicant-try-2/  http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/94469-denieda-eleven-hero-new-applicant-try-3/
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): Yes
Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: Being completely different in real life then your character

Meta-gaming :Knowing something in real life that my character doesn't that may or may not affect the story
Power-emoting:  Forcing someone else's actions through your words.
In-Character Information: 
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Jacob Falcon
Current Age: 49
Sub-race (if any):
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):As a small child Jacob Falcon wasn't liked and to this day he still isn't  People still hate him but of course, the people who hate him know are mostly people attempting to kill him rather than asking for assistance. Now, he doesn't live in a village as he left in order to find people who would finally understand and respect him. He now works as an assassin taking out people who would rather see the entire world die out rather than making peace. He is incredibly stealthy and talks next to none while on a mission.

As an orphan, Jacob learned pretty quickly that no one in his current village would like him,so he learned how to hunt and how to fend for him self. He also decided it would be better to be stealthy and not draw attention to himself. He decides to be quiet and not talk much. He talks at key moments in time, and he isn't mute, but his life has been to traumatizing for him to speak much...So at the moment things seem to be going fine for Jacob Falcon (He prefers to be called Jake). He is in love with a girl named Ashley and his parents are safe for now. Wait why did i say for now? Because a band of Dark Elves are going after Jake's parents. Why? The reason is unknown. However Jacob is convinced that the reason lies in Anthos. So he has left his girlfriend (Ashley) back in his home village and set off for the world of Anthos. Since then he has given up the life of assassins and now live a bit more peacefully then before, however he does not pass up the opportunity to help someone in need. He currently works as a  Sentinel as he can sometimes here tidbits about stuff that's going on. So, his soulstone had protected him until the age of 40. And now, unfortunately, the magic has died. And he is no longer protected, which scares him. As he was never raised to be a fighter, but a runner. But that all changed when Jacob was almost killed due to 1000's of bandits. And of course, Ashley had to swing in and make his life more complex...
Ambitions for the Future: Figuring out why his parents are being hunted.  And why he's hated.
Personality: Ambitious, Modest, and carrying as with stealthy and deadly
Skills:Morale boost, rapid fire arrows, and knife throwing.
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):
Any other details you wish to share about your character: He has a scar on his back from when he was 16 years old and stabbed by a band of thief's  and it sometimes cause's him immense pain which sometimes even prevents him from moving.

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
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[b]1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Uponinspection you realize that a group of older elves are mocking a small elven child. How do you react?[/b]

Answer: Jacob: "Hey, elders back off the kid. NOW" Elder's: "Whatcha going to do about it. Your just another hated elf. You cant touch us!" Jacob "You wanna fight for the kid, Ill fight, but i cant promise you guys will be able to stand up again." Elders: "You don't scare us! Come on guys lets teach him to respect hiss Elders!" Jacob: "I'm warning you. Don't. You wont like the out come. I promise" All of a sudden, all the Elders attack and 1 by 1 they charge. Jacob pulls out his short, duel sword's and and 1 by 1 they receive a scar on their face. However, the elders stand right back up again a  continue to charge. However, this cycle stops once Jacob begins to leap from tree to tree and jumps in the air and slams on the ground HARD with his sword. The elders stumble back and realize that charging will no longer work. This is great new for Jacob, But he has been fighting for about one and a half hours, and is beginning to feel weak. So Jacob switches his sword over to bow mode, and perches himself on a tree. From his position, he begins to snipe one of the elders. Of the first 4 elders, only 3 remain. So, Jacob finally snipes down one elder as the final 3 (or now 2) elders began climbing up the tree. Jacob understands that a bow will no longer cut it and switches over to sword mode. However now its been 2 and a half hours since the fight begin, and he cant keep it up much longer. And the scar on his back is beginning to prevent him from moving as fast.

 A soon as one climbs up Jacob greets him and uses his sword to cut the branch that the elder is on, Causing the elder to fall to his death. However, the last elder sneaks up behind Jacob and stabs him off. As Jacob is falling, the elder rises his sword too, and jumps down going directly for Jacob. Jacob notices this action and uses all his will to make a branch hit the elder JUST enough so that the elder  looses his balance and falls to his death. Jacob uses his sword, and stabs it into the tree and begins to slow his desert. Once at the bottom, Jacob finds the kid has ran away. Jacob  thinks to himself: "Smart kid. For a second there, I didn't even think i would make it out alive".
 Then, out of nowhere, Jacob feels 4 great blades, all at once, go through his back. The only thing Jacob though about on his way to death, was, after 48 years of running and barley staying alive , this where i die. Mulilple tears fall down Jacobs face, and then out of nowhere, Ashley comes in and grabs Jacob. And Jacob is brought to a medic tent and almost dies, but because he has too much to live for, he clings on and makes it.

[b]2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. Hecollapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there,defenseless - what do you do?[/b]

Answer: Jacob runs over to the old man. Grabs the old man and put's him on his shoulder.He notices a stab wound and decides to heal it with the last peace of cloth that he was saving for himself. He puts the old man down and collects his coins, and puts 50 more in as well. He go's back to the old man, and puts him on his shoulder and go's tree to tree to the nearest village and drops the old man at a healers tent, and leave's the sack with the old man. Old Man: "Oh. Are you... the one who saved me?" Jacob: "Yes." Old Man: "What's your name young man?" Jacob: "My name? Jacob Falcon. The Archer division for the elf army, at your pleasure." Old Man: 'Wait. I hate you! Get out, get out , GET OUT. HELP SOMEONE PLEASE SOMEONE ANYONE ELSE HELP ME PLEASE!"
 

[b]3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).

Answer: Jacob; "What do you got." Trader: "I've got  rapid fire bows, long swords, short, duel swords, gems, arrows, slaves, Magic scrolls, and many more!" Jacob: Wait you've got slaves? You understand that i should probably turn you in right now right?" Trader: "Please don't! I'm only doing this for my family. If you don't turn me in I'll do what ever you say. I promise!" Jacob: "Anything?" Trader: "Anything" Jacob: "Fine. Release the slaves. NOW." Trader: "But!" Jacob: "NOW" Jacob takes sword out of his sheath and puts it up to the Traders neck. Trader: "Okay okay. I release them." Jacob: "And i would like to have "your" Falcon family sword." Trader: "Okay. That will be 450 gold coins." Jacob: "How about free for two reasons. One that's MY SWORD. And two i will kill you if you don't" Trader: "Fine fine. Here you go. Jacob holds the blade in his hand. It's so agile and light, but packs a PUNCH Jacob: "And sir?" Trader: "Yes?" Jacob: "How long were those slaves with you?" Trader: "I don't know maybe a week?" Jacob: "Hmm well, you've got a family right?" Trader: "Yes" Jacob: 'My last request is that you tell them. And if you don't." Takes out sword and "misses" the merchant. Jacob: "That tomato that i just killed? Will be you!

So I'm not quite sure why but it kept saying that my skin upload had failed so here's a link to a app in which the upload did work: http://www.lordofthe...pplicant-try-2/

Now please don't rage at me for posting twice on the forums. I didn't think the post went through and i had updated my app so i had decided it would be better to re post and say I'm sorry in advance, rather than being told i cannot join because people couldn't find my post, and waiting another 24 hours as i would love to begin the role play as i have been nerding out for the last 2 days hoping that i got in. Thanks for your time

 

[Tsuyose 3285]

 

Apologies for this denial  you haven't waited the full 24 hours thus I have had to deny your application. Though, your application was great, I believe it could still do with some work. Perhaps you should work around the biography and add some more into it. Four blades into ones back doesn't sound like you'd make it out alive. I also believe that you should work on one of your ORQ's and put more detail into it, please. Please wait the full 24 hours. Thank you, and good luck next time! If you have any questions, please PM me.

[Tsuyose 3285]

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